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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : !... ::: The REAL Friend ::: ...!



Jasmine..!
21-11-2010, 07:27 AM
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته ,,


Hello , members of MSOMS - Anime .net

This is my first topic in this forum ^^ :Smile:

~ I would like to show you some words i wrote it

About friends .... REAL friends described in a few lines ...!! Let‘s start ^^


It‘s great to have a friend who supports you to develop your faith •
Praying together , help each other , always remind you of Allah
Being one hand in good stuff..


. It‘s great to have a friend who advises you when he saw something wrong from you •


. It‘s great to have A friend whoes always honest with you in every thing •


.It‘s great to have A friend who does not break promises •


. It‘s great to have A friend who stands with you in necessary times •


. And It‘s great to have A friend who talks about you in good when you are absent •



. ( تعالى Finally - Let‘s make our friendships ( loved ones in Allah ~
With friendships like that …]
you will win that mate in this world and paradise
…( في الدنيا والآخرة ) .... اللهم آمين ...



Note : I used the dictionary little bet ^^”

[Hope
You get interest ^^

في حفظِ الله تعالى

أسمـــاء
21-11-2010, 05:13 PM
Hello
welcome in the forum dear sis ^^
I really agree with you and I know that everyone wants to win such friendship
your writing is pretty and expressiveIcon-yes0
but after your permission I wanna fix some mistakes




It‘s great to have a friend who supports you to develop your faith •
Praying together , help each other , always remind you of Allah
Being one hand in good stuff..


. It‘s great to have a friend who advises you when he sees something wrong from you •


. It‘s great to have A friend whose always honest with you in every thing •


.It‘s great to have A friend who levy promises •


. It‘s great to have A friend who stands with you in necessary times •


. And It‘s great to have A friend who talks about you in good when you're absent

.................................

It's only some grammatical mistakes and use of words like levy
I think it's not the proper word in this text coz it means demanding things by force
so I think you can say :
to have a friend who doesn't break promises .....







I hope I didn't bother:)
good luck

Jasmine..!
21-11-2010, 10:24 PM
Dear Azuma welcome in my topic ^^

thank you for fixing my mistakes ^^

تعالى In the care of Allah

Schwert
24-11-2010, 06:25 PM
W\Salam sister
admired me read ur topic, it's really impressive
u have put beautiful attributes which express real friendship and its beauty
a friend word is a big word means many things and has high valuable among who know it good
I keep a say about friendship admires me: a real friend isn't only who hold ur hand but also touch ur heart
many thanks sis for this topic and welcome here in EF(English Forum)1
keep going

Jasmine..!
25-11-2010, 05:59 AM
Thank u brother 4 your comment ^^

and there is more إن شاء الله تعآلى ...

في حفظِ الله تعالى ..

mohbaboo
25-11-2010, 05:34 PM
nicely put
thank you for every word you wrote

hope to see more topics from you here

MB

Ls460L
25-11-2010, 06:26 PM
Thanks a lot for your words that are detailed and precise more than enough
and about the thread :that really every one needs to have such a friend whom one shares with you the pains and joys


Thanks You

Ls460L

weaami
25-11-2010, 06:36 PM
السلام عليكم

you know what
sometimes I feel too sick
to have friends
they let me down

too bad that I never meet afriend like you said
,but nice to meet you and you know these lines
go ahead
في أمان الله,..

Jasmine..!
26-11-2010, 07:24 AM
mohbaboo
Thank 4 your comment ^^

welcome n my topic ...

إن شاءَ الله تعالى ..


Ls460L
thank u for your comment brother
,,,

في حفظِ الله تعالى ...


black211
وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته ...
Hi dear sis ^^
welcome n the topic ^^

sometimes I feel too sick "
to have friends
" they let me down

you are absolutely right ^^

I am glad you being in
my topic ^^

في حفظٍ الله تعالى ...

دريرة
2-12-2010, 05:34 PM
yes.....haveing a REAL friend makes you feel the reason of life

thanx alot for those great lines

hope to see more