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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    Wink !!My gift!!

    Hello
    my friends
    how are you ??


    tody i have written some words
    for my first time in my life
    ..................................

    it will be as a gift especially for
    our supervisor ,my lovely team
    and my dear friends






    When i went away
    to that shining way





    Me and no one except me
    Sitting beneath a tree
    Leaving that thoughts of me
    Flying and dancing like a bee


    The sky smiled for I
    Became that cute butterfly
    Brightly and nicely received me
    Bowing saying sure.. Hi




    I passed and looked around
    When I suddenly got charmed
    Blessings.. mercies I found
    That I suppose it might
    Be that immortal land



    Deeply and further there
    I walked following the light
    Seeking more beauty and bright
    Going to endless site




    A voice was totally true
    Whispering ... saying ..it is you
    ....no tears ...no fear be sure
    There would be no more blue
    Or pain you might be through
    It is .. heaven and no other clue
    It's heaven and no other clue





    i imagined myself leaving this life to the afterlife
    where there were nothing except happiness

    i hope you love it
    !!!!!!!
    give me your opinion

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    الصورة الرمزية قمر الكون

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    thanks for the nice words
    keep forward



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    الصورة الرمزية kyto kid

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    Hello

    my friends
    how are you ??
    Hi Azuma i am fine thanks








    When i went away
    to that shining way





    Me and no one except me
    Sitting beneath a tree
    Leaving that thoughts of me
    Flying and dancing like a bee


    The sky smiled for I
    Became that cute butterfly
    Brightly and nicely received me
    Bowing saying sure.. Hi




    I passed and looked around
    When I suddenly got charmed
    Blessings.. mercies I found
    That I suppose it might
    Be that immortal land



    Deeply and further there
    I walked following the light
    Seeking more beauty and bright
    Going to endless site




    A voice was totally true
    Whispering ... saying ..it is you
    ....no tears ...no fear be sure
    There would be no more blue
    Or pain you might be through
    It is .. heaven and no other clue
    It's heaven and no other clue





    i imagined myself leaving this life to the afterlife
    where there were nothing except happiness

    i hope you love it
    !!!!!!!

    give me your opinion



    You asked for my opinion ok be ready


    your words are awesome really and you know i feel that i live these words when i read it ,,you give words life by your wonderful describtion and really with out lie although i feel boring these days coz of exams but your words enter some happiness into my heart

    There would be no more blue
    Or pain you might be through
    It is .. heaven and no other clue
    It's heaven and no other clue
    nice end from you i like it and you are right there is no pain but only for good people who will go to paradise and we all hope to be like those people

    this truthful words Azuma and really thanks again

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    الصورة الرمزية Schwert

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    welcome my sister Azuma, how are you my sisater, I read ur theme and I like it very very much. in fact some times we cann't express on our feelings for somethings that happened with us because the words cann't do that, I like the intent of this poem it'sbeautiful intents and indeed I'm not good in expression
    therefore I shall say thanks my sister for ur nice topic, it's really admired me and peace be upon youA_A
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Schwert ; 2-4-2009 الساعة 10:20 PM

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    الصورة الرمزية maxman1991

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    Azuma

    how r u??

    oky....

    from your way of write express you would be a really good writer if you continue ...
    but you need to use more affect able words or expressions ...
    what you wrote is really nice and make the reader happy in some way

    anyway keep writing don`t stop you are a good writer but you must write more
    and remember describing people or things make you write good

    I hope I wasn`t an annoying person but all what I said is only for you


    i imagined myself leaving this life to the afterlife
    where there were nothing except happiness

    i hope you love it
    !!!!!!!
    And I hope it well be happiness moment for all of us

    and yes I like it


    happy day

    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة maxman1991 ; 3-4-2009 الساعة 12:24 AM

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!




    You asked for my opinion ok be ready


    your words are awesome really and you know i feel that i live these words when i read it ,,you give words life by your wonderful describtion and really with out lie although i feel boring these days coz of exams but your words enter some happiness into my heart





    Hi there Sir Kyto
    an honor you visited my topic
    and you really delight me by your comment
    Thanks God that my words make you happy
    i was imagining that unknown life there in heaven while what found there will exceed our imagination really....we hope all to live that real life and to be in paradise inshalla

    ~~~~~
    Do your best nee-sama
    in exams ... and best wishes
    we all encourage our novalist


    thanks again
    good luck

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة coaf مشاهدة المشاركة
    welcome my sister Azuma, how are you my sisater, I read ur theme and I like it very very much. in fact some times we cann't express on our feelings for somethings that happened with us because the words cann't do that, I like the intent of this poem it'sbeautiful intents and indeed I'm not good in expression
    therefore I shall say thanks my sister for ur nice topic, it's really admired me and peace be upon youA_A

    Hi brother Coaf
    Thanks i am fine
    that's very kind of you
    thanks for your sweet reply.. it means a lot to me and encourage me ,too
    but i did not experenced that ^_^
    i just imagened
    really i am happy that you like it, i knew i am low level ,still i will practice to present something nice for you dear friends
    ................................
    it's an honor brother
    see you ^_^

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    الصورة الرمزية the Assassin

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    hummm u said this is the first time
    ^^
    i'll kill u though ..
    u know being a writer is a simple thing
    and moving to another step will be some
    kinda hard.. anyways.. i liked ur words
    but the issue is .. u follow the sequence
    and then u went to another word...
    let me show u something

    you
    sure
    ^^
    i think u foced on the sequence
    but next time i think u gonna
    blow our heads clean off ^^

    about the poem .. its one of the
    best things i've ever read
    ^^
    aregatow onee-chan

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maxman1991 مشاهدة المشاركة
    Azuma



    how r u??

    oky....

    from your way of write express you would be a really good writer if you continue ...
    but you need to use more affect able words or expressions ...
    what you wrote is really nice and make the reader happy in some way

    anyway keep writing don`t stop you are a good writer but you must write more
    and remember describing people or things make you write good

    I hope I wasn`t an annoying person but all what I said is only for you


    And I hope it well be happiness moment for all of us

    and yes I like it


    happy day


    thanks
    i am fine
    ........
    No No No
    you are'nt bothering me at all

    otherwise i would be happy to guid me
    thanks for your words
    i know am just a little thing in English world
    and im gonna practice until i die
    but i do not want English to cause my death somehow
    ...........................................
    i know how description affects your writing and this needs someone has vast imagination
    to make him creat something has not been created befor

    thanks for your visiting
    what you've just done encourages me
    .....................
    by the way .... i am excited to see your writings
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة أسمـــاء ; 3-4-2009 الساعة 04:37 PM

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin مشاهدة المشاركة
    hummm u said this is the first time





    ^^
    i'll kill u though ..
    u know being a writer is a simple thing
    and moving to another step will be some
    kinda hard.. anyways.. i liked ur words
    but the issue is .. u follow the sequence
    and then u went to another word...
    let me show u something

    you
    sure
    ^^
    i think u foced on the sequence
    but next time i think u gonna
    blow our heads clean off ^^

    about the poem .. its one of the
    best things i've ever read
    ^^
    aregatow onee-chan

    Hi brother
    thanks for your visiting
    and your encouraging as well
    immmmm..... i know i am young in this field and
    Yes it is my first time to write a complete poem

    But..
    i will practice
    Thanks again
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة أسمـــاء ; 24-7-2010 الساعة 06:07 AM

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    الصورة الرمزية maxman1991

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    you are'nt bothering me at all

    ^^


    by the way .... i am excited to see your writings
    see my last articles they have one of mine
    }}an advertisement for my subject^^

    by


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    الصورة الرمزية cutie#1

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!


    Amazing Very wonderful masha' allah ~ Please write more & more

    Hope that i'll be like you 1 day ,, God bliss you ,, so for now ,, see you later

    =)

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    الصورة الرمزية N@Y

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    thanks for these fantastic words ^_^

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    الصورة الرمزية dallo

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    HEY AZUMA

    ITS REALLY GOOD WORDS FOR THE FIRST TIME

    I LOVE IT ACTULLY

    I WANNA SEE MORE FROM U FREIND

    SEE YA SOON INSHALLAH

    JANA


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    الصورة الرمزية Hajime-san

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    very touching words...or they kill me..thanks..thanks
    really so nice
    don't be late for the next one..ok sis
    Best luck

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    N@Y

    Thanks brother for visiting ^^
    Allah bless you


    dallo

    Hi lady and sososos sorry for being late^^
    thanks for your sweet words ^^
    they support me ,too
    Allah bless you dear sister ^^
    am trying my best
    thanks

    Hajime-san

    Thanks brother
    that's very kind of you
    am glad you left a comment
    Mellion thanks and it's an honor that you like them
    hontony arigato
    i'll do my best
    Allah bless you brother^^


    see u around

    Azuma^_*


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    الصورة الرمزية the miri dude

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    hi AZUMA
    i gust want to thank u for this great words
    u have alot of talent....use it well

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    افتراضي رد: !!My gift!!

    I will...
    Do not worry
    likewise you..^_^
    Thanks alot...brother...



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