~ A Moment of Parting ~

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    الصورة الرمزية BLaCK-BuLLeT

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    افتراضي ~ A Moment of Parting ~

    In the name of God, Most Gracious, Most Merciful


    The most painful thing in this life is farewell..
    The most painful word is saying "Gooodbye" to someone you love him..
    The most painful moment is "the moment of parting" !!


    Last year, I lived that moment more than one time. After that, I wrote a song contain poem about that moments so sadly. I can't forgot those moments until now, when we lose someone we loved him
    so much. This year, I lived that moment again then remembered that poem again. I'd like to share it with you..


    "A Moment of Parting"

    The moments of parting..
    what is your feeling guys,
    when a thing split to two? ?
    It's a very hard feeling
    like a big injury bleeding!
    A moment of parting,
    broke my body to parts
    A moment of parting,
    my heart is suffering too much!
    Sorry my dear
    I'm a big loser now
    Listen my love, ,
    that wasn't my choice
    to going away,
    and leaving you there
    I loved you truly,
    I loved you so much

    Listen to my voice
    I miss really!
    Listen to a sad scream
    that makes a big noise!
    Listen to that pen,
    which writing too much,
    when the talking being so hard
    Listen to those sounds,
    which came from the near lakes
    A tears like rains,
    that falls quickly
    lakes of tears,
    inside my broken heart
    I mute those tears
    by the walls of my heart
    but it surely will be there
    like a secret in my heart
    I'm trying to be a good example
    by being a very coherent
    Because if I collapsed
    the others will collapsing too

    A moment of parting,
    a thing split to things
    A moment of parting,
    broke a body to parts
    A moment of parting,
    the heart is suffering too much!

    Listen to that mouth,
    which said: I'm silent
    I can't speak now
    my tongue freezes!
    How can he explain,
    'how sad I am'?
    How can he express
    'how sorry I am'?
    Without you now
    I feeling my self,
    like an old man was lost,
    in a giant desert
    looking for a river
    to drink and rest
    how can he live,
    all this time alive? ?
    the river isn't there
    but it is in somewhere
    away from the man
    the life will so hard
    and the pathetic man,
    surely he will missing
    what makes him alive

    A moment of parting,
    a thing split to things
    A moment of parting,
    broke a body to parts
    A moment of parting,
    the heart is suffering too much!

    After the moment of parting
    maybe you wondered,
    why I am laughing
    although you were crying? ?
    I'm laughing.. Yeah, , I'm laughing!
    You want to know why I was laughing?
    I'll tell you why I am laughing,
    I'm laughing to hide my weeping!
    I weep when the tears are coming
    My tears about to fail
    in every second or a day
    when remembered in it that moments
    when I forced to going away
    and leaving you there
    then miss you so much
    like that old desert man

    I feeling sad in every time,
    I remembered those latest moments
    The moments of parting
    but at the same time
    memories make me so happy
    as if we were together..
    what ever.. I wish you're fine
    your happiness makes me so happy
    and sadness makes me so sad!
    don't care about me
    and take care of yourself please
    that is my only request
    you're more important
    for me and for all those people
    who really loved you
    keep moving forward
    but don't forget me please

    A moment of parting

    A moment of parting,
    when I said 'Bye'
    I'll never say 'Goodbye'
    Do you know why?
    The friends never say
    the word which called 'goodbye'
    and I looking forward to
    that day when I meeting you
    a kissing and shaking hands
    and saying: I'm very happy now
    to seeing you again
    that is so right
    let's forget all grief
    and smiling with all the hope
    that the day of happiness
    inevitably will come one day
    when all wishes fulfilled
    to you and me
    and everybody we love
    Lets try smiling
    and try to keep moving
    until the friends meet
    each other again
    imagine with me
    how the world can be
    with the help of you and me

    The period of parting
    surely will ending
    one day...


    Me on poemhunter:
    http://www.poemhunter.com/abdurrahman-ruslan/poems/

    Best Wishes
    Black Bullet
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة BLaCK-BuLLeT ; 14-3-2012 الساعة 10:02 PM

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    افتراضي رد: ~ A Moment of Parting ~

    Peace upon you brother

    I'm not a big fan of poetry
    but I saw the link in your signature and here I am !

    and after reading these lines I have to say that
    they are good, pure and touching
    and I liked the ending, it reminded me of the quote
    " .it's always darkest before the dawn "



    After the moment of parting

    all you have to do is
    " Survive "
    after all, the word "parting" is one of the top on my black list :P
    and I hope you won't face it too much in your life

    and thank you for this topic, and keep your work up

    P.s : I didn't realize that your name has been changed
    so when I read black bullet, I thought it was a symbol or something
    and didn't really get it :P
    then I saw your new name in the thanking board
    and things started to get clear to me !

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    الصورة الرمزية Schwert

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    افتراضي رد: ~ A Moment of Parting ~

    Hallo Brother
    I frankly read all ur poem
    it is really very good but it expresses sadness
    that's its title anyway, sad story of two friends forced to be away from each other, that's the life, you should suffer and can't be escaped from that
    I liked the part of an old man in a desert, that was nice expression in your poem and really expressive
    generally and no doubt you have the talent of writing but I think you need to develop it a little more and if oyu can have a look at englisch literature poems, I think it probably encourages you and there may be becomes a challenge between you and that kind of art
    I'd thank you for ur a piece of art who you presented here and wish for you the best and also get a meeting with the absence dear; )1
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Schwert ; 9-7-2012 الساعة 09:02 PM

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    افتراضي رد: ~ A Moment of Parting ~

    Thank you very much mirhan, Schwert for your interaction and thoughts =)

    Best Wishes
    BLaCK-BuLLeT


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