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    الصورة الرمزية Jasmine..!

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    افتراضي !... ::: The REAL Friend ::: ...!

    السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته ,,


    Hello , members of MSOMS - Anime .net

    This is my first topic in this forum ^^

    ~ I would like to show you some words i wrote it

    About friends .... REAL friends described in a few lines ...!! Let‘s start ^^


    It‘s great to have a friend who supports you to develop your faith •
    Praying together , help each other , always remind you of Allah
    Being one hand in good stuff
    ..


    . It‘s great to have a friend who advises you when he saw something wrong from you


    . It‘s great to have A friend whoes always honest with you in every thing


    .It‘s great to have A friend who does not break promises


    . It‘s great to have A friend who stands with you in necessary times


    . And It‘s great to have A friend who talks about you in good when you are absent



    . ( تعالى Finally - Let‘s make our friendships ( loved ones in Allah ~
    With friendships like that …]
    you will win that mate in this world and paradise
    …( في الدنيا والآخرة ) .... اللهم آمين ...


    Note : I used the dictionary little bet ^^”


    [Hope
    You get interest ^^


    في حفظِ الله تعالى
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Jasmine..! ; 25-11-2010 الساعة 06:54 AM

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    افتراضي رد: !... ::: The REAL Friend ::: ...!

    Hello
    welcome in the forum dear sis ^^
    I really agree with you and I know that everyone wants to win such friendship
    your writing is pretty and expressive-yes0" class="inlineimg" />
    but after your permission I wanna fix some mistakes




    It‘s great to have a friend who supports you to develop your faith •
    Praying together , help each other , always remind you of Allah
    Being one hand in good stuff..


    . It‘s great to have a friend who advises you when he sees something wrong from you •


    . It‘s great to have A friend whose always honest with you in every thing •


    .It‘s great to have A friend who levy promises •


    . It‘s great to have A friend who stands with you in necessary times •


    . And It‘s great to have A friend who talks about you in good when you're absent


    .................................

    It's only some grammatical mistakes and use of words like levy
    I think it's not the proper word in this text coz it means demanding things by force
    so I think you can say :

    to have a friend who doesn't break promises .....




    I hope I didn't bother
    good luck

    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة أسمـــاء ; 21-11-2010 الساعة 11:50 PM

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    الصورة الرمزية Jasmine..!

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    افتراضي رد: !... ::: The REAL Friend ::: ...!


    Dear Azuma welcome in my topic ^^

    thank you for fixing my mistakes ^^

    تعالى In the care of Allah

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    الصورة الرمزية Schwert

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    افتراضي رد: !... ::: The REAL Friend ::: ...!

    W\Salam sister
    admired me read ur topic, it's really impressive
    u have put beautiful attributes which express real friendship and its beauty
    a friend word is a big word means many things and has high valuable among who know it good
    I keep a say about friendship admires me: a real friend isn't only who hold ur hand but also touch ur heart
    many thanks sis for this topic and welcome here in EF(English Forum)1
    keep going

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    الصورة الرمزية Jasmine..!

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    افتراضي رد: !... ::: The REAL Friend ::: ...!


    Thank u brother 4 your comment ^^

    and there is more إن شاء الله تعآلى ...

    في حفظِ الله تعالى ..

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    افتراضي رد: !... ::: The REAL Friend ::: ...!

    nicely put
    thank you for every word you wrote

    hope to see more topics from you here

    MB

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    الصورة الرمزية Ls460L

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    افتراضي رد: !... ::: The REAL Friend ::: ...!

    Thanks a lot for your words that are detailed and precise more than enough
    and about the thread :that really every one needs to have such a friend whom one shares with you the pains and joys


    Thanks You

    Ls460L

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    السلام عليكم

    you know what
    sometimes I feel too sick
    to have friends
    they let me down

    too bad that I never meet afriend like you said
    ,but nice to meet you and you know these lines
    go ahead
    في أمان الله,..

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    الصورة الرمزية Jasmine..!

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    mohbaboo
    Thank 4 your comment ^^

    welcome n my topic ...

    إن شاءَ الله تعالى ..


    Ls460L
    thank u for your comment brother
    ,,,

    في حفظِ الله تعالى ...


    black211
    وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته ...
    Hi dear sis ^^
    welcome n the topic ^^

    sometimes I feel too sick "
    to have friends
    " they let me down

    you are absolutely right ^^

    I am glad you being in
    my topic ^^

    في حفظٍ الله تعالى ...

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    yes.....haveing a REAL friend makes you feel the reason of life

    thanx alot for those great lines

    hope to see more

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