A GAME: Discover, correct, and write another mistake

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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته


    How are you? It’s cold here and am freezing to death
    ~_~
    I hope you are doing well and enjoying your life





    So this is a new game, about
    MISTAKES
    You know, it’s normal to
    err.. but the abnormal is to ignore your mistake without correction
    ..



    In this game, you are going to
    discover a mistake within a sentence, then correct it.. after that write another sentence which must include a mistake (only and only one mistake)l
    ..





    Example : )



    Me
    : I go to school yesterday, but it was closed!l

    The mistake is (
    go)i

    Correction

    I
    went to school yesterday, but it was closed!




    Then you should write another mistake that needs a correction,


    They has broke the window




    So yeah. Let’s begin





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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    افتراضي رد: A GAME: Discover, correct, and write another mistake

    so here we begin

    with

    They has broke the window




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    الصورة الرمزية Miaka Yuki

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    nino is a beautiful girl ^^>out.gif" border="0" alt="" title="0" class="inlineimg" />


    thanks so much




    They has broke the window
    the mistake is (
    has broke).

    Correction:
    They
    have broken the window


    my sentence:

    She need to save some money

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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    am beautiful... oh i already know that :P
    thnx hny

    she
    need to save some money

    (it's easier to color the mistake rather than re-writing )

    correction
    she
    needs to save some money


    my new sentence

    she cans sing loudly

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    الصورة الرمزية أَصِيلُ الحَكَايَا

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    وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته ،،


    Nino god save your activity my darling , thanks for your effort,your coordination is so beautiful

    we don’t have to mention the reason , do we ?
    h

    she cans sing loudly


    she can sing loudly

    - I were very scared> easy,huh? : )h

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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

    [h=5]{♥} Ameen hny [/h][h=5]all i need is to make you exchange your knowledge
    [/h]
    I
    were very scared

    correction

    I
    was very scared

    ok if you have that time to explain why, so why not ? go on hny


    my sentence

    if she was you, she would find a solution

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    الصورة الرمزية أَصِيلُ الحَكَايَا

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    السلام عليكم ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته ،،

    if she was you, she would find a solution


    if she
    were you, she would find a solution

    because it’s impossible to be her, it’s one of if’s cases > I think..but I can’t remember which one

    - why did you went early yesterday ?
    h

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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    you are very close : ) it's the subjunctive mood of verb when it comes to the unreal conditions
    we deal with singular as the plural
    just only in this case

    for example, in the case of (IF II ) and ( wish mood ) hmmm

    good examples are here
    http://www.ceafinney.com/subjunctive/examples.html
    .................................................. ........

    why did you went early yesterday ?

    Why did you go early yesterday ?


    the new sentence

    I think guitar is very expensive










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    افتراضي رد: A GAME: Discover, correct, and write another mistake

    Hallo There
    It's such a wonderful topic
    How creativity prof.Nino
    I liked it, this topic and the previous one are come in a suitable time for me
    Thanks a bundle : )
    ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
    I think guitar is very expensive
    I think the guitar is very expensive
    or
    I think that guitar is very expensive
    I actually don't know what's the right
    ~_~
    ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
    My Sentence: I had left the letter for you when I had left the house

















    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Schwert ; 27-11-2012 الساعة 09:17 PM

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    I had left the letter for you when I had left the house
    I left the letter for you when I was leaving the house


    my sentence:
    I'm not like you

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    الصورة الرمزية Schwert

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    in fact, I expected to see this correction
    I
    had left the letter for you when I left the house(past perfect tense+past simple tense)1
    and your correction, I don't know if it's suitable : )
    ************************************************** ********
    I'm not like you
    >>>I don't like you
    *************************************
    I am going to school everyday

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    الصورة الرمزية Miaka Yuki

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    ummm I think
    the correction
    I was leaving the letter for you when I left the house

    look here

    http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/v...ntinuous_u.htm

    I am going to school everyday
    I go to school everyday
    is't right?
    ......
    Did you talked with me?

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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    can't say that you are wrong
    both can be right
    ..

    but the context is the judge whether leaving the letter was a complete action ( past perfect) or in progress (past continuous )i
    ..

    go on guys

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    السّـلام عليكم ورحمَةُ اللهِ وبركاتُـه

    How are you everyone?, This topic is very beautiful, I ask Allah to make your heart happy,Nino chan ^__^

    Did you
    talked with me?
    the mistake is "
    talked"

    correction

    Did you
    talk with me?

    -------------------------------------------------

    After read the lesson, he answered the questions



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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    After read the lesson, he answered the questions

    after reading the lesson, he answered the questions
    or

    after he had read the lesson, he answered the questions

    my new sentence
    I am sure, it is going to rain soon

















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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Nino chan مشاهدة المشاركة

    After read the lesson, he answered the questions

    after reading the lesson, he answered the questions
    or

    after he had read the lesson, he answered the questions

    my new sentence
    I am sure, it is going to rain soon

    Correction
    ::

    Hmmm
    .. Let's see
    I am sure it's going to rain soon

    Let someone take my turn if I'm correct
    ::.

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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    it's human to err


    it's
    it'll rain soon
    you know, when you're sure about sth, use will not going to


    my new one
    pollution are destructive

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    الصورة الرمزية Miaka Yuki

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    ummm
    pollution are destructive
    A pollution is destructive
    is't true?

    my sentence:
    Don't tryed to make it a better

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    Hello
    Nice topic
    I like it , thank you ^_^

    Don't tryed to make it
    a better
    Don't
    try to make it better

    ?is it true



    :my sentence

    My teacher like the good students :P

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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    A pollution is destructive





    you know hny, pollution is an uncountable noun, so you deal with it as a singular noun.. but you mustn't use a\an articles
    so the correction would be

    pollution is destructive



    My teacher like the good students :P

    my teacher
    likes the good students

    my new sentence

    she is more happy than me


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