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9-3-2009, 10:30 PM
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Reading stories is the most interesting thing for most of us .. ever since we were children ,
we used to have mom telling
us stories befor sleeping ...and sometimes we brought her an exciting book
full of short stories and ask
her to read for us to fly away with our imagination by listening to them .
but, what if we , ourselves make these exciting stories .. creat characters .. control the events


and give our creativity the
freedome to build something unexpected...something brilliant on our own



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Make your own story....



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The way we apply this idea :
i will begin the introduction of the story by my own words
then each one comes after me will complete from the point in which i stopped by his won way and own words
so, he completes the events as he wants so that you have the right to creat your story ...
the one comes after will complete as shown on the same way
untill the end of the story


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The rules :


Do not go past the religious rules as well as morals*
.....
Describing immoral romantic scenes or political matters*
are
not allowed


. .. Do not complete from the point where you stopped*
leave a chance for others .. so that the story will be completed by different persons



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the purpose of this story:
to increase your creativity, enlarge your vocabulary , improving your reading skill and having fun




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(Let us trust each other and work together)


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The clock struck twelve…
every thing seemed silent , dark
and scary…



The moonlight penetrated Mai's window ..
… spreading its splendid light as if it were trying to do so .
When someone can not sleep ,
he tries anything to take his insomnia away ...
... to distract himself . ..



This exactly what happened with Mai
As soon as the moonlight
brightened her room , she was observant enough
to notice such incredible scene... not to
mention how sensitive she was toward nature…



She suddenly got up
and hurried at the window
opened it as if she were chasing
Something she wanted to catch long time ago ……



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When she opened the window nice wind blow on her moving her long hair
Activating each part of her body she really at that time wished that this moment to be immortal as decribing this scene to her was more than incredible .
While enjoying this beautiful scene Mai saw something that disturb her enjoy like a falling fly disturb a glass of milk ,she saw…



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when the owl flew back .. Mai was a bit sad, cos she felt
Some kind of loneliness, and grief
she got back to her tiny room, where she saw the sparkle moon
staring at her,
Mai seeped tears, sorrow in everywhere, no one can hear
Her tears. Pain reflected upon her face, and even if there
Is happiness, she would force to get a little or a moment
Of it.
The clock is still ticking .. and the sound of breeze can be
Sensed from every where, scary, but lovely..







- Take it easy little princess.. Strange voice came out of the closet




- ….. Mai remained constant




- Who are you – Frightened Mai asked




- I’m A little fairy, who sent to draw a smile upon your face .. said the voice




- Who sent you – said Mai




- Your heart – Said the voice




- …….. Mai Got shocke



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After mai heard the strange voice coming out of the closet
......She got up.....scared and frightened
.....Walked slowly to the closet............And....opened it
.....Then, out of the dark......a small glow was coming out
.....She looked carefuly at it....and she saw
.....A beautiful fairy flying out of the closet
.....With her sparkling.....star like coming out of her back
....Don't be scared my princess....said the fairy
....Mai staring at her....with nothing to say
.....The fairy took out her magic wand
.....And said the magic words
.....Suddenly the two vanished into Thin Air



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Azuma


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ÃÓãÜÜÜÇÁ
9-3-2009, 10:44 PM
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The clock struck twelve…
every thing seemed silent , dark
and scary…



The moonlight penetrated Mai's window ..
… spreading its splendid light as if it were trying to do so .
When someone can not sleep ,
he tries anything to take his insomnia away ...
... to distract himself . ..



This exactly what happened with Mai
As soon as the moonlight
brightened her room , she was observant enough
to notice such incredible scene... not to
mention how sensitive she was toward nature…



She suddenly got up
and hurried at the window
opened it as if she were chasing
Something she wanted to catch long time ago ……


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the Assassin
9-3-2009, 11:03 PM
I donno whats the matter but i couldn't move kyto's comment
anyways.. this topic will encourage others to write
and i really admire the idea cos its kinda creative
^^:
sticky until we finish the story
btw how many chapters should we write
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ÃÓãÜÜÜÇÁ
9-3-2009, 11:16 PM
it depends
.....
and about kyto .. then he must put it himself if he did not mind8wq4
cause i like the part he added thereIcon06

Schwert
10-3-2009, 12:18 AM
Oh my sis ur topic is very nice very useful, I really like it and I think I will participate in it many, it is good idea to help us in many thing in english, Now I will go to think what I will write to continue the story and back
In peace of allah

mis eima
10-3-2009, 12:25 AM
Icon-flowers0Hello Azuma
icon152i realy like your idea
and i realy like story
but i so bad in write themIcon55
icon77but will try to write somthing here soon
see you


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Schwert
10-3-2009, 01:07 AM
Hi my dear friends, I reverted again with secound part of story of my sis Azuma, If there are any mistake please tell me to correct it, see you...
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when Mai opened the window she heared a voice, it is like voice of owl, and when she looking to the sky she saw big bird flying, it is seems far from she, Mai see the owl is wise of animals, Mai's father was a farmer, he has a farm and there are some mice bother her father, Mai thinked and saw that this owl can help her father without he feel, this owl eat this mice and it is its food but the problem is how can Mai make owl come or make it live near from his father's farm for help him to kill these mice..............continue

kyto kid
10-3-2009, 02:00 AM
icon28hey Azuma sorry i was late coaf was faster than me so i cant add my one now but i will try to think about a new one to complete coaf writing



but here is my old one any way

When she opened the window nice wind blow on her moving her long hair
Activating each part of her body she really at that time wished that this moment to be immortal as decribing this scene to her was more than incredible .
While enjoying this beautiful scene Mai saw something that disturb her enjoy like a falling fly disturb a glass of milk ,she saw…
hey Azuma why dont you put this nice topic in separate one Icon55
and i hope you like my share Icon59

hey Assasin there is aTopic like Azuma topic and it belongs to me haha so could you delete mine please coz ithink there is mistake

ÃÓãÜÜÜÇÁ
10-3-2009, 05:01 AM
Hi there everyoneeh_s7
Yes Yes that's what i want icon088
be active like that
Eima - coaf - kyto
thanks for sharing me
coaf - kyto
i love what you added you tooicon102
a pleasure to have some parts written by youicon159

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The supervisor: what do you think ?? is it more sutible to put kyto's part first and then coaf
coz as i see , the problem began when she wanted a way to call the owl
in coaf part??

the Assassin
10-3-2009, 10:16 AM
SO, the story is on now
but tbh, i prefer kyto's part
to be number two
so .. we will do some kinda changes
I'll write my own
so BEHOLD

the Assassin
10-3-2009, 10:21 AM
i got an idea
but first i need to ask u azuma - chan
how many chapters should be made
....
another thing, is it ok to orginize everything
after we finlize the story ^^"
like we gather our parts and
put them on the first page ~
^^"

ÃÓãÜÜÜÇÁ
10-3-2009, 01:03 PM
i got an idea

but first i need to ask u azuma - chan
how many chapters should be made
....
another thing, is it ok to orginize everything
after we finlize the story ^^"
like we gather our parts and
put them on the first page ~

^^"



i do not know what is the chapter??
i mean ; is each part we put called chapter???

about the organization
, i wanted to ask you so
Yes like kyto's story ...
but i do not know how???
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kyto kid
12-3-2009, 01:53 PM
hey Azuma back again i put a part of the sory match with coaf part if you want to add coaf part


Mai tried to feed the owl however it was a mean way but she decided to do any thing for her father sake so she bought some hamesters that used in experiment and put each night one of them at the edge of her window putting it in a cage and everynight the owl land and eat the hamester and the owl used every day to come at the same time to eat its own food

One night Mai opened the window during night but there was no hamester to owl to be fed however the owl when it saw Mai it flied to her and entered her room ,Mai become delighted for becoming a friend of the owl so she could help her father but always “the quiet -the calm-come before the storm” as ……………to be continued from you dear members

i hope you like it and really hope everybody to shre us in make continuation

for the story

mmmmmm i want to ask is this will be one story or we could make another when we finished this one thumbsup-Icon

ÃÓãÜÜÜÇÁ
13-3-2009, 07:14 PM
Kyto
how are you??
the part you added is pretty goodIcon-clab0
so you stopped at the point where the owl and Mai becoms friends ...^^
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mmmmmm i want to ask is this will be one story or we could make another when we finished this one


you are really active member
and you deserv a big star ^^Ic-Graduate0

actually when we finish this one we can vote for someone els to start another one and the story goes on
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and if you ask me about the chapters , i do not know how long this story will continue , because as i see , it depends on the number of the parts added by different members as they are the story makers
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Thank you soo much ^^ kyto
and i am waiting for the assassin to arrange these parts

see you

kyto kid
14-3-2009, 03:10 AM
hi Azuma again thanks i am fine and ok i agree to make many stories by your way ,,it is really good:)

and thanks for your words of course all thanks to you by your brilliant idea and wait for Assasin to organize it

see you

Schwert
15-3-2009, 09:52 PM
welcome my mates and my friends, how are u, I come with new part for story and wish it is good, nice add-on my friend Kyto Kid now I eke your part, my sis Azuma why I donot see ur add-on to the story mmmmmm this is point upon you^_^ I certain that u will put new part soon, now read this part from story>>
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when the owl saw that it is always find food there it became come there for eat this hamister & became donn't worry from mai because it is always see her and mai can come to it without flying & can touch it too, mai felt happly because the owl became her friend and she felt that the problem of mice will finish because the owl became come to here always and it is see the farm always and certainly it is will find the mice there and come to eat it, the farm was near from mai's house until she can see it from her window, after week when mai and her family eat the food of dinner mai said"My father how are the farm how are ur work does the mice bother u until now" hers father smile and said" Oh my daughter I will say that now I saw that the mice is less than 2 week ago, I am not see its spoors on the implant and this is really delighted me but I don't know what is the cause behind that, anyway this is good" mai felt happly when she heard that and saw that this good point in her life she will to be happy always when she remember it...............continue

the Assassin
17-3-2009, 05:13 PM
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when the owl saw that it is always find food there it became come there for eat this hamister & became donn't worry from mai because it is always see her and mai can come to it without flying & can touch it too, mai felt happly because the owl became her friend and she felt that the problem of mice will finish because the owl became come to here always and it is see the farm always and certainly it is will find the mice there and come to eat it, the farm was near from mai's house until she can see it from her window, after week when mai and her family eat the food of dinner mai said"My father how are the farm how are ur work does the mice bother u until now" hers father smile and said" Oh my daughter I will say that now I saw that the mice is less than 2 week ago, I am not see its spoors on the implant and this is really delighted me but I don't know what is the cause behind that, anyway this is good" mai felt happly when she heard that and saw that this good point in her life she will to be happy always when she remember it...............continue

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when the owl flew back .. Mai was a bit sad, cos she felt

Some kind of loneliness, and grief



she got back to her tiny room, where she saw the sparkle moon

staring at her,

Mai seeped tears, sorrow in everywhere, no one can hear

Her tears. Pain reflected upon her face, and even if there

Is happiness, she would force to get a little or a moment

Of it.

The clock is still ticking .. and the sound of breeze can be

Sensed from every where, scary, but lovely..







- Take it easy little princess.. Strange voice came out of the closet


- ….. Mai remained constant


- Who are you – Frightened Mai asked


- I’m A little fairy, who sent to draw a smile upon your face .. said the voice


- Who sent you – said Mai


- Your heart – Said the voice


- …….. Mai Got shocke


d







Ok this is my part

So lets go


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ÃÓãÜÜÜÇÁ
18-3-2009, 01:07 PM
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Everybody...

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Let's continue ^^

black fox
19-3-2009, 05:50 PM
^ ^......I didn't had time to congratulate you Azuma.....for opening this topic....sorry
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.....Ok


......After mai heard the strange voice coming out of the closet
......She got up.....scared and frightened
.....Walked slowly to the closet............And....opened it
.....Then, out of the dark......a small glow was coming out
.....She looked carefuly at it....and she saw
.....A beautiful fairy flying out of the closet
.....With her sparkling.....star like coming out of her back
....Don't be scared my princess....said the fairy
....Mai staring at her....with nothing to say
.....The fairy took out her magic wand
.....And said the magic words
.....Suddenly the two vanished into Thin Air
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.....And thats my part
^ ^.....I hope you like it

ÃÓãÜÜÜÇÁ
20-3-2009, 06:07 PM
Hi black fox
very beautiful ... the part you added
but you did not even give us a chance to judge you
your language is perfect Mashallah ^^
i hope you participate always
and i will come with my part ^^

ÃÓãÜÜÜÇÁ
31-3-2009, 10:44 PM
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Suddenly , Mia opened her eyes
where am I ? she said , trying to remember
what happened , with great effort she remember that fairy and the connversation between them ,

as everyone should do she , she stated to check the place around her , what surprised her
is that the whole place is completely
empty except a dark angle there

she looked around to find the fairy staring at her , with a face which is totally ready to explain ,
What's that ? said Mia
" It's your heart " said the fairy with a cold expression
" how come! "
said Mai with widly open eyes....
looking amazed ...moving her sight everywhere...
could'nt believe what is hepening so far ...


"Yes dear it is "
said the fairy moving her face to the area where Mai was focusing on

"Dark angle, what's all that about , how could it be!! and why ... i have never hate or done something that bad to turne my heart into that dark colore.... i always care for others and love them...."
Mai dicared loudly

the fairy was listening with nothing to say while Mai was impatiently waiting for the answer...


" dear... you always like that ... help others .,still no one around could know about what you really intend to by what you do for others ... your heart is wondering too , it was beating lively ..it was colorful ..and there was no dark parts of it ..
but , when it found the answer ...it became that heart with no life at all .."


the fairy was talking seriously with Mai
looking down as if she realize what
the fairy wanted to say ....


" it's your selfishness.... you were doing all that for yourself and nothing else....
you have never done somthing for others ... it was for yourself ..
your intentions were'nt honest enough to revive your dead heart again...
others never thought about your ways of thinking when you give a hand "

...... Mai sarted to think ..to remember ..each time she did a help..
for what and whom..
.when she helped her father last time


"prencess...your heart has sent me asking you to get that delighted beating heart back
to bring colors to that black spot again"


...said the fairy cutting Mai's thoughts...

with no awareness Mai raised her hand slowly toward that bright fairy and........



i leave the pen for the next writer ^_^