♦♦Put My Sentence Right♦♦

[Schwert]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
Hi everyone wherever you are and whenever you come my dear brilliant msoms's members and certainly our dear guests too, welcome all
In fact, this topic is just a game, nice game, but we going to benefit from it surely, it relates to the grammar of English, how?, well, I'll tell you, in the beginning I'll put an example and it's just a sentence but it's wrong sentence grammatically as this example: Flowers is beautiful, then you come and correct it and also put another wrong one too till who comes after you do as you have done and so forth, well, here we go

This books are useful

[الثغر المبتسم]

peace be upon you ^.^

oh man ! I miss u so much .. how r u ?
I hope ur fine ^^

nice game .. ti's very great idea to improve our grammar ^_^
thanks

This books are useful

correct : These books are useful

My sentence : Is you fine ?

^^

[أسمـــاء]

Peace be upon you friends ^^
good game saber thanks to u
I'll give my shot :
Are you fine?

ok mine : g

Life is too hard for those who is having fragile hearts!dd

[lolleta]

nice game saber
thank u

Life is too hard for those who is having fragile hearts!dd

oooh azuma .. what terrible wrong sentence
hhehehehe

Life is too hard for those who are having fragile hearts

>>>>>

how many brothers have u ?o

^_*

[mohbaboo]

thank you brother saber

Life is too hard for those who are having fragile hearts

for me, I think the correct one is
Life is too hard for those having fragile hearts
or
Life is too hard for those who have fragile hearts

how many brothers have u ?o

How many brothers do you have?l
and
How many brothers you have?l

my sentence
if you came early, you will have dinner

hint
the answer could come in two ways depending on what phrase you will change

quite challenging, right? O_o

[أسمـــاء]

Good morning ^^
once again thanks Saber
ok let's see :
Mohbaboo :
your correction for mine was as I suppos as good as lolitta's
but
Life is too hard for those who have fragile hearts and Life is too hard for those having fragile hearts
are more common than
Life is too hard for those who are having fragile hearts
am I right?

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[/FONT] how many brothers have u ?
this can also be : How many brothers have you got ?nn
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if you came early, you will have dinner

If you come early , you will have dinner
If you come early , you will be having dinner
If you came early , you would have dinner
If you had come early , you would have had dinner

Sorry it came out this way but I hope it's right

o

[Ls460L]

It's an interesting game

Let me start:


Who was they? w

[mohbaboo]

who were they?l

mine
if I was you, I would use my phone

If you come early , you will have dinner
If you come early , you will be having dinner
If you came early , you would have dinner
If you had come early , you would have had dinner

nice
I had two in my mind
but you brought four
and I think they're all correct

[lolleta]

if I was you, I would use my phone

if i were u .. i would use my phone
..
oooh my !!
it had been sooo long for using grammer .. but i'm glad that i still have some
*_^

ok .. take it
i closed my room and don't let him bother me

[Schwert]

الثغر المبتسم
my dear bro, I'm glad to c u in my topic and I missed u too and I'm fine thanks bro, my regards
Azuma, u r welcome sister and I'm happy to c u here, peace
Lolleta, delight me c u here and it's my pleasure, greetings
Mohbaboo, my bro ur existence here brightens my topic. glad to c u, peace
Ls460l, welcome to u my bro, hope u get interest here, regards
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the wrong is in the part two of sentence, the meaning of sentence can be expressed in another way
the correction: i closed my room and don't let him bothers me
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Mine
I had have a car

[lolleta]

hi again

thanks saber for greetings

the correction: i closed my room and don't let him bothers me

the situation all happend in the past .. so the wrong is DONT
it must be like that
i closed my room and didn't let him bothers me



ur sentence

I had have a car

i have a car
or .. i had a car

or i had to have a car

maybe there r more faces to ur sentence .. but that all from me

*_^

[الآنسة سالي]

so

where is ur next wrong one


i`m waiting

[lolleta]

ooh im sorry iforgot to post it
ok

they were fishing but someone has fall in the water

[الآنسة سالي]

ur



they were fishing but someone has fall in the water



A :



they were fishing but someone has fallen in the water


because ,
has and have require a verb after them in the 3rd form


Q:


You must better see a doctor for it`s fever .

[blue star]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله بوركاتهــ ..

Q :

You must better see a doctor for it`s fever

A :

you'd better to see a doctor for it's fever

(: I hope to be true

,,

: My question

If I have enough money , I would buy a car

^
^
thank you for Important topic
(:

[qoot_syria]

HELLO

If I have enough money , I would buy a car

THE CORRECT :

If I have enough money , I WILL buy a car

Q: A Lion doesnot roar as loud as a tiger does

^_^

[Ls460L]

A lion does not roar as loud as a tiger does

OR

A lion doesn't roar as loud as a tiger does

Q: The blind needs more care than any other people

[Schwert]

The blind needs care more than any others people

it may became correct now
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mine
the bee love to be energtic and this what she must be