How to write a nice organized poem

[Gentle Fist]

in the name of god most gracious most merciful
then ...

I have noticed some potential in our msomsians in POETRY
so I am gonna teach yo the basics i writing a poem :

Well there are 2 types

The first type ( 2 rhymes 1 chapter )

well this type needs less time and it is much easier
because you will have 2 rhymes in 1 chapter

Example :
The Words penetrate
into every body's soul
and with me you always manipulate
Stop that I am not your Doll
Example End
you see this is 1 chapter and I had 2 rhymes in it

Rules :
1) ORDER !! : do not mix the rhymes have them organized
2) beauty of the words and meaning : well this is a rule that every poet should follow
PS : the ending should rhyme in sounds not spelling !! we see many people think that we should rhyme the spelling NO !! you see the words Soul and doll not the same spelling ends but the same sound ending ^_^


The Second type ( 1 rhyme per chapter )

in this type you gotta follow one rhyme per chapter and you may change the sub topic in the next chapter because the poem is not connected but you can not change dynamically like moving from nature to love NO !!

Rules :
1) you can change the rhyme each chapter only
2) you can change the sub topic each chapter
3) if you ended a rhyme you do not return to it
those are the most important things in poetry !!
* I may post an example later *

How to ??

1) set a main topic in your head
2) write the first line freely
* the next move varies in each type *
3A ) you can write the next line freely
3B) look for words tat rhymes with the Ending of your last word in the previous line
4) keep the meaning clear
5) use beautiful words* this will attract people to your poem *
6) DO not differ in each line length a lot


Well this is what do I have to say

Well I w8 your first poems !



I might post one here XD

Thanks for reading Uncle Gentle Fist

[the Assassin]

Yari ... Yari...
Look who is here ... Bernard Show
hohohoho
wassap mate...
as u said u gonna teach us how to write a poem
Well.. lets start

in the name of god most gracious most merciful
then

When we start a topic we say
in the name of Allah most gracious most merciful
Cos we don't write god with small letter
b-cos when we write it this way
then its like we obey more than one god
we just only write it like
God
cos we reffer to one God which is Allah
if u ask me from where i picked this info
i'll say its from my teacher
where i really learned english...

so I am gonna teach yo the basics i writing a poem

we don't say it like u said it...

either we say
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics to write a poem
or
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics how to write a poem

The Words penetrate
into every body's soul
and with me you always manipulate
Stop that I am not your Doll
Example End
you see this is 1 chapter and I had 2 rhymes in it

...I think there is a lil bit misunderstanding
cos u've read
this rhyme once upon a time

No place that I’m able to go
Even though I have so much pain to show
Picture me as a golden star rolling
Taking the rest of what I’ve befallen
------

No place would accept my pain

Even though dudes call me insane

Picture my pain running 24-7

Taking the rest, and nothing is coming

I think u've seen it somewhere

PS : the ending should rhyme in sounds not spelling !! we see many people think that we should rhyme the spelling NO !! you see the words Soul and doll not the same spelling ends but the same sound ending ^_^

hehe...

i think go and show are not the same spelling

Same as

Rolling.. Beffallen

Pain.. insaine

..coming.. 24-7

hehe nice try pal..

but if u read it so well

u can make sure of the letter

and how its pronounced

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well this is a rule that every poet should follow

U have a nice rule

huh

...
let me give u a hint...
do u know what hip-hop or rap
is all about...
either poems or rhymes...
if u don't know nothing about'em
i think u should read this articl
=============
Types of Rhyme
==============
Have a good night mr-Master English

and pls start with types of Rhyme to see what
rhymes is all about
so
As u said
NO HARD FEELINGS

Peace out
h3h3

[Gentle Fist]

THankie
you took your revenge I will review it myself because I type tooo fast '
and I can't check because I type too fast ok thankie !!



and about the types these are the basics
after these 2
comes the ones mentions in article

alright bye bye

^_________________________________________________ ___________^

[Gentle Fist]

Yari ... Yari...
Look who is here ... Bernard Show
hohohoho
wassap mate...
as u said u gonna teach us how to write a poem
Well.. lets start

When we start a topic we say
in the name of Allah most gracious most merciful
Cos we don't write god with small letter
b-cos when we write it this way
then its like we obey more than one god
we just only write it like
God
cos we reffer ( rifer) to one God which is Allah
if u ask me from where i picked this info
i'll say its from my teacher
where i really learned english( English )...

we don't say it like u said it...

( mmmm the god here is Allah and about the capital My bad )

either we say
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics to write a poem
or
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics how to write a poem

( it is I'm gonna teach you the basics of writing a poem )

...I think there is a lil bit misunderstanding
cos u've read
this rhyme once upon a time

No place that I’m able to go
Even though I have so much pain to show
Picture me as a golden star rolling
Taking the rest of what I’ve befallen
------

No place would accept my pain

Even though dudes call me insane

Picture my pain running 24-7

Taking the rest, and nothing is coming

I think u've seen it somewhere

hehe...

i think go and show are not the same spelling

Same as

Rolling.. Beffallen

Pain.. insaine

..coming.. 24-7

hehe nice try pal..

but if u read it so well

u can make sure of the letter

and how its pronounced

errr ..... didn't I say that the spelling endings doesn't count ?!
and it's how we pronounce it what matters ??
===========

U have a nice rule

huh

...
let me give u a hint...
do u know what hip-hop or rap
is all about...
either poems or rhymes...
if u don't know nothing about'em
i think u should read this articl
=============
Types of Rhyme
==============
Have a good night mr-Master English ( err after mister you must type a dot )

and pls start with types of Rhyme to see what
rhymes is all about
so
As u said
NO HARD FEELINGS

Peace out
h3h3

errrr

I am gonna correct your correcting ok ?!

[the Assassin]

h3h3h3h3
i think u have something worng...
cos u didn't notice that
this is my habit
and i ain't gon to change it 4 such a person
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and about the correction..
u mintioned that its how to say it at the end
its not how it should be written
cos it has to follow the sequance...
and these types
u've mintioned are types
but u are so confidnt when u said it
they comes after what i have given you...
anyway....
u don't wanna adimt it thats fine...
but at least i proved my point of view
which make ur reaction comes wild...
cos first when i replied to ur topic about bad words
All of a suden u correct some spellings in my topic
and after that u wrote a topic which explane the
great way of writing a poem >>for the reason that u don't want
to admit that its rhyme...
... nice to have u around...
but check ur replies to see that I've made u so angry
anyways.... so long mate...
it was a pricless moments correcting your masterpiece

BTW... i'm sick of such a chit-chat)
cos its not going to end...
anyhow..
as ppl say

(ppl are not what they are appear to be

[Gentle Fist]

I am bored you win I dont want you to read your reply though >.<

[ناروتو]

continue bro. even If u faced someone try to correct ur languge .. I know u feel down b-coz of him but remember that he's gonna correct ur mistake to be the best.

come on .. I wanna try to love the poems and how can I disscs them esaily

the poems make me sick loOoOol

[the Assassin]

continue bro. even If u faced someone try to correct ur languge .. I know u feel down b-coz of him but remember that he's gonna correct ur mistake to be the best.

come on .. I wanna try to love the poems and how can I disscs them esaily

the poems make me sick loOoOol

YARI .. YARI
bro u misunderstand the whole thing

cos we've been challinging
to flame the forum
as u see the forum
is kinda sleepy

we have to get it awaken

anyway
its cool that u adimre poems
but keep going

[ناروتو]

loool ok if it's just challing

dai jo bo ni -san

ah by the way .. I'm Girl ^_^

[Gentle Fist]

Why ?!! XD

anyways thanks for passing I guess >.<

[the Assassin]

loool ok if it's just challing

dai jo bo ni -san

ah by the way .. I'm Girl ^_^

WTH

My bad

anyways dear darling
so sorry for the misunderstanding
and BTW
take this as an apologie
When i called her bro
she refliect what was though
sweetness and admiration
which makes me in a bad situation
so sorry