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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    Wink Make your own story




    Reading stories is the most interesting thing for most of us .. ever since we were children ,
    we used to have mom telling
    us stories befor sleeping ...and sometimes we brought her an exciting book
    full of short stories and ask
    her to read for us to fly away with our imagination by listening to them .
    but, what if we , ourselves make these exciting stories .. creat characters .. control the events

    and give our creativity the
    freedome to build something unexpected...something brilliant on our own


    ....................

    Make your own story....






    The way we apply this idea :
    i will begin the introduction of the story by my own words
    then each one comes after me will complete from the point in which i stopped by his won way and own words
    so, he completes the events as he wants so that you have the right to creat your story ...
    the one comes after will complete as shown on the same way
    untill the end of the story


    The rules :

    Do not go past the religious rules as well as morals*
    .....
    Describing immoral romantic scenes or political matters*
    are
    not allowed

    . .. Do not complete from the point where you stopped*
    leave a chance for others .. so that the story will be completed by different persons



    the purpose of this story:
    to increase your creativity, enlarge your vocabulary , improving your reading skill and having fun




    (Let us trust each other and work together)

    ..............................................







    The clock struck twelve…
    every thing seemed silent , dark
    and scary…


    The moonlight penetrated Mai's window ..
    … spreading its splendid light as if it were trying to do so .
    When someone can not sleep ,
    he tries anything to take his insomnia away ...
    ... to distract himself . ..


    This exactly what happened with Mai
    As soon as the moonlight
    brightened her room , she was observant enough
    to notice such incredible scene... not to
    mention how sensitive she was toward nature…


    She suddenly got up
    and hurried at the window
    opened it as if she were chasing
    Something she wanted to catch long time ago ……





    When she opened the window nice wind blow on her moving her long hair
    Activating each part of her body she really at that time wished that this moment to be immortal as decribing this scene to her was more than incredible .
    While enjoying this beautiful scene Mai saw something that disturb her enjoy like a falling fly disturb a glass of milk ,she saw…

















    when the owl flew back .. Mai was a bit sad, cos she felt
    Some kind of loneliness, and grief
    she got back to her tiny room, where she saw the sparkle moon
    staring at her,
    Mai seeped tears, sorrow in everywhere, no one can hear
    Her tears. Pain reflected upon her face, and even if there
    Is happiness, she would force to get a little or a moment
    Of it.
    The clock is still ticking .. and the sound of breeze can be
    Sensed from every where, scary, but lovely..






    - Take it easy little princess.. Strange voice came out of the closet



    - ….. Mai remained constant



    - Who are you – Frightened Mai asked



    - I’m A little fairy, who sent to draw a smile upon your face .. said the voice



    - Who sent you – said Mai




    - Your heart – Said the voice




    - …….. Mai Got shocke





    After mai heard the strange voice coming out of the closet
    ......She got up.....scared and frightened
    .....Walked slowly to the closet............And....opened it
    .....Then, out of the dark......a small glow was coming out
    .....She looked carefuly at it....and she saw
    .....A beautiful fairy flying out of the closet
    .....With her sparkling.....star like coming out of her back
    ....Don't be scared my princess....said the fairy
    ....Mai staring at her....with nothing to say
    .....The fairy took out her magic wand
    .....And said the magic words
    .....Suddenly the two vanished into Thin Air


    ......................................

    Yours

    Azuma

    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة أسمـــاء ; 19-3-2009 الساعة 07:01 PM

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story




    The clock struck twelve…
    every thing seemed silent , dark
    and scary…


    The moonlight penetrated Mai's window ..
    … spreading its splendid light as if it were trying to do so .
    When someone can not sleep ,
    he tries anything to take his insomnia away ...
    ... to distract himself . ..


    This exactly what happened with Mai
    As soon as the moonlight
    brightened her room , she was observant enough
    to notice such incredible scene... not to
    mention how sensitive she was toward nature…


    She suddenly got up
    and hurried at the window
    opened it as if she were chasing
    Something she wanted to catch long time ago ……



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    الصورة الرمزية the Assassin

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    I donno whats the matter but i couldn't move kyto's comment
    anyways.. this topic will encourage others to write
    and i really admire the idea cos its kinda creative
    ^^:
    sticky until we finish the story
    btw how many chapters should we write
    ><

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    it depends
    .....
    and about kyto .. then he must put it himself if he did not mind
    cause i like the part he added there

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    الصورة الرمزية Schwert

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    Oh my sis ur topic is very nice very useful, I really like it and I think I will participate in it many, it is good idea to help us in many thing in english, Now I will go to think what I will write to continue the story and back
    In peace of allah

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    الصورة الرمزية mis eima

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    -flowers0" class="inlineimg" />Hello Azuma
    i realy like your idea
    and i realy like story
    but i so bad in write them
    but will try to write somthing here soon
    see you

    ...................................
    ......................

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    الصورة الرمزية Schwert

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    Hi my dear friends, I reverted again with secound part of story of my sis Azuma, If there are any mistake please tell me to correct it, see you...
    .................................................. .................................................. ......................
    when Mai opened the window she heared a voice, it is like voice of owl, and when she looking to the sky she saw big bird flying, it is seems far from she, Mai see the owl is wise of animals, Mai's father was a farmer, he has a farm and there are some mice bother her father, Mai thinked and saw that this owl can help her father without he feel, this owl eat this mice and it is its food but the problem is how can Mai make owl come or make it live near from his father's farm for help him to kill these mice..............continue
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Schwert ; 11-3-2009 الساعة 07:28 PM

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    الصورة الرمزية kyto kid

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    hey Azuma sorry i was late coaf was faster than me so i cant add my one now but i will try to think about a new one to complete coaf writing


    but here is my old one any way
    When she opened the window nice wind blow on her moving her long hair
    Activating each part of her body she really at that time wished that this moment to be immortal as decribing this scene to her was more than incredible .
    While enjoying this beautiful scene Mai saw something that disturb her enjoy like a falling fly disturb a glass of milk ,she saw…
    hey Azuma why dont you put this nice topic in separate one
    and i hope you like my share

    hey Assasin there is aTopic like Azuma topic and it belongs to me haha so could you delete mine please coz ithink there is mistake


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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    Hi there everyone
    Yes Yes that's what i want
    be active like that
    Eima - coaf - kyto
    thanks for sharing me
    coaf - kyto
    i love what you added you too
    a pleasure to have some parts written by you

    .............................................
    The supervisor: what do you think ?? is it more sutible to put kyto's part first and then coaf
    coz as i see , the problem began when she wanted a way to call the owl
    in coaf part??

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    الصورة الرمزية the Assassin

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    SO, the story is on now
    but tbh, i prefer kyto's part
    to be number two
    so .. we will do some kinda changes
    I'll write my own
    so BEHOLD

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    الصورة الرمزية the Assassin

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    i got an idea
    but first i need to ask u azuma - chan
    how many chapters should be made
    ....
    another thing, is it ok to orginize everything
    after we finlize the story ^^"
    like we gather our parts and
    put them on the first page ~
    ^^"

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin مشاهدة المشاركة
    i got an idea

    but first i need to ask u azuma - chan
    how many chapters should be made
    ....
    another thing, is it ok to orginize everything
    after we finlize the story ^^"
    like we gather our parts and
    put them on the first page ~

    ^^"

    i do not know what is the chapter??
    i mean ; is each part we put called chapter???

    about the organization
    , i wanted to ask you so
    Yes like kyto's story ...
    but i do not know how???

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    الصورة الرمزية kyto kid

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    hey Azuma back again i put a part of the sory match with coaf part if you want to add coaf part

    Mai tried to feed the owl however it was a mean way but she decided to do any thing for her father sake so she bought some hamesters that used in experiment and put each night one of them at the edge of her window putting it in a cage and everynight the owl land and eat the hamester and the owl used every day to come at the same time to eat its own food

    One night Mai opened the window during night but there was no hamester to owl to be fed however the owl when it saw Mai it flied to her and entered her room ,Mai become delighted for becoming a friend of the owl so she could help her father but always “the quiet -the calm-come before the storm” as ……………to be continued from you dear members
    i hope you like it and really hope everybody to shre us in make continuation

    for the story

    mmmmmm i want to ask is this will be one story or we could make another when we finished this one " class="inlineimg" />

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    Thumbs up رد: Make your own story

    Kyto
    how are you??
    the part you added is pretty good-clab0" class="inlineimg" />
    so you stopped at the point where the owl and Mai becoms friends ...^^
    ...........................

    mmmmmm i want to ask is this will be one story or we could make another when we finished this one


    you are really active member
    and you deserv a big star ^^

    actually when we finish this one we can vote for someone els to start another one and the story goes on
    .....................
    and if you ask me about the chapters , i do not know how long this story will continue , because as i see , it depends on the number of the parts added by different members as they are the story makers
    .............

    Thank you soo much ^^ kyto
    and i am waiting for the assassin to arrange these parts

    see you
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة أسمـــاء ; 13-3-2009 الساعة 08:27 PM

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    الصورة الرمزية kyto kid

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    hi Azuma again thanks i am fine and ok i agree to make many stories by your way ,,it is really good

    and thanks for your words of course all thanks to you by your brilliant idea and wait for Assasin to organize it

    see you

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    welcome my mates and my friends, how are u, I come with new part for story and wish it is good, nice add-on my friend Kyto Kid now I eke your part, my sis Azuma why I donot see ur add-on to the story mmmmmm this is point upon you^_^ I certain that u will put new part soon, now read this part from story>>
    .................................................. .....


    [frame="5 60"]when the owl saw that it is always find food there it became come there for eat this hamister & became donn't worry from mai because it is always see her and mai can come to it without flying & can touch it too, mai felt happly because the owl became her friend and she felt that the problem of mice will finish because the owl became come to here always and it is see the farm always and certainly it is will find the mice there and come to eat it, the farm was near from mai's house until she can see it from her window, after week when mai and her family eat the food of dinner mai said"My father how are the farm how are ur work does the mice bother u until now" hers father smile and said" Oh my daughter I will say that now I saw that the mice is less than 2 week ago, I am not see its spoors on the implant and this is really delighted me but I don't know what is the cause behind that, anyway this is good" mai felt happly when she heard that and saw that this good point in her life she will to be happy always when she remember it...............continue[/frame]
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Schwert ; 16-3-2009 الساعة 10:51 AM

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    الصورة الرمزية the Assassin

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    .................................................. .....

    [frame="5 60"]when the owl saw that it is always find food there it became come there for eat this hamister & became donn't worry from mai because it is always see her and mai can come to it without flying & can touch it too, mai felt happly because the owl became her friend and she felt that the problem of mice will finish because the owl became come to here always and it is see the farm always and certainly it is will find the mice there and come to eat it, the farm was near from mai's house until she can see it from her window, after week when mai and her family eat the food of dinner mai said"My father how are the farm how are ur work does the mice bother u until now" hers father smile and said" Oh my daughter I will say that now I saw that the mice is less than 2 week ago, I am not see its spoors on the implant and this is really delighted me but I don't know what is the cause behind that, anyway this is good" mai felt happly when she heard that and saw that this good point in her life she will to be happy always when she remember it...............continue[/frame]
    [/QUOTE]

    when the owl flew back .. Mai was a bit sad, cos she felt
    Some kind of loneliness, and grief
    she got back to her tiny room, where she saw the sparkle moon
    staring at her,
    Mai seeped tears, sorrow in everywhere, no one can hear
    Her tears. Pain reflected upon her face, and even if there
    Is happiness, she would force to get a little or a moment
    Of it.
    The clock is still ticking .. and the sound of breeze can be
    Sensed from every where, scary, but lovely..
    [justify]

    - Take it easy little princess.. Strange voice came out of the closet
    - ….. Mai remained constant
    - Who are you – Frightened Mai asked
    - I’m A little fairy, who sent to draw a smile upon your face .. said the voice
    - Who sent you – said Mai
    - Your heart – Said the voice
    - …….. Mai Got shocke
    [/justify]
    d
    Ok this is my part
    So lets go

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story



    Everybody...



    Let's continue ^^

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    ^ ^......I didn't had time to congratulate you Azuma.....for opening this topic....sorry
    .................................................. .................................................. ......................................

    .....Ok

    ......After mai heard the strange voice coming out of the closet
    ......She got up.....scared and frightened
    .....Walked slowly to the closet............And....opened it
    .....Then, out of the dark......a small glow was coming out
    .....She looked carefuly at it....and she saw
    .....A beautiful fairy flying out of the closet
    .....With her sparkling.....star like coming out of her back
    ....Don't be scared my princess....said the fairy
    ....Mai staring at her....with nothing to say
    .....The fairy took out her magic wand
    .....And said the magic words
    .....Suddenly the two vanished into Thin Air
    ..............................

    .....And thats my part
    ^ ^.....I hope you like it

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    افتراضي رد: Make your own story

    Hi black fox
    very beautiful ... the part you added
    but you did not even give us a chance to judge you
    your language is perfect Mashallah ^^
    i hope you participate always
    and i will come with my part ^^

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