Thanks supervisor Asma: )
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That's right dear Shsmd, you have some mistakes, But, although I understood the meaning that you want to say, notice this
No problem if you have grammatical mistakes in writing, but problem is when you stop writing because of these mistakes
Mistakes teach, so welcome it^ ^1
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People, there's an idea in my mind, but I'm not sure of it is good enough
what is your opinion to make a short story competition, there will be nice time to spend, shinning Medal, get some joy, and learn new thing through your participation
let us see your opinions and suggestions