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    الصورة الرمزية the Assassin

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    HEY FOLKS
    its been an ages since i wrote
    somthing around here..
    and tbh, i'm on fire to share
    you this brand new poem
    ...
    so be ready
    e067" class="inlineimg" />
    My topic is all about wondering
    ..
    i was having some kinda Qustions
    which run deep inside me!
    and i didn't got any answer to them
    so .. share me the pain


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    Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
    while dudes around calling u insane



    Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
    While dudes around say u're wrong
    ..


    Is it hard to go beyond your imagination?
    While u feel the pleasent of ur collaboration ..


    Is it hard to move up from the same place?
    While you have cried from the same face..



    Is it hard to feel that you will achieve something
    While you feel the power deep inside running..



    Is it hard to be some kinda hero,
    while you were having some kinda sorrow



    Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
    While every one around looks at u gladly



    Is it hard to ask, and wait for some answers
    While the waiting is killing u like a cancer


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    I'm waitin u
    so don't leave
    me alone
    i need those answers

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    الصورة الرمزية Do Ri Me

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    Hello ... How are you brother today
    ??
    the words that you wrote are full of sad facts in the really life

    but there is sth that drag me


    Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
    While every one around looks at u gladly


    that's hapened when you feel that your work is the worst
    and can't trust your self that you r the best

    coz the picture in the mind ... I can't do it , I'm such a FAILURE

    what u r thinking of one like me ??


    and that's a
    see u and perhaps I'll comeback

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    الصورة الرمزية mis eima

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    BrB







    just kidding
    what all this deep sadness Mr. Assassin

    i like the way you write the poem
    i want to answer you with apoem
    but i'm so bad with that so

    so i will let Azuma answer you
    Azuma brings up his activity

    see you

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    الصورة الرمزية the Assassin

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة دوريميفاسولاسي مشاهدة المشاركة
    Hello ... How are you brother today
    ??
    the words that you wrote are full of sad facts in the really life

    but there is sth that drag me

    Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
    While every one around looks at u gladly


    that's hapened when you feel that your work is the worst
    and can't trust your self that you r the best

    coz the picture in the mind ... I can't do it , I'm such a FAILURE

    what u r thinking of one like me ??


    and that's a
    see u and perhaps I'll comeback

    hey brilliant
    its been a long time

    thanks anyway
    ok
    ...
    :they say
    faliuer is the father of sucess
    remember that
    -yes0" class="inlineimg" />
    its okay if you shed tears
    but its not okay to sit down
    for long time
    you don't have to give up
    the hope
    life is kinda simple
    but its not understandable
    so get ur self up
    and rememeber
    no one is better than u
    just re-charger urself with hope
    and do whatever it takes to be
    brilliant

    thanks sis for the shiny words
    you really flattered my heart

    c u around cheery

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    الصورة الرمزية the Assassin

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    BrB




    hahahahahahahahahaha

    so brilliant





    just kidding
    what all this deep sadness Mr. Assassin

    i like the way you write the poem
    i want to answer you with apoem
    but i'm so bad with that so

    so i will let Azuma answer you
    Azuma brings up his activity


    see you



    i wished you could write something to flatter me
    thanks anyway

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin مشاهدة المشاركة
    HEY FOLKS


    its been an ages since i wrote
    somthing around here..
    and tbh, i'm on fire to share
    you this brand new poem
    ...
    so be ready
    e067" class="inlineimg" />
    My topic is all about wondering
    ..
    i was having some kinda Qustions
    which run deep inside me!
    and i didn't got any answer to them
    so .. share me the pain


    |~||~|||~||~|

    ● ||●||● ●° I Wonder °● ●||●||●

    |~||~|||~||~|



    Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
    while dudes around calling u insane


    Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
    While dudes around say u're wrong
    ..

    Is it hard to go beyond your imagination?
    While u feel the pleasent of ur collaboration ..


    Is it hard to move up from the same place?
    While you have cried from the same face..


    Is it hard to feel that you will achieve something
    While you feel the power deep inside running..


    Is it hard to be some kinda hero,
    while you were having some kinda sorrow


    Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
    While every one around looks at u gladly


    Is it hard to ask, and wait for some answers
    While the waiting is killing u like a cancer


    |~||~|||~||~|


    I'm waitin u
    so don't leave
    me alone
    i need those answers





    you know ... brother your words are full of honest feelings
    they really touche a suffering deppressed heart like mine now
    i know ... some times you feel like you are something great big...
    you feel like you're proud of yourself but, there must be pain
    it is the nature of mankind... tears...is there a humanbeing who doesn't cried ever??
    i think this what distiguishs us from other creaturs
    and it is a blessing that we may get rid of not all but some sorrow by seeping tears
    ....................................

    you are wondering and asking difficult questions that i do not know their answers either
    but ... i am not sure .. ..this is what i can say

    Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
    while dudes around calling u insane


    Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
    While dudes around say u're wrong
    ....................

    am sorry .. but .. yes it is somewhat hard
    No.. if you go deep and think of it you will find it so hard

    people used to unerstimate others whom they do not know
    people used to rpeat the same talk without even giving themselves a chance to think what they are babbling about

    i have something to say
    is it hard to keep telling yourself you are a good dude
    is it hard to wipe your tears and smile again when you remember something called Hope
    is it hard to try your best and show others who is the insane
    is it hard to cry sying i can do it
    ...........................

    i believe in something called challenging yourself
    it is embarissing to talk about myself
    but ,truly i have tried this thing
    you might hate yourself
    you might feel that you'r not gonna do any thing
    if you take other's disdain seriously
    am saying that it is hard at first, but gradually you will find it easy
    you would face difficulities to pass all that
    however you will pass it after all
    i am sure
    just
    give yourself a possitive view
    ................

    your poem is so brilliant
    and your feelings showed has been exactly understood and remind us of something called pain , but, after long time, when you remember that old pain , you would think of it as a pain mixed with the sweetness of your strength and ability to pass it away

    i have alot to say about pain that i may get out of the main theme
    ...................
    a pleasure to meet you with a new interesting poem
    and i warn you if you stopped writing them

    Thanks brother ^^
    Azuma
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة أسمـــاء ; 15-4-2009 الساعة 03:06 AM

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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    Eima ^^
    nice to see you here
    see
    i did what you recommended
    and i really wanted to write
    this one BRB
    though , ido not use it that much ,but there must be exceptions for those like me who has not used it befor
    to use it for once
    hahahaahaha

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    الصورة الرمزية Schwert

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    WB, how are u my friend, about this poem I saw my friend that there is not thing come to us easily and this happened with me in fact, frankly I see that the life is hard not easy, many ppl want to be something and have a goals but when they begin sees many difficulties stand in front of them and may be give up in end only the strong stay and win in end, is it hard yes some ppl see it hard but I like the person who has hopful and confidence to destroy any thing stand in front of he, the life beautiful but it is hard, thanks my mate for ur topic & see you
    Coaf

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