☆Your Guide to writing poetry☆

[mohbaboo]

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Hello everyone
it's nice to see you all again

Today, I'd like to introduce this full guide for writing poetry
and hoping that it'll help you to start making your own poetry and share them with us

Writing Poetry is is a wonderful outlet for expressing ideas. Poetry can be used to convey ideas, information and feelings but, above all, it is a great means of entertainment

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let's start by defining, "What's poetry?"


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1. "Poetry is a short piece of imaginative writing. It is usually very personal in nature, representing a feeling or emotion. Poetry is probably the most free form of writing, with few restrictions like plot and character. Like any art form, poetry takes a commitment and thrives with practice and knowledge of the craft."k

2. " Poetry is an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language choices so as to evoke an emotional response. Poetry has been known to employ meter and rhyme, but this is by no means necessary. Poetry is an ancient form that has gone through numerous and drastic reinvention over time. The very nature of poetry as an authentic and individual mode of expression makes it nearly impossible to define."k


3. "Poetry is piece of literature written by a poet in meter or verse expressing various emotions which are expressed by the use of variety of different techniques including metaphors, similes and onomatopoeia. The emphasis on the aesthetics of language and the use of different techniques such as repetition, meter and rhyme are what are commonly used to distinguish poetry from prose. Prose can be defined as ordinary speech or writing without any metrical structure. poems often make heavy use of imagery and word association to quickly convey emotions. Poetry in English and other modern European languages often use different rhyme schemes and these technique are most often seen in children poems such as Nursery Rhymes making them easy to remember. Other examples of different types of poetry which use rhyme are limericks. Poets make use of sound in different types of poetry by employing different kinds of techniques called Alliteration, Assonance, Consonance and Euphony."

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definition of literary and poetry terms


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Alliteration (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/46-alliteration.htm)
Apostrophe Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/49-apostrophe-literary-term.htm)
Caesura Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/52-caesura-literary-term.htm)
Denotation Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/55-denotation-literary-term.htm)
Epithet Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/58-epithet-literary-term.htm)
Falling Meter (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/61-falling-meter.htm)
Foot Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/64-foot-literary-term.htm)
Hexameter Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/67-hexameter-literary-term.htm)
Iambic pentameter (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/70-iambic-pentameter.htm)
Meter Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/73-meter-literary-term.htm)
Onomatopoeia (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/76-onomatopoeia.htm)
Persona Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/79-persona-literary-term.htm)
Rising Meter Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/82-rising-meter-literary-term.htm)
Spondee Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/85-spondee-literary-term.htm)
Tetrameter (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/88-tetrameter.htm)
Anapaest Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/47-anapaest-literary-term.htm)
Archetype Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/50-archetype-literary-term.htm)
Consonance (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/53-consonance.htm)
Elision Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/56-elision-literary-term.htm)
Euphony (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/59-euphony.htm)
Feminine Rhyme (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/62-feminine-rhyme.htm)
Heptameter (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/65-heptameter.htm)
Hyperbole (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/68-hyperbole.htm)
Litotes Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/71-litotes-literary-term.htm)
Meiosis Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/74-meiosis-literary-term.htm)
Paradox Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/77-paradox-literary-term.htm)


Quatrain (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/80-quatrain.htm)
Scansion Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/83-scansion-literary-term.htm)
Stanza (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/86-stanza.htm)
Trochee Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/89-trochee-literary-term.htm)
Antithesis (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/48-antithesis.htm)
Assonance Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/51-assonance-literary-term.htm)
Connotation Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/54-connotation-literary-term.htm)
Envoy Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/57-envoy-literary-term.htm)
Euphemism (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/60-euphemism.htm)
Figure of speech (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/63-figure-of-speech.htm)
Heroic couplet (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/66-heroic-couplet.htm)
Iamb Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/69-iamb-literary-term.htm)
Metaphor (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/72-metaphor.htm)
Metonymy (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/75-metonymy.htm)
Pentameter (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/78-pentameter.htm)
Rhythm (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/81-rhythm.htm)
Simile (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/84-simile.htm)
Syntax Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/87-syntax-literary-term.htm)
Trope Literary Term (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/90-trope-literary-term.htm)




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types of poetry


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ABC poem (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/01-abc-poem.htm)
Analogy Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/04-analogy-poetry-type.htm)
Blank Verse (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/07-blank-verse.htm)
Canzone Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/10-canzone-poetry-type.htm)
Classicism Types (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/13-classicism-types.htm)
Dactyl Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/16-dactyl-poetry-type.htm)
Enjambment (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/19-enjambment.htm)
Epitaph (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/22-epitaph.htm)
Haiku Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/25-haiku-poetry-type.htm)
Irony (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/28-irony.htm)
Lyric Poetry (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/31-lyric-poetry.htm)
Odes (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/34-odes.htm)
Refrain Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/37-refrain-poetry-type.htm)
Senryu Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/40-senryu-poetry-type.htm)
Tanka (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/43-tanka.htm)
Alexandrine Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/02-alexandrine-poetry-type.htm)
Ballad Poems (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/05-ballad-poems.htm)
Burlesque Types (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/08-burlesque-types.htm)
Carpe diem (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/11-carpe-diem.htm)
Conceit Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/14-conceit-poetry-type.htm)
Doggerel (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/17-doggerel.htm)


Epic Poems (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/20-epic-poems.htm)
Epithalamium Form (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/23-epithalamium-form.htm)
Idyll Poetry Types (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/26-idyll-poetry-types.htm)
Lay Poetry Types (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/29-lay-poetry-types.htm)
Name Poem (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/32-name-poem.htm)
Pastoral Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/35-pastoral-poetry-type.htm)
Rhymes (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/38-rhymes.htm)
Rhyme Royal Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/41-rhyme-royal-type.htm)
Terza rima (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/44-terza-rima.htm)
Prose and Prose Poetry (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/91-prose.htm)
Allegory (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/03-allegory.htm)
Ballade Poetry Types (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/06-ballade-poetry-types.htm)
Cacophony (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/09-cacophony.htm)
Cinquain Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/12-cinquain-poetry-type.htm)
Couplet Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/15-couplet-poetry-type.htm)
Elegy (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/18-elegy.htm)
Epigram (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/21-epigram.htm)
Free Verse (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/24-free-verse.htm)
Imagery Poems (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/27-imagery-poems.htm)
Limericks (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/30-limericks.htm)

Narrative Poetry (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/33-narrative-poetry.htm)



Quatrain Poetry Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/36-quatrain-poetry-type.htm)
Romanticism Type (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/39-romanticism-type.htm)
Sonnets (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/42-sonnets.htm)
verse (http://www.types-of-poetry.org.uk/45-verse.htm)



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a simple guide to help you through your poetry
these instructions are for the free writing which I will try to provide in this guide

step1


Carry a paper and pen at all times. As all artists know, inspiration can hit at any time at any place. It probably comes most often when least expected, when waiting in the checkout line or sitting on the subway. The immediate feeling of the instinctual emotion felt at the very moment will be forgotten, or at least begin to cloud in memory.


step 2


Know metaphors and how to use them. Use them while speaking to hear how they sound. Think of them constantly and try to make them more eloquent and beautiful all the time. After a while they should be able to flow freely and naturally.


step 3


Have a wide vocabulary. This comes from reading, writing and speaking. Read avidly, and try to incorporate new words while writing. Practice using new words in conversations.


step 4


Use imagery. Imagery is vital to poetry. Know how to describe things in ways that no one else describes them. Be aware of all five of the senses and how to describe effectively what each is experiencing.

step 5

Read poetry. Read poetry all the time. Get inspired by other poets. Learn about their style. Read classic poets such as Aristotle. Read Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson and Rimbaud. Read contemporary poets like Nikki Giovanni. Read unknown poetry posted online.


step 6

Get outside opinions. Talk to friends, join online groups or even enroll for a course. All feedback is constructive, whether positive or negative. Learn to grow from criticism; it will only help. Don't be afraid to share work with an audience.
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The elements to include are imagination and imagery and conveying these ideas by writing poetry which makes good use of rhythm, rhyme, tone and using the English language and its various means to enhance your work. The two most popular devices to enable you to do this when writing poetry is the use of metaphors (A figure of speech in which two things are compared like "the world's a stage") and Similes (A figure of speech in which two things are compared using the word "like" or "as.") The use of such devices when writing poetry allows the writer the broaden the images and meanings of everyday terms so that they take on a new dimension

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When you write a good poem, one you really like, immediately write another. Maybe that one poem was your peak for the night, bit maybe you’re on a roll. There’s only one way to find out.l

The bigger your theme, the more important the details are. A poem with Love, Destiny, Hate or other huge themes in the title already has two strikes against it (and I like love poems).l

Say what you want to say. Let your readers decide what your poem means.l



Feel free to write a bad poem.l


That one perfect line in a thirty-line poem may be what makes it all worthwhile. It may also be what is ruining the rest of your poem. Keep an eye on it.l


Don’t explain everything.l


Untitled poems are like unnamed children.l



People will remember an image long after they’ve forgotten why it was there.l

Develop your voice. Get comfortable with how you write.l



There are many excuses not to write. Try using writing as an excuse not to do other things.l


The more you read, the more you learn. Read poetry often.l


The more you write, the more you develop. Write poetry often.l


Poems that focus on form are rarely my favorites, but most of my favorite poets learned how to write in forms before they discarded them. Writing in forms is a challenge. It makes you think.l



Don’t be afraid to write from a different point of view. Write a poem that says exactly the opposite of what you believe. If you can, do it without irony.l

When you cannot write, lie on the floor a while, go for a walk, or at least twirl around in a circle. Do something that changes your perspective.l



Write in different places. Keep a notebook. Write in a park or on a street-corner or in an alley. You don’t have to write about the place, but it will influence you whether you do or not.l


Listen to talk radio while you write. Listen to the people who call. Great characters and voices emerge that way.l


If you don’t like a poem or poet you read, figure out exactly why. It may reflect something you don’t like about your own poetry.l


When nothing is coming, start writing very fast. Write down any and every word, phrase or sentence that comes to mind. Do that for about a minute before you go back to working on your poem. I call this trick flushing. Feel free to use anything you came up with, but the purpose of flushing is to clear your head.l



Make a list of poems you can remember specific lines from. Go back and read those poems. Figure out why they stuck with you.l


Keep a dream journal. Dreams are your mind at it’s most creative so pay attention to them. Don’t feel you have to write a poem about your dreams unless one truly inspires you. The main goal is to see what thoughts the dreams lead you to.l



Analyze other writer’s poems. Figure out what works, what doesn’t work, and why. Think about how you would work with the same material and concepts.l


Use humor, irony, and melodrama, but don’t abuse them.l


Write the worst poem you can possibly write. Use clichés, use pretentious words, and beat your reader over the head with your point. Felt good, didn’t it? Now get back to work. The point is, don’t be afraid to write a bad poem. Every great poet has written a bad poem. Most great poets have written hundreds, even thousands of bad poems. The great poets kept writing though, and so should you. If it takes a hundred bad poems to produce a poem you like, finish those hundred poems. l



Limericks can be fun too.l



Every line of a poem should be important to the poem, and interesting to read. A poem with only 3 great lines should be 3 lines long.l

Poems should progress. There should be a reason why the first stanza comes before the second, the second before the third, and so on.l



Follow your fear. Don’t back away from subjects that make you uncomfortable, and don’t try to keep your personal demons off the page. Even if you never publish the poems they produce, you have to push yourself and write as honestly as possible.l

Find a way to publish your poems. Sooner or later you have to send your babies out into the world to find their way. Emily Dickinson was a fluke. Most people who don’t publish while they’re alive will never be seen or heard of — no matter how great their poems.l



Buy poetry books, especially books by current writers. Give back to the poetry community by reading (and paying for) the works of others.l


Go to poetry readings. Check your local arts publications for upcoming events. Almost any sizable town has readings every week or every other week. This is a great opportunity to meet poets and people who care about poetry.l




When you go to readings, donate money and buy books if you can.l



Host a poetry event or organize a reading.l

If you want to swap poetry and criticism with your peers, form your own group. Many .local arts publications let you list your group for free.l



Publish your own poetry journal or web site. Even a few sheets of paper stapled together gets the word out.l


Whatever else you do, keep writing.l

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Now, we reached the end of this guide which I hope it was beneficial to all of you
and that it's answered all or most of your questions regarding writing poetry

I tried to gather the most helpful and useful knowledge
and steps and techniques in this guide which I thought were good as I learned a lot from them and they helped through my previous studies in College




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Finally, I'd like from you guys to include something in your comments
I want you to write something even few lines from what you've understood from this guide and I will put what you write here as examples




my friend by mohbaboo

it's a small piece entitled, " my friend!"
and it's more of a free writing than an organized one

once upon a time I was a kid
played in secret and never said
to anyone whatever I did
what did you expect, I was a kid

no one listened to what I said
even if I even yelled
until I found my own friend
who I met in the end

on the little piece of ground
the piece on which we played
we had happy times and a happy end
and until now he's my friend



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This is an Example I wrote for the ABC type of poetry

Be a MAN by mohbaboo


A wise woman once told me
be a good man to yours
can you take the responsibility?l
do what you can do?l

every time you were asked
for a help or even a task
good for you or even bad
how would you react?l

I want you to know
Judgment day coming no way
kiss you mom's head when you see her
lollipops to be given to your young sister

man should be a MAN
not some hesitated one in the shadows
or you can be nothing
please son, be wise and choose the right one


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this one is a free verse

A Dolly and I by Do Ri Me

I just don't understand why ?
there would be thousands reply
when those icy eyes ,
gazed at me with dead blind


I didn't think someday some one ,
would be at her place ,
Nope , this life gives and takes ,
exactly as nothing would happen


O, my hopes of rosy future go ,
with winds if not with storm
there is no reality , no truth ,
satanic lies out of truth


And alone , my dolly and I
will go on and be fine ,
with out othe's cheering , but with a smile ,
due to if dolly is doll , I am a Human !!!




thank you sister Do Ri Me for your contribution
may Allah bless you

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thank you everyone for being patient
and good luck to you all


your brother
mohbaboo



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[Do Ri Me]

yo ~ man

really amazing
I hope I can reward yo in anyway
but can't help it
coz
ur work is stunning
in the spot ... I am speechless
BTW This topic ganna be so useful to me ... So I put it in my fav sites

Aregatow Goziamishta

May Allah bless you And Lead you to success

[the Assassin]

Man that was just a piece of art, it is such a supreme guide though.. and i believe it is the best thing i have ever read about poetry guides, what i like mostly is types of poetry
man that was helpful,


btw, ur topic is offically now on my fvr8, and on top of that my heart

[Schwert]

Hello dear friend Mohbaboo, I really surprise from this topic; it's really brilliant thing
it'll benefit me so much to learn about poetry, I thank you so much for ur effort in this topic my dear
and certainly the topic has been saved in my folder, I wish I find enough time and clear mind for set and write poetry, the more I read the more I learn and with time everything will be okay, ur topic my mate was amazing thing here,thank you and good bye'cya'1

[mohbaboo]

yo ~ man

really amazing
I hope I can reward yo in anyway
but can't help it
coz
ur work is stunning
in the spot ... I am speechless
BTW This topic ganna be so useful to me ... So I put it in my fav sites

Aregatow Goziamishta

May Allah bless you And Lead you to success


welcome my sister

oh there's no need for anything but your prayers for me
that's all what matters

I'm really glad that the guide is gonna be useful to you and the others

you're welcome and thank YOU for the encouraging comment as usual

my Allah bless you

bye

[mohbaboo]

Man that was just a piece of art, it is such a supreme guide though.. and i believe it is the best thing i have ever read about poetry guides, what i like mostly is types of poetry
man that was helpful,


btw, ur topic is offically now on my fvr8, and on top of that my heart


oh that's one honoring complement I got for myself here hhhh

yeah it's one my favorites too and that website is almost the best and helped me a lot in this guide

glad to help in any way possible and LEGAL hhh

wow I'm starting to blush now
thank you brother for the sincere encouragement

may Allah bless you

[mohbaboo]

Hello dear friend Mohbaboo, I really surprise from this topic; it's really brilliant thing
it'll benefit me so much to learn about poetry, I thank you so much for ur effort in this topic my dear
and certainly the topic has been saved in my folder, I wish I find enough time and clear mind for set and write poetry, the more I read the more I learn and with time everything will be okay, ur topic my mate was amazing thing here,thank you and good bye'cya'1

Hello my dear friend Mohannad

thank you very much
it's such an honoring complement from you

take your time and enjoy reading and when you finish
I'm gonna be waiting for your piece here hhhh _ I won't let it go for you and the two before you hhhhhhh

you're welcome and thank you for your nice comment

may Allah bless you

PBUY

[lolleta]

amazing ideas
...
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graet work
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special design
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alot of useful info
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so
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no comment
really no comment

Million thanks bro

[mohbaboo]

amazing ideas
...
..
graet work
...
..
special design
...
..
alot of useful info
..
.
so
...
no comment
really no comment

Million thanks bro



no worries sister
for you to be here is for all the world

all thanks to you guys
you all made my day after all the effort I put into this guide

peace

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guys

you have to write at least few lines of poetry in your comments
it's compulsory and excuses won't be tolerated hhahahahah

'till later

[ČŞ2]

I wish, I can writing or reading a poetry

But, I guess the poetry not easy

..

Thank you

[mohbaboo]

I wish, I can writing or reading a poetry

But, I guess the poetry not easy

..

Thank you

I'm sure you will with time and practice

it wasn't easy for anyone until they tried and did their best

if we try and work hard on anything, we will do it

thank you brother
and wish you all the best

peace

[Do Ri Me]

okay ... this is my try ... but look it doesn't have any rule ... u can say it's free verse

A Dolly and I
I just don't understand why ?
there would be thousands reply
when those icy eyes ,
gazed at me with dead blind


I didn't think someday some one ,
would be at her place ,
Nope , this life gives and takes ,
exactly as nothing would happen


O, my hopes of rosy future go ,
with winds if not with storm
there is no reality , no truth ,
satanic lies out of truth


And alone , my dolly and I
will go on and be fine ,
with out othe's cheering , but with a smile ,
due to if dolly is doll , I am a Human !!!


huhuhuh????? how do you find it ... perhaps the topic is trivial but i found it a bit nice^^
PBUU

[tsunade]

Hello my brother ..
Very beautiful and unique and wonderful writing
I congratulate you on this innovation :")

[DARK LEGEND]

tsoooooogooooooooooy

^^ .. pretty good topic

reserved

[Ls460L]

just I want to know that every poem in a verse( or in a line) it must have a specific # of words or articles
in every two or three repetitive lines or not ,
Hope reply soon as possible.

[qoot_syria]

WoOoOw

Your very impressive and surprisingly amazing!

Hair the way for recreation and write all the illusions that exist in our heart.

Actually it's way too beautiful and amazing ..

Thank you brother for this great work and be useful ..

But I am going back to read the topic again ..

Because there are some words that were unable to read and understand ..

All praise / qoot

[mohbaboo]

okay ... this is my try ... but look it doesn't have any rule ... u can say it's free verse

A Dolly and I
I just don't understand why ?
there would be thousands reply
when those icy eyes ,
gazed at me with dead blind


I didn't think someday some one ,
would be at her place ,
Nope , this life gives and takes ,
exactly as nothing would happen


O, my hopes of rosy future go ,
with winds if not with storm
there is no reality , no truth ,
satanic lies out of truth


And alone , my dolly and I
will go on and be fine ,
with out othe's cheering , but with a smile ,
due to if dolly is doll , I am a Human !!!


huhuhuh????? how do you find it ... perhaps the topic is trivial but i found it a bit nice^^
PBUU

welcome back

woooooow
that's one beautiful piece of thoughts and feelings

I truly enjoyed it
and believe me when I say that the free writing is the most expressive way of writing 'cause you express what's on your mind without any restrictions

also, your piece expresses the loneliness in someone's heart
thaough you're still happy with what you got

as I said in the topic
keep on writing and never stop
and you'll make pieces of art

thank you very much for sharing what you wrote here

and
see you when I see you :) l

bye

[mohbaboo]

Hello my brother ..
Very beautiful and unique and wonderful writing
I congratulate you on this innovation :")

hello sister tsunade

thank you very much for passing by

I'm glad you enjoyed the reading and I hope you'll enjoy writing, too

peace




just I want to know that every poem in a verse( or in a line) it must have a specific # of words or articles
in every two or three repetitive lines or not ,
Hope reply soon as possible.


there are different types
and they are all explained in the types

all what you've said are correct
and there are no limitation
every type has it's unique features and characteristics

and I'm no expert to answer your answer and you have to read
and learn bye yourself in order to improve

thank you

[mohbaboo]

WoOoOw

Your very impressive and surprisingly amazing!

Hair the way for recreation and write all the illusions that exist in our heart.

Actually it's way too beautiful and amazing ..

Thank you brother for this great work and be useful ..

But I am going back to read the topic again ..

Because there are some words that were unable to read and understand ..

All praise / qoot

hello qoot
hhhh why surprisingly?l
did you not expect it from me or what? -- kidding


you're welcome

take your time and ask if you need anything to be clarified

thank for the nice comment

see you

[mohbaboo]

This is an Example I wrote today for the ABC type of poetry
hope you enjoy it

and by the way
I will put your poems that you will write in the main thread above so others wouls see them
so, if you followed a certain type please mention it




Be a MAN


A wise woman once told me
be a good man to yours
can you take the responsibility?l
do what you can do?l

every time you were asked
for a help or even a task
good for you or even bad
how would you react?l

I want you to know
Judgment day coming no way
kiss you mom's head when you see her
lollipops to be given to your young sister

man should be a MAN
not some hesitated one in the shadows
or you can be nothing
please son, be wise and choose the right one

[Hajime-san]

OHAAAYOOOO
woooooooow u're topic is great ....."masterpiece"l
thumbsup-Icon
***
Poetry ....i loooove it
it's the best way to express our feelings with elegance


*****
i didn't read all the type of poetry icon114.. but it looks GREAAAT (i like it)l
(hope that i'll comeback *_* l)


[niiiice poems]
* * * * *
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks for this "useful" guide


Best regards
bye00

[mohbaboo]

OHAAAYOOOO
woooooooow u're topic is great ....."masterpiece"l
thumbsup-Icon
***
Poetry ....i loooove it
it's the best way to express our feelings with elegance


*****
i didn't read all the type of poetry icon114.. but it looks GREAAAT (i like it)l
(hope that i'll comeback *_* l)


[niiiice poems]
* * * * *
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks for this "useful" guide


Best regards
bye00


hello there

oh thank you very much

my best kinda writing indeed

and I'll be waiting for you brother

thanks

[نور الاسلام]

peace be upon you
woooooow..thank you so much brother

[X-Ray]

Well to begin with,honestly, this is one of the most spectacular pieces of art I've ever seen

thank you brother for your effort and the information you provided

It helped me a great deal as English learner

thanks again

[mohbaboo]

peace be upon you
woooooow..thank you so much brother



peace be upon you, too
you're welcome

seeya




Well to begin with,honestly, this is one of the most spectacular pieces of art I've ever seen

thank you brother for your effort and the information you provided

It helped me a great deal as English learner

thanks again





that an honor
thank you for the complement brother
maybe we can read something of yours one day ^^

you're welcome
seeya around

[معتزة بديني]

Peace be upon you too,
really the subject of a very cool and distinctive,but after
reading this stuff would write better poerty,
especially since it for Entertainment
Thanks again,
Peace be upon you.

[mohbaboo]

Peace be upon you too,
really the subject of a very cool and distinctive,but after
reading this stuff would write better poerty,
especially since it for Entertainment
Thanks again,
Peace be upon you.




Welcome
I'm glad it's been something of a use to you guys
sure when you write you should enjoy it at the same time

thank you for passing by
seeya

[V@mpire~Girl]

Thank you very much for this nice topic
and I like reading poetry, but I like writing stories and novels
Thank you again for this excellent explanation about poetry

[mohbaboo]

Thank you very much for this nice topic
and I like reading poetry, but I like writing stories and novels
Thank you again for this excellent explanation about poetry



you're welcome
and feel free to post your works including stories or anything here in the forum
we will appreciate a new good English writers here

best of luck and thank you
peace

[the miri dude]

No matter how much i say it to you
it will never be enough
thank you for clearing the way for the rest of us
I'll never be the same after reading this...
I'll be better
thank you... again

[conan2007]

I really don't know how to say it......
ur topic is really so amazing
i really now so happy becouse u made me remamber all my memories with the the plays and novels.
now sure i'll go to write ..not a play but a novel which i decided to write it years ago.
you are really a good persone
Good luck to u