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    الصورة الرمزية black fox

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    افتراضي |_| Tireless Wanderer |_|


    ...A smooth breeze floating on your body
    ...A full moon shining the dark sky
    ...An ocean calm as if there is no wind
    ...A wooing owl searching for someone's end

    ...A lady walking at the edge of a cliff
    ...With her long flown black hair
    ...Eyes lighten by a rose stare
    ...A grace voice saying something there

    ...Bright diamonds in the sky
    ...? How much Patience can there be
    ...All alone far away from each other
    ...Like a million light years from one another

    ...Ohh mere humen on the ground
    ...? why that sad look on your face
    ...A lightsome smile can warm us
    ...A finger shaping even like an octopus

    ...............................

    ...As they talk like an understanding couple
    ...My eyes fell at something simple
    ...A little girl sitting with her knees cuddle
    ...Looking at a paper like she is solving a puzzle

    ...I slowly walked towards her
    ...Hoping that I could help her
    ...? What's troubling you young beauty
    ...And she said something extraordinary

    ...A smooth breeze floating on your body
    ...A full moon shining the dark sky
    ...An ocean calm as if there is no wind
    ...A wooing owl searching for someones end
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة black fox ; 1-3-2011 الساعة 09:35 PM

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    افتراضي رد: |_| Tireless Wanderer |_|

    OYE OYE Captain
    nicely put

    to think you wrote this makes me rethink things loool

    thanks bro and keep it up

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    الصورة الرمزية Naro-chan

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    افتراضي رد: |_| Tireless Wanderer |_|

    peace be upon you

    i like wandering here and there
    but how romantic to wander by the shore under the moon shining
    ~__^
    ...
    thanx brother for these smooth words
    : )

    best of best

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    افتراضي رد: |_| Tireless Wanderer |_|

    .

    ...Bright diamonds in the sky
    ...? How much Patience can there be
    ...All alone far away from each other
    ...Like a million light years from one another

    ...Ohh mere humen on the ground
    ...? why that sad look on your face
    ...A lightsome smile can warm us


    I like your words very much here
    these lines imply alot
    there will be alot of patience , endless patience , that kind that will take us forever ,
    those sparking stars will soon come beside one another even if the distance blocks them and the night looks longer .g
    ..............
    You got a beautiful talent
    go fo it


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    الصورة الرمزية هَاجر

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    افتراضي رد: |_| Tireless Wanderer |_|

    Hello
    those words are very nice I enjoyed reading it despite my shallow knowledge at English But they are extraordinanry to force me to read it XD
    I Hope to read another topic of yours
    good-bye

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    الصورة الرمزية black fox

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    افتراضي رد: |_| Tireless Wanderer |_|

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة mohbaboo مشاهدة المشاركة
    OYE OYE Captain
    nicely put

    to think you wrote this makes me rethink things loool

    thanks bro and keep it up
    ^ ^...Thanks Tichou
    ^ ^...And we're all waiting for priceless writings


    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Naro-chan مشاهدة المشاركة
    peace be upon you

    i like wandering here and there
    but how romantic to wander by the shore under the moon shining
    ~__^
    ...
    thanx brother for these smooth words
    : )

    best of best
    ^ ^...Yeah your right
    ...It's something that can't be replaced
    ^ ^...Thanks for passing by


    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Azuma مشاهدة المشاركة

    I like your words very much here
    these lines imply alot
    there will be alot of patience , endless patience , that kind that will take us forever ,
    those sparking stars will soon come beside one another even if the distance blocks them and the night looks longer .g
    ..............
    You got a beautiful talent
    go fo it

    ...I can't say anything
    ^ ^...Only...I'm happy that you liked it
    ^ ^...And...it's a pleasure that you stopped by
    ...Thank you

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    الصورة الرمزية black fox

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    افتراضي رد: |_| Tireless Wanderer |_|

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة تومويو مشاهدة المشاركة
    Hello
    those words are very nice I enjoyed reading it despite my shallow knowledge at English But they are extraordinanry to force me to read it XD
    I Hope to read another topic of yours
    good-bye
    ^ ^...Thank you very much

    ...And based on your comment
    ^ ^...I don't think that your english is "shallow" at all...Ma Sha'a Allah

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    الصورة الرمزية Schwert

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    افتراضي رد: |_| Tireless Wanderer |_|

    ^ ^Hi
    how r u bro
    it's really really beautiful, brilliant and romantic words
    really I liked it and want to see something kindred like it subsequently^ ^1
    the art of description is lovable to me and you have done this in a beautiful way
    I appreciate ur effort my chum and I'm glad to be here
    keep going

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