*=\/..waitin to thé néxt train..\/=*

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    الصورة الرمزية Gentle Fist

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    افتراضي رد: *=\/..waitin to thé néxt train..\/=*

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin مشاهدة المشاركة

    wassap boys and girls
    Cab=
    how is ur summer

    hope its good with flamy sun

    hehe
    so how is the popcorn

    did u all bring it
    cos its a romantic show
    comon u know the rule
    I ain't give nobody

    so lets roll

    *=\/..waitin to thé néxt train..\/=*


    Ages upon ages
    I turned all pages
    Going to realize
    Whats the stabilize
    Is it setting alone?
    Or a dead zone!
    Reminiscing my past
    The way I act
    Finding some clues
    To follow the rules
    Nice beginning >.<






    Looking at the stars
    Till my face got scars
    Holding down my breath
    Coming to be a myth
    Seeking my pages
    Nothing, but deadly stages




    Till I saw her smile
    I kept smiling for a while
    She comes to switch
    My life, & pain that glitch
    Love she gave
    Deeper engrave
    My heart is fade
    Of what she’ve made




    My senses becomes lighten
    When she kept smiling
    I forgot my history
    Where I was in misery
    She picked me up
    With love that won’t stop
    What can I do?
    To give her love too
    She is all I need
    No money indeed




    I owe her my life
    She is the best wife
    Come to see this word
    Things I can afford
    Love all I can say
    And Allah I obey
    I’ll give u a love
    It’s not a puzzle to solve
    2= 1 + 1
    This what we created to



    Twins will last forever
    Hope we be together
    This is my next train
    Nobody would call me insane
    Thank u my dear princess
    For glittering my senses
    Remember the way we roll
    And be a splendid naughty soul

    here i'm. i've finished this topic
    but there is one thing
    A word of thanks
    and
    nice comments


    The poem is awesome

    I have no comment
    I really like it Soooooo touchy

    keep going you got great poetry skills

    I really love all of your poems >.<

    Thanks

    Gentlooooh

    >.<

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    الصورة الرمزية the Assassin

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    كاتب الموضوع

    Thumbs down رد: *=\/..waitin to thé néxt train..\/=*

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    what the hell is that

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    الصورة الرمزية Demor

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    افتراضي رد: *=\/..waitin to thé néxt train..\/=*

    OMG

    This is just like magic

    LooooL

    really soo nice ....

    I liked it sooooo much ما شاء الله عليك

    and the coordination is fantastic ,,,, when I read the begining I knew it's not going to be like any poem

    so creatve

    Sooo coool

    and granpa ... I can write too ... don't give him sweets 4 this ><

    or I will

    hahahahahaha

    C U



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    الصورة الرمزية mis eima

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    افتراضي رد: *=\/..waitin to thé néxt train..\/=*

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin مشاهدة المشاركة
    16vistors

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    what the hell is that

    do't get sad thay jast

    -yes0" class="inlineimg" />do't know what to write because your poem is wonderful

    i realy realy realy like it
    by the way
    are still hold your gun

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