Don't angry

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    الصورة الرمزية ساعة التخدير

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    افتراضي Don't angry

    Don't angry

    There was a boy who is always losing his temper. His father gave him a bag full of
    nails My son, I went you to hammer" and said to him, a nail into our garden fence every
    ".time you need to direct your anger against something and you lose your temper

    ,So the son started to follow his father's advice.On the first day he hammered in 37 nails
    but getting the nails into the fence was not easy, so he started trying to control himself
    when he got angry.As the days went by, he was hammering in less nails, and within
    weeks he was able to control himself and was able to refrain from getting angry and
    .form hammering nails

    He came to his father and told him what he had achieved. His father was happy with
    his efforts and said to him"but now, my son, you have to take out a nail for every day
    ". that you do not get angry
    the son started to take out the nails for each day that he did not get angry, until there
    .were no nails left in the fence

    He came to his father and told him what he had achieved.His father took him to the
    .fence and said" My son, you have done well, but look at these holes in the fence
    This fence will never be the same again"then:he added" When you say things in a state
    .of anger, they leave marks like these holes on the hearts of others
    You can stab a person and withdraw the knife: but it doesn't matter how many times you
    .say "I'm sorry", because the wound will remain



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    الصورة الرمزية OTAKU SAMA

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    افتراضي رد: Don't angry

    it was amazing
    the concept of the story was outstanding
    the thing that i found nice because i dont like reading looong stories is the way that u made the story short but have a deep meaning

    but i feel if u was away of the red colour would be better

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    افتراضي رد: Don't angry

    .Such a good story
    .I like it
    ."But the title should be "Don't be angry

    Thanks ^_^

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    افتراضي رد: Don't angry

    what a wise father
    Interesting thoary in the end .
    and It's would be batter if you correct it into - Don't Get Angry - i found it more appropriate

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