Can you continue the Story ??

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    الصورة الرمزية يوجينا

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    افتراضي Can you continue the Story ??




    HI all , wish you fine and well
    and exams was easy
    "dreams "

    the idea of the topic simply :
    is to continue the story


    let your thoughts be free
    and write here as you wish
    don't finish the story just continue it


    Start :

    Once upon a time, there was a girl called "Jamela"
    she was 24 years old
    and live in flat with her friend "Lily"
    they were working at communication company

    two days ago when Jamela went back to her home
    she found a letter from someone she didn't expect ...



    waiting for your completion ^_*
    and hope you like the idea ...

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    الصورة الرمزية Nino chan

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    افتراضي رد: Can you continue the Story ??


    She was totally confused about the letter; to open it or to keep it away. There were almost ages since she got contact with her elder sister who has sent the letter.

    'What are you doing Jamela?'
    lLily suddenly appear with astonished face.

    'Am ammm actully there's something strange and I don't know what has happened to make my sister send a letter after all of these years of separation'
    said Jamela


    ..Lily smiled and said





    peace be upon you my dear sister
    exams were kinda good, I wish to pass only :")
    a nice topic
    keep going on dear
    salam

    “و ماذا تساوي حياة لست فيها النبض يا أمي؟؟”

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    you can't know unless you open the letter " lily said "
    Jamela told lily that she will open it later
    but she took the letter and entered her room
    although she didn't want to open it , but her curious was big
    so she finally open it ...

    I know it is a long time Jamela
    we not talking since our mather's dead
    and I am sorry for blaming you for that accident
    I need to see you very soon , I really need your help
    meet me tomorrow night at our parents home
    I 'll wait you and I know you 'll come , you must come
    your sister,
    Neven

    ...


    thx Nino , Isa you 'll pass with high score
    wish that for me toooo ;)

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    الصورة الرمزية Miaka Yuki

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    افتراضي رد: Can you continue the Story ??


    Thanks for good idea

    Jamela closed the letter and set crying
    she has remembered that day when her mother was died
    she missed to that days when she with her mother read a book , watching tv and cooking. Then, She decide to meet her sister tomorrow.

    اللهم ارحم واغفر لحبيبتي أثير وأكرم نزلها وران وأبي عبدالله وعبدالله الدافور وشيهو وجميع موتانا وموتى المسلمين وارحمنا واغفرلنا وتب علينا واستر عنا وعلينا يوم نلقاك نحن ووالدينا وأخوتنا وأحبتنا.
    أحنّ إلى أيام مضت ولن تعود ولم تعد، اللهم أحيي قلوبنا بالإيمان

    أحبكم يا آل مسومس جميعا. *إن اختفيت يومًا لاتنسوني من دعواتكم.
    دخول متذبذب /مكتـبه القرآن الصوتية,http://ask.fm/Miaka18

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    الصورة الرمزية يوجينا

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    افتراضي رد: Can you continue the Story ??


    Street, houses ,...
    Jamela remember all the memories when she was lived here at her parents house

    The door rang and Neven -her sister- opened it,
    they stood stared at each others
    and finally Neven told Jamela to come inside

    the dust was covering every thing in the home
    and also silent between the two sisters
    and finally Neven said "
    I know Jamela you upset from me for blaming you about our mother's death
    I know now I was wrong ...
    "
    Jamela: "
    why do you open that topic now Neven ,It's one year now after my mother death"
    Neven:"
    I 'll tell you ...
    two days ago I was here to clean the house and pay the bills
    I found letter from our mother and here it is... "


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    الصورة الرمزية Miaka Yuki

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    .. Jamela is laying her hand on Neven's shoulder and said to her
    "
    Are not you lair? Is't right? You found letter from our mother"
    "Yes, I'm not lair. What's wrong with you? Are you tired? if you are tired, tell me. I'm your sister, you know." said Neven.
    " I feel good Alhamadullah, but I can't imagine you found something from our kind mother." said Jamela.

    اللهم ارحم واغفر لحبيبتي أثير وأكرم نزلها وران وأبي عبدالله وعبدالله الدافور وشيهو وجميع موتانا وموتى المسلمين وارحمنا واغفرلنا وتب علينا واستر عنا وعلينا يوم نلقاك نحن ووالدينا وأخوتنا وأحبتنا.
    أحنّ إلى أيام مضت ولن تعود ولم تعد، اللهم أحيي قلوبنا بالإيمان

    أحبكم يا آل مسومس جميعا. *إن اختفيت يومًا لاتنسوني من دعواتكم.
    دخول متذبذب /مكتـبه القرآن الصوتية,http://ask.fm/Miaka18

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    افتراضي رد: Can you continue the Story ??


    ,,, Dear my daughters
    if you read this letter that's mean I am not with you right now
    I love you so much

    and you must know that and you must forgive me
    I told you lies about your father death
    I am so sorry but I was afraid about you
    your father is alive

    I married your father after along love story
    but after marriage we were fight on everything
    he was jealous , nervous for simple things
    and I was young and want to work to achieve my goals on work
    problems start to be bigger and I can't handle it any more

    so I decided to take you and runaway from that city
    Now I am very sorry about that
    and all I want from you is
    to search for your father and live with him

    he is very gentle and really a good man
    may be we not made for each other

    please love each other and search for your father

    your lovely mum ,,


    ***************************************thanks so much Miaka to keep this story going on ^^

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    -“Alive?” said Jamela “how can that be?”
    -“I don’t know but we have to search for him!” said Neven.
    _”I am not going but you can go fetch him if you want!”.
    _”are you still angry? …but I already apologized!” said Neven with a sad look on her face.
    -“I AM angry but not on you, I can’t believe it …if he is alive and kicking … then he should have searched for us!”
    A voice came from behind them “but he did search, for years!...”

    I just wanted to participate since it seemed fun , I wish someone would continue from here^^

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