.....A Place Without No Name.....

[black fox]

^ ^....Good Day EveryOne
^ ^....Well, this topic is different form the other ones
....This is my first time to write something like this
^ ^....And I hope you like it



.....There, some place in the territory

....I was sitting next to a palm

....I'm staring at sea….the waves are clashing
....The sun is setting….the wind is breezing
....Touching the grass…..it's so soft….it's so green
....Looking at the sky…..it's so beautiful…it's so fair… full of clouds


...Ahh….what a day


....A moment of silence





...........Then.....


....Hearing something coming at me
.....I wouldn't dare looking at it….for I'm sitting in a place….I don't know how to describe it

....And this thing that I don't know what it is…is coming at me
.....Getting closer and closer

....It touched my hand….......I felt fur….soft fur



……meow….

....I looked at her….and smiled
....Starting to rub her… and she started to…..purr

....Laying back on the ground…..relaxing myself
....And she sat near me…comfort herself and slept

..........Starting to fall asleep, too


………ZzZzZz……..

[the Assassin]

THIS IS MINE .. BOHAHAHAHAHAHA

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Good Day EveryOne
^ ^....Well, this topic is different form the other ones
....This is myfirst time to write something like this
^ ^....And I hope you like it


Hey assassino is here, how r ya ^^
Long time ago, I waited too long to witness this masterpiece
And I assure u, if kept on writing, man u’ll be Shakespearean n no time
Ok, let’s cut the crap, and roll on
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.....There, some place in the territory
....I was sitting next to a palm
....I'm staring at sea….the waves are clashing
....The sun is setting….the wind is breezing
....Touching the grass…..it's so soft….it's so green
....Looking at the sky…..it's so beautiful…it's so fair… full of clouds





Splendid, I like the way that u started this piece of art, u remind me of a story
That I wrote long time back, it stars with something like clouds and grass etc ,
I donno what to tell, but I felt like this quote reminds me of Old me !
Well, u started ur fragment by spotting us to the territory where it seem
to be peaceful, and then u went along on describing how charming it is to be in that place,
I like this line allot, man it’s kind of those things that u rarely see these days, and to be honest
Its kinda sadden me that u didn’t write allot ,icon147 I donno what will happen to ur ability if u didn’t strengthen it with writing!



...Ahh….what a day
....A moment of silence
..........Then.....
....Hearing something coming at me
.....I wouldn't dare looking at it….for I'm sitting in a place….I don't know how to describe it
....And this thing that I don't know what it is…is coming at me
.....Getting closer and closer


Yeah, what a day to see those magnificent lines in front of u,
It pleased me allot to confirm that u r a high class talented dudemsar3ah and what u say is kind of
fragments that I really like icon180… u know pal, I wrote the same thing u write, but I was
describing something else, I donno what I called it, but I believe that I called it Goleden tips, or something like that… Nice describing pal …
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....It touched my hand….......I felt fur….soft fur
……meow….
....I looked at her….and smiled
....Starting to rub her… and she started to…..purr
....Laying back on the ground…..relaxing myself
....And she sat near me…comfort herself and slept
..........Starting to fall asleep, too
………ZzZzZz……..



Well, what I understood is that u meant something else, but what it is that in particular I really have no idea ^^
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But frankly, it’s so strange that u have this kinda ability which may blow up every single barrier in ur way, keep on writing buddy, u have a splendid future to attain.
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PPl, wth is wrong with these comments, A word of thanks can be easily
done by pressing THANKS ICON
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the man wrote this and gave us a time, so we can give him some honor folks
:D

[AbuUbayda]

Oh Great Foxy , I feel like I m there , good description
Thanks for this beautiful idea

[*Robin*]

i will book a ticket for saturday night to attend this beautiful play wait for me


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[Rainbow Star]

sweet
so sweet

thanks

but I don't like cats
P:

[qoot_syria]

What a very beautiful words ..

Really is beautiful and the most beautiful of the cats that you will feel nostalgic for you and loves you ..

Thank you my brother on the idea of Fine ..

[juDy San]

woOow ^ـ^

words very nice

really you excellent in writing

I hope you good luck

thank u ..

[Schwert]

Hi ^ ^1
how r u dear, I'm happy to see you with this nice topic, it's really wonderful expression specially when the cat came^ ^, I look foreward to more topics from you my supervesor and go ahead^ ^1

[lolleta]

hi blak fox
it's long time to put something here
and i think that u were successful
cuz u make me feel that i'm there
in that romantic place


excellent description and remarkable words
..... thumps up icon30.....


It touched my hand….......I felt fur….soft fur





……meow….




....I looked at her….and smiled
....Starting to rub her… and she started to…..purr


....Laying back on the ground…..relaxing myself
....And she sat near me…comfort herself and slept


if that happend to me ... i would shout loudly
help !!!!! help !!!!!
cuz i fear the cats .... icon1366o

thanks alot
keep it up
c ya

[the miri dude]

wass up fox

i am guessing that u had cold while u were wrighting this

and did not consetrate on the story much


but man .........the expretions are relly great
and shows the true talent that u have so much of

.......when u r cured from the cold
we will be expecting a story that shows ur talent in all ways


be cool dude
......se ya

[green tea]

Hello everyone

^_^
green tea has been back
and he missed u so much guys
ok lets back to this amazing story
black fox u r a really good writer
I love the words
the way u list the story
^_^
PC:I advise u to keep writing

see u around bro

[mohbaboo]

That was a great piece of writing bro

nice start with the description of the place with the sun, the sea, the surroundings

and the end is as my brother the assassin said, splindid

thanks and the keep the good stuff comin hhh

[وهم المشاعر]

thank you......