*Robin*
5-12-2009, 05:12 PM
Yeah That is Right Eid and Holiday is over ...returning to exams and suffering ^_^
Ok i am not good at intoduction so i will do directly
OfCourse most of you remember the H.S.C
OR Huge Summer Competetion
Made By Mr Assasin and Mr Black Fox
and there was story department so i think i could share the story i put in the test with you and i hope you will like it
http://up4.m5zn.com/9bjndthcm6y53q1w0kvpz47xgs82rf/2009/12/5/07/s7ycyedka.jpg
Insomnia
Chapter 1”Nightmare”
Mark ran in a dark pathway as there was something chasing him ,he suddenly stopped as the way was blocked ,he looked behind and saw red eyes coming towards him he saw the devil holding a big sword and said “Now you will get what you deserve “ and Mark saw the sword became close to his neck ,,when he woke up he was sweaty and looked to himself and said “thanks god it is just nightmare “
He looked to the watch in front of him and it was 2.30 A.M
Mark said to himself “damn I slept only 10 minutes “
He decided to make a cup of coffee and watch tv till morning .
Chapter 2
“The perfect Lie”
Next day Mark went to work and when he reached. there were policemen and detectives making investigations and he knew that one of the employees found dead in his apartment by stab wound and his name was Carl .One of the detectives asked Mark if he knew any information that might help to arrest the killer but Mark said that he did not have a close relation with Carl and suddenly he said to the detective “but I think Carl had a problem with Tom as I heard that he was cheating with his wife “
The detective smiled “thanks for your co operation Mr Mark we appreciate this and here is my number if you remembered anything related to the accident “
Mark said ”My Pleasure ,sir”
Chapter 3
“Horror Rise”
Mark returned home and he was very tired from that day ,he had his dinner and entered the bathroom .He looked in the mirror and suddenly he saw the face of a demon in the mirror he screamed and looked behind but there was nothing ,he took a deep breath and went to bed and when he slept he had the same nightmare and he could not sleep again
Chapter 4
“suffering”
Next day Mark went to work and he knew that the police arrested Tom as they found evidence “knife with blood of victim” in his flat and the police get the information according to mystery call .
He returned to home and the nightmares repeated every night till he couldn’t sleep because of fear and he always kept the light on and this affected him badly in work and own health and he always late to work till his boss fired him and his life became like hell. When the situation became impossible he decided to make a call ,a call that might save his life and give him rest so he pick up the phone and dialed a number .
Chapter 5
“what really happened”
The day before the first nightmare Mark went to the work but when he reached there were no anyone .he was happy because this would make his mission easy he went to the big safe and started to break it to steal the money .Suddenly a flash light fell on his face .
“well well Mr Mark you are in a difficult situation “ said Carl
Mark left what he was doing and he was so afraid .
“please Carl I will not steal the money but please don’t call the police “said Mark
Carl smiled and said “no Mark what do you think about me I am not a monster of course I will not call the police but we have to make a deal “
Mark asked “ok what deal ?”
Carl said “from now you have to give me 50% from your salary –fees- “
Mark held one of the sharp tool he used to open the safe and stab Carl saying “My pleasure “and Carl fell dead immediately.
Chapter 6
“The Plan and salvation “
Mark did not believe what he already did but he said to himself that he needed to calm down and tried to think about a plan to get out of this problem
He carried the dead body and put it at the back of the car and drove till Carl house and took the key from Carl s jacket and open his flat and put the body in it ..
Next day when the police came he brought the sharp tool and put it in Toms suitcase and he removed his fingerprints from the tool .
All these thought came to his mind while dialing the number .
Police officer :police station here sir how can I help you ?
Mark :I want to inform about a crime that I did please .
The case closed and Mark put in the prison till time when he would be electrocuted.
The day before the electrocuted ,Mark for his first time since this accident he slept deeply like a baby and smile on his face without Nightmares and his conscience was rest
oh i forget
please answer honestly if you were in the same situation as Mark would you confess about your crime ?xd
Ok i am not good at intoduction so i will do directly
OfCourse most of you remember the H.S.C
OR Huge Summer Competetion
Made By Mr Assasin and Mr Black Fox
and there was story department so i think i could share the story i put in the test with you and i hope you will like it
http://up4.m5zn.com/9bjndthcm6y53q1w0kvpz47xgs82rf/2009/12/5/07/s7ycyedka.jpg
Insomnia
Chapter 1”Nightmare”
Mark ran in a dark pathway as there was something chasing him ,he suddenly stopped as the way was blocked ,he looked behind and saw red eyes coming towards him he saw the devil holding a big sword and said “Now you will get what you deserve “ and Mark saw the sword became close to his neck ,,when he woke up he was sweaty and looked to himself and said “thanks god it is just nightmare “
He looked to the watch in front of him and it was 2.30 A.M
Mark said to himself “damn I slept only 10 minutes “
He decided to make a cup of coffee and watch tv till morning .
Chapter 2
“The perfect Lie”
Next day Mark went to work and when he reached. there were policemen and detectives making investigations and he knew that one of the employees found dead in his apartment by stab wound and his name was Carl .One of the detectives asked Mark if he knew any information that might help to arrest the killer but Mark said that he did not have a close relation with Carl and suddenly he said to the detective “but I think Carl had a problem with Tom as I heard that he was cheating with his wife “
The detective smiled “thanks for your co operation Mr Mark we appreciate this and here is my number if you remembered anything related to the accident “
Mark said ”My Pleasure ,sir”
Chapter 3
“Horror Rise”
Mark returned home and he was very tired from that day ,he had his dinner and entered the bathroom .He looked in the mirror and suddenly he saw the face of a demon in the mirror he screamed and looked behind but there was nothing ,he took a deep breath and went to bed and when he slept he had the same nightmare and he could not sleep again
Chapter 4
“suffering”
Next day Mark went to work and he knew that the police arrested Tom as they found evidence “knife with blood of victim” in his flat and the police get the information according to mystery call .
He returned to home and the nightmares repeated every night till he couldn’t sleep because of fear and he always kept the light on and this affected him badly in work and own health and he always late to work till his boss fired him and his life became like hell. When the situation became impossible he decided to make a call ,a call that might save his life and give him rest so he pick up the phone and dialed a number .
Chapter 5
“what really happened”
The day before the first nightmare Mark went to the work but when he reached there were no anyone .he was happy because this would make his mission easy he went to the big safe and started to break it to steal the money .Suddenly a flash light fell on his face .
“well well Mr Mark you are in a difficult situation “ said Carl
Mark left what he was doing and he was so afraid .
“please Carl I will not steal the money but please don’t call the police “said Mark
Carl smiled and said “no Mark what do you think about me I am not a monster of course I will not call the police but we have to make a deal “
Mark asked “ok what deal ?”
Carl said “from now you have to give me 50% from your salary –fees- “
Mark held one of the sharp tool he used to open the safe and stab Carl saying “My pleasure “and Carl fell dead immediately.
Chapter 6
“The Plan and salvation “
Mark did not believe what he already did but he said to himself that he needed to calm down and tried to think about a plan to get out of this problem
He carried the dead body and put it at the back of the car and drove till Carl house and took the key from Carl s jacket and open his flat and put the body in it ..
Next day when the police came he brought the sharp tool and put it in Toms suitcase and he removed his fingerprints from the tool .
All these thought came to his mind while dialing the number .
Police officer :police station here sir how can I help you ?
Mark :I want to inform about a crime that I did please .
The case closed and Mark put in the prison till time when he would be electrocuted.
The day before the electrocuted ,Mark for his first time since this accident he slept deeply like a baby and smile on his face without Nightmares and his conscience was rest
oh i forget
please answer honestly if you were in the same situation as Mark would you confess about your crime ?xd