Our Religion..رأيكم بسرعة

[Misku Chan]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته...

هذي قصيدة من قصائدي.. كتبتها .. واتمنى ان تقرأوها وتعطوني آرائكم فيها ,؛,




Our religion is the religion of justice …..
But some people hate it with no practice….

Our religion made rich n poor equal …..
Our religion bruited love between people….

Our religion is the religion or serious …
Our religion is not imperious ………..

Our religion like pure moon ……
Our religion order to pray in the morning and in the noon..

Our religion like afflux of falls ……..
Our religion by the name of charity calls….

Our religion order to fraternity ……
Our religion bestowed us all humanity ……..

Our religion honed all kindness rules…
Our religion enliven our souls……

Our religion erased all illusions…..
Our religion put for every problem solutions ……

Our religion likes lighting candle …..
Our religion likes smell of sandal…….

Our religion say no for every one traitor…
Our religion capitulated us to one creator……

Our religion kept peace for every one …
Our religion likes it none……

وفقكم الله لما يحب ويرضى ,؛,

اختكم في الله ,؛,

[*ناروتو*]

بالرغم من أن هناك بعض الكلمات القليله التي لم أفهم معناها ,, أو بالاصح لم أفهم مغزاها ,,

الا ان الباقي متألق و راااائع ,,

جزاكم الله خيرا ..

[ShinichiKudo]

Peace be upon you

It's great what you did

I'm glad when I see person has like your resolution

Please allow me to suggest some corrections

But some people hate it with no practice
But some people hate it with no knowledge

Our religion bruited love between people
Our religion spreads love between people

Our religion is the religion or serious
Our religion is the religion or the right

Our religion order to pray in the morning and in the noon
Only
Our religion call us to pray in the day and the night

Our religion by the name of charity calls
Our religion calls for the charity

Our religion order to fraternity
Our religion confirms the fraternity

Our religion put for every problem solutions
Our religion has solutions for every problem

Our religion likes smell of sandal
(I didn't understand what you mean)

Our religion say no for every one traitor
Our religion say:
...no for every traitor

Our religion capitulated us to one creator
Our religion order us to surrender to one creator

Our religion likes it none
Our religion is nothing like it

These are what I have found quickly
I wish you go ahead

..may Allah bless you

[نور الهدى]

جميل أن تكون لكِ موهبة كهذه أتمنى أن تحافظي عليها وتنميها .

[ราซาน]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته
يعني ماشاء الله القصيدة حلوووة وعجبتني جدا جملة
Our religion likes iT none……


ملاحظة صغيرة .::. ياريت بس تكتبين بخط Comic Sans تخلين حرف
الـt كابيتل لإنه يظهر على شكل صليب

[Tomodachi]

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته
كلمات جميله و الله يوفقج

[هالة]

يا سلام على الإبداع :yes2: سلمت أناملك أختي عاشقة الجنة
وفقك الله :smug2:

[Misku Chan]

بالرغم من أن هناك بعض الكلمات القليله التي لم أفهم معناها ,, أو بالاصح لم أفهم مغزاها ,,

الا ان الباقي متألق و راااائع ,,

جزاكم الله خيرا ..

وجزاك خيرا مثله اخي..

شكرا لك على الرد ..

وفقك الله

[Misku Chan]

Peace be upon you


It's great what you did

peace be upon u2
May Allah reward u..

I'm glad when I see person has like your resolution

Thanx bro.. so encoureger words..

Please allow me to suggest some corrections

But some people hate it with no practice
But some people hate it with no knowledge



Our religion bruited love between people
Our religion spreads love between people


Our religion is the religion or serious
Our religion is the religion or the right

Good suggest brother..may it help me the next once

Our religion order to pray in the morning and in the noon
Only
Our religion call us to pray in the day and the night

Hmm.. I toke the prayer side & talked about it..

Our religion by the name of charity calls
Our religion calls for the charity

Our religion order to fraternity
Our religion confirms the fraternity


Our religion put for every problem solutions
Our religion has solutions for every problem

allah bless you 4 these perfect seggusts..it's so good MashAllah..
but when I used these word.. it was 2 be apposite with the sentence which was be4 it..

Our religion likes smell of sandal
(I didn't understand what you mean)

It means that Islam *our religion* has nice smell like sandal's smell.. hope u understand it

Our religion say no for every one traitor
Our religion say:
...no for every traitor

Our religion capitulated us to one creator
Our religion order us to surrender to one creator

Our religion likes it none
Our religion is nothing like it

I liked ur suggests..

Thanx again..

These are what I have found quickly
I wish you go ahead

..may Allah bless you

It's ok..

Enjoyed when I was reading ur reply...

Allah bless u 2 Amin

[Misku Chan]

جميل أن تكون لكِ موهبة كهذه أتمنى أن تحافظي عليها وتنميها .

شكرا لك اختي على كلماتك الرائعة المشجعة..

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته
يعني ماشاء الله القصيدة حلوووة وعجبتني جدا جملة
Our religion likes iT none……


ملاحظة صغيرة .::. ياريت بس تكتبين بخط Comic Sans تخلين حرف
الـt كابيتل لإنه يظهر على شكل صليب

بارك الله فيكِ اختي..وسعيدة لانو فيها مقطع اعجبك..

وشكرا لك على الملاحظة المهمة..

ان شاء الله ما اكتبه مرة ثانية صغير

[Misku Chan]

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

كلمات جميله و الله يوفقج

شكرا لك اخي.. وبارك الله فيك على الرد العطر..

يا سلام على الإبداع :yes2: سلمت أناملك أختي عاشقة الجنة
وفقك الله :smug2:

الله يسلمك اختي الغلية..

شكرا لك كثير..

ووفقكم الله جميعا..

تحياتي : عاشقة الجنة ,؛,

[Hinno]

السلام عليكم..
ماشاء الله عليك..you are wonderful
عن جد ماشاء الله..استمري اختي في تنمية موهبتك هذه..
واسمحي لي ان احتفظ بنسخة عن مقولة هذه ...
وفقك الله لما يحب ويرضى...ياعاشقة الجنة

[devil girl]

what all is this sentences... wow

creative..creative
allah bless u

but there are some mistakes in the poem
not mistakes exactly..but may some words not suitable nearly
like what shinshikudo found

wirth out all what i said
It was cool
so..keep on
and I hope to read more & more
thanks a lot

Diva

[@QUEEN_MOON@]

مشكورة اختي عاشقة الجنة بالعفل كلام رائع جدا
اتمنى ان تستمري في هاي الموهبة الرائعة اختك كوين مون