A story by my little sister

[محبة الربيع]

:: Hello every one ::

?How are you doing these days

hopefully after a long journey I've returned to MSOMS

my subject today is about a story written by my younger sister who is 9 years old

well there have been some mistakes and I corrected for her but I asked her

first what she meant when she wrote it so that I won't change her opinion

Now read the story and enjoy

Noof and Teddy Bear

Once upon a time there was a girl called "Noof" who had a teddy bear called "Meme".

Everyday Noof goes to school by bus and one day she sat on the chair of the bus,

opened her bag and she saw a red paper written on it

"I love you so much Noof!

Don't go to school today because it will be dangerous for you."

From: your teddy bear Meme

After finishing reading the letter, Noof felt scared and told her friend as soon as

she arrived at school saying to her: "Can you help me?" , her friend replied: "okay!

But, about what?" She then said: "My teddy bear wrote in a paper that there will be

danger for me". Her friend said: "Okay! Okay! I will help you Noof but where is the place?"

Noof said: "I don't know! I don't know!" her friend said: "okay then we will go around

the school". Then they go to see what the problem is, they went to their teacher's

office and found her dead. They saw her foot and legs were cut and covered with

blood. Then they continue across the long hallway until they saw a man his face

covered with blood

holding a scissors on his hand. As soon as the man saw Noof he said:" I will kill her

now!" then Noof took a big wood, throw it on the man that make him die and she went

with her friend to home. She slept with her teddy bear Meme next to her.

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[Nice Nurse]

Hello sister محبة الربيع
nice simple story you feel the innocence of children inside it
I ask Allah to safe her for her self, for her parents and for her sister
.and become a perfect writer in the future

and thanks for you for encouraging her

[محبة الربيع]

Hello sister محبة الربيع

nice simple story you feel the innocence of children inside it
I ask Allah to safe her for her self, for her parents and for her sister
.and become a perfect writer in the future

and thanks for you for encouraging her

Hi my dear friend Nice Nurse


yep indeed and it shows her deep fears and thought about the unknown


and I ask Allah to guard us all under his protection


thanks sweety for the nice reply

[M.A.T]

honestly!!! i dont get the moral of this sweet story
i guess ur sister has dreamed about death recently or she saw something afraid in reallity or she is angry about the wars around her. anyway thats a nice story in english for a 9-year-old girl

[محبة الربيع]

honestly!!! i dont get the moral of this sweet story
i guess ur sister has dreamed about death recently or she saw something afraid in reallity or she is angry about the wars around her. anyway thats a nice story in english for a 9-year-old girl

not every story must have a moral lesson

because some can be just for entertaining the reader


but when a child write it shows unconsiously thier inner feelings

and hidden fears


&


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[AbboOoOd R.K]

That was a nice short story, thanks to you and your little sister
I hope she will become a big writer

[Rainbow Star]

WoW

that really shocked me
children these days think of weird stuff, i thought the story would go innocent but what's with the cutting and blood @_@
.....

it's good for a 9 year old to have this imagination and even write
^^
thanx

[جناح الحمامة]

it is a good story for a 9 years old girl
woow your sister is a Talented
it has a scary ending i thought it would be nice ending since she is 9 years old
thank u

[.fox.]

I think ..it's ok to wrote story like this..
maybe she thought this ending will be strong enough to make others says : WOW
IT'S SCARY BUT i wrote story like this when i was 6 maybe
i killed the boy ( Ahmad) in the end xD AFTER i tortured him with such drama
don't worry, your sweet little sister exploring the world of deaths and the unknown one with a pictures in her mind
what did she told you about the idea of her story ?
i hope happy ,white and shiny life for your sister
don't forget to improve her talent

thank you spring lover .. be safe