Memories by Old Mo7trf (قصيده)

[محترف]

الســــــــــلام عليـــــــــــــكم

I post this poem in memory of my cousin
Old Mo7trf : Passed Away June 2007

اضع هذه القصيده لذكرى قريبي (محترف الاول)
توفي شهر يناير 2007

this is his poem
he didn't finished it
he was my teacher

هذه قصيدته
ولم يكملها
كان معلمي

oh the past
so much to remember
it's like another life

* * *

just rememberin' things
makes my brain goes BOOM

* * *
oh my love where are you
i want you to make the pain go away

* * *
I remember the time
the time that we had together
I remember the things
that used to makes us laugh
and I wish I would laugh every day

* * *
I'm Boilin' like water
when you're so hot like fire
I'm freezin' like water
when you're so cold like ice

* * *
BO-OM
that's the sound of the BOOM
goin' inside my brain
tryin' to remember all that time
and see my life now without you

* * *
I just figured now
my life is so empty like an open door

* * *
Lonely ? is that what I'm now
desprate ? is that what I'm gonna be
Broken ? is that what people think of me

* * *
sometimes I wish for a Gun to shoot myself
and makes my heart rest in peace
oh God help me please

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he stoped here

he still better that me in poetry
i don't blame him
he was my teacher after all

i'll try to write somethin' new
i wanna be as good as Old Mo7trf

Mo7trf_American language teacher

G.B.Y

[سلمى1415]

Thank you, my esteemed brother to write this poem.........

Frankly, is a poem with the words of a great
Waiting for more creativity

And good luck

[محترف]

السماء الزرقاء1
you're welcome sis
and everybody must get hurt every once and a while


سلمى1415
you're welcome too
but you should thank Old Mo7trf Not me
for writin' this poem

[Sweet Dark]

he was such a graet teacher i think

his paom was showing his sadnesses

so broken haert

hope you become like your teacher

[محترف]

Sweet Dark
yeah he was a great person
soo shy not talkin' to much
and I don't wanna end like him broken
love can be soo harsh some times
but I wanna be as good as him
thanks alot for the reply

[أسمـــاء]

sorry for being late

i really do not know what to say
Allah bless you
and give his mercy for your teacher

......... in such a case i think we become speachless

i honestly admire the relationship that gathered you and your teacher
and admire the way you are faithful for the one who taught you how you must be ....
............................
he had pain in life and wanted to die because he got sick of pain
his feelings was so true
............
well.... alot in this world suffer pain while no one knows about the pain they got and they may die holding their feelings as a secret with them .... and no one notices how much they were suffering .... some people used to hide their pain to the digree that when others tell you how much he suffers you become surprised and can't believe it ...

and this depends on the strength they've got .....

anyway .... i like the poem and you'r teacher would be happy if he were to know that you are studying to reach the level he was ....


Thanks brother
keep goinig

[محترف]

well that's my teacher
even though he was like my age
but he was an amazin' Guy
didn't know english very well
too bad he didn't finished the poem
it was goin' to be a fantastic poem
but he wrote better than me in everythin' here
I'm workin' so hard to reach him
if he was here now
I won't let'em relax ^^
untill I get to his level
thank you for the beautiful reply

[dallo]

HEY MO7TRF NICE POEM

ITS LOOK LIKE A SONG I HEARED BEFORE

BUT ANY WAY ITS A GREAT POEM I REALLY LIKEAD IT SO MUCH

THAANXX U SO MUCH

JANA

[Demor]

so nice ...

الله يرحمه

we're waiting to see a poem from u brother

too bad he didn't finished the poem

you can complete it ^_~

Good luck

Demor