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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : As I Walk



mohbaboo
24-8-2009, 08:41 PM
as I walk everyday in the ally
I keep falling deep in the Valley
the Valley of lies and false hopes
looking for peace and zero doubts
I keep looking into my watch
intensively like a referee in a football match
I live the man's dreams
in a world full of hunger's screams
a world of wars and racism
hoping one day I'll have optimism
I try to live my life looking forward
but I fail and walk backward
the life's holding me in
trapped in my unspeakable sin
as I walk on my road of happiness
I counter countless obstacles
some can defeat the strongest man
but also grow a stronger man
that's in short who I am
a stronger man is who I became
End

لحن العذاب
24-8-2009, 09:12 PM
Life is full of difficulties we have overcome and to move forward


And to fight life, including us and be our own


Thank you for this Pat and wait for new

موديا1992
24-8-2009, 09:38 PM
Great words , you're actually strong man ..
but use your powerful in good stuff & destroy the evils sources
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Thank you bro ... ! :)









Mudia

Harry Potter
24-8-2009, 10:15 PM
Wow! Great Words


I liked This Part


I live the man's dreams
in a world full of hunger's screams

Rainbow Star
25-8-2009, 12:09 AM
wow
you are great writer

this is so good
growing stronger


thanx

mohbaboo
25-8-2009, 03:58 AM
thank you everyone for reading my humble thoughts and appreciate your comments