a drawing that has a story

[Rainbow Star]

Hi Everybody
Here is a little something I thought of
-smil" class="inlineimg" />I once drew this picture for Miku Hinasaki (she's the main character in fatal frame *the game*) yeah I know AGAIN? well i like it

okay here is what I wrote
I can't think of an intro for it

first the drawing
I hope you like it





Miku Hinasaki is not an ordinary girl. She has a special ability. That ability brought her nothing but sorrow. Yes it's the worst one. Nobody would want to see GHOSTS. but that's not the problem . The problem is that her mother had this ability too and so did her older brother. Because of it her mother commited suicide. Miku changed after that. she was not allowed to talk about her ability to anyone. But wait! she can talk to her oniichan.Yes he's the only one left for her.He's a journalist. But what happened that day? oniichan didn't come home. it's been nine days now.What happened? to him? She decided to go after him. The last place he visited was the Himuro mansion. it's been abandoned for so many years. Miku has no other choice. She has to look for her brother. He's the only one she has. That mansion is full of ghosts. Miku was frightened, but she has her mother's camera, the camera obscura that can take pictures of those who can not be seen. it's a big help. But there was this one ghost. She was diffirent. She's the one who captured oniichan. She won't release him, but she's also a victim. She's a victim of the ritual that was held in that mansion. The strangling ritual. The girl who performs the ritual must have no connections to the world. that was her. but the problem was that she HAD a connection. She loved a man who was just like Miku's brother and that's why the ritual failed and she became an evil spirit who killed everyone who entered the mansion. But this person was diffirent. He's the man she's been waiting for. He came back for her. Nobody can take him away now that he's here. So What would Miku do? how could she save her oniichan? SHE COULDN'T
He was the one who saved her. He stayed with the Ghost in that cursed mansion for eternity. Why did he do such a thing? To save his beloved sister. He told her to get out nd leave the two of them. Se has to survive and he has to stay there

and that's what Miku did
...
she survived
...
with a look on her face that says
"oniichan...don't leave me alone"






THE END





so how did I do? I hope you didn't get bored and stopped reading
your comments please

thanks Rikku-senpai
thanks brother Assassin

[Rainbow Star]

Please everyone take good care of your oniichans especialy if they were like Miku's

okay?

[rikku]

LOOOOOOOLZ!! another part of fatal frame

i like ur drawing
usually when pics r in this size u can c the flaws but urs is great
i would love 2 c it once it is colored -yes0" class="inlineimg" />

nah nah it was anything but boring

well.. i don't know who this miku is but i bet that my brother is nothing like him
* little brothers can b really annoying sometimes *x

now i definitely have 2 buy the cd
thanx 4 the nice topic

[أسمـــاء]

Oh my
u love fatal frame ,too
that's amazing game really
and mashallah you have a unique ability to draw
i like the pic
and yea the girl was i think with her brother Mafuyou and i didn't play this part
but also she was in the third part with Rey who lost her boyfriend and went to a haunted palace, I really loved it , and i prefer the third one
Project Zero ^^
with love
your sister
Azuma ^^

[Rainbow Star]

Rikku-senpai
ooh
I don't like colouring so i won't colour it
and brothers ARE annoying
I wish mine was like Mafuyu

Azuma-san
OMG
you lve it too?
it's fantastic right?
the third is the best
but too bad the fourth won't be coming in english
>_<
I HATE NINTENDO

thanks

[الثغر المبتسم]

Rainbow Star

WoW .. machAllah .. i love your picture and story Special your Drawing

the story is simple .. coz this i like it ^^

and your drawing it's very great .. i love it
Special her eyes and hair ^^

thanks a lot for this simple story and great drawing

^___^

your brother / althager-almobtasem

[Rainbow Star]

thank you bro

it's good that you like it
thanx

[the Assassin]

damn, being away is like moving to another world

nice one sis, i liked ur topic allot, and tbh thats what
i was waiting for...

That ability brought her nothing but sorrow

i liked this part, which really reminds me of Psycho mantis

^^"

i liked his atttitude allot, and i dunno i might play fatal frame on
my wii, so i can't say more coz i'm speechless

keep up the good work sis
its been a great time having u around

btw don't thank me just pray for me =)

[Do Ri Me]

hi my sweety sis
i really love ur drawing
( u seem u r pro )
it is very nice
and so touching
^^ trust me

even thought i didn't read the story ( i am slacking off now ... i have 2test next week huhuh ) but
it seems very beautiful ... okay in sha'a Allah when i finish this crisis


and way to go sis ^^

[Rainbow Star]

the assassin
okay bro but I have to thank you now
Thanks ^_^
I'll pray for you inshaa allah

Do Ri Me
I know what it's like
EXAMS
>_<
don't worry
read it next time
thanx for coming by

[lolleta]

yeeeeeeeh ... thanks for ur pencil .. no but thanks for ur hand
which hold the pencil and let it drow that masterpiece

keep it up
and let's see more of yours

lolleta admire ur drowing indeeeeeeed

[موديا1992]

EXCELLENT ~ great story , great talent

keep going ... ~
^_^

thank you very much !











Mudia

[Rainbow Star]

wow
thank you lolleta

tanks mudia