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mohbaboo
10-2-2010, 04:18 PM
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This one is dedicated to my best friend
May Allah have mercy on his soul
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when I walk down the street
I see lovely faces everywhere
putting that smiley face
not knowing what's in down here
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here in my heart
all this ache and rust
from all those who betrayed
this heart day after another
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how can I say it?l
there's no word to describe it
should I say broken?l
or just shattered?l
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lovely faces everywhere
making jokes all the time
sometimes they're stupid
and sometimes senseless
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except for that one!l
who had the same face as I do
the tortured soul's face
the broken heart's soul
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we had it from everyone else
we wanted to scream against 'em
shouting with everything we got
"you can't feel us!"l
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you IDIOTS!l
tears
and
tears
and
tears
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I hate those superficial people
or shall I say heartless
but, I don't care
as long as I have that one
or had!l
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the one who shared me his pain
and to whom mine was shared to
I'll never forget you
I'll always remember you
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even when you're down there
underneath the soil of the ground
rest in peace my friend
you'll always be there
in
my HEART
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~ saya ~
11-2-2010, 07:01 AM
Thanks^Ü^
keep on
see ya
luffy chan
12-2-2010, 03:00 AM
thank you
that was amzing mohbaboo san
I jealous you]you can write beautiful
see you
mohbaboo
13-2-2010, 07:06 PM
Thanks^Ü^
keep on
see ya
hey dear Saya chan
you're welcome
and thank you for passing by
see ya
peace
thank you
that was amzing mohbaboo san
I jealous you]you can write beautiful
see you
you're welcome dear brother
thank you and appreciate your coment
bye
Gol D Roger !
13-2-2010, 10:07 PM
better words
thanks my mister
best wishes ~
mohbaboo
14-2-2010, 02:26 AM
better words
thanks my mister
best wishes ~
thank you
I'm glad you liked it
peace
Sugar Luxe
14-2-2010, 02:45 PM
This is sincerely beautiful
the words are so deep and magnifical
I'm definitely a fan of your poetry
And I'm sorry about your friend, May he rest in peace.
mohbaboo
15-2-2010, 01:26 AM
This is sincerely beautiful
the words are so deep and magnifical
I'm definitely a fan of your poetry
And I'm sorry about your friend, May he rest in peace.
I gladly appreciate your sincere and heart healing comment
and it's my honor to have a wonderful fan as you
I really hope that you'll be here with us
and maybe share with us some of your writings
nice to see you here
peace
I LOVE JORDAN
15-2-2010, 03:35 AM
This one is dedicated to my best friend
May Allah have mercy on his soul
Firstly... the greeting of Islam ... peace be upon you
and may Allah forgive your friend
and all Muslims around the world...
when I walk down the street
I see lovely faces everywhere
putting that smiley face
not knowing what's in down here
These are our words ... full of sensitivities ... when we feel them
really beautiful words .... in spite of their great sadness ...
lovely faces everywhere
making jokes all the time
sometimes they're stupid
and sometimes senseless
So hard situation ... it hurts much
but maybe it is the only thing you have when he pass away
the memories ...
you IDIOTS!l
tears
and
tears
and
tears
(idiots, tears - together ? hmmm) I think that they have secret meaning ... maybe
I don't understand them as it should be ... i guess you meant that your friend deserve more than these tears
OK>>> this is make them A M A Z I N G
I hate those superficial peopleme too
as long as I have that one
or had!
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no no >>> say you always have , not you had >>> at least in yours
the one who shared me his pain
and to whom mine was shared to
I'll never forget you
I'll always remember you
even when you're down there
underneath the soil of the ground
rest in peace my friend
you'll always be there
in
my HEART
i do not know what should i say ... after all these affective words
it has been a long time since i have read such a powerful words Icon OK 0
but really you have a creative way of writing
you described a great amount of sorrow in some briefed phrases
i wish you success at another writings ... keep on writing
I feel your words >>> that's why i tried to comment on every phrase ... but i failedIcon03
and excuse me for my big mistakes ... i am not expert in English icon-??
THANKS A LOT
Thank u very much
its amazing topic
Anno.Sola
16-2-2010, 01:06 AM
alslam 3licom wa rahmato allah wa brakatoh
friendship is very nice ..
sometimes its make you feel " soOo happy "
but what i saw behind your words
more than it
that's the life ,
but you should be strong like i saw now
may Allah have mercy on his soul
I welly happy of your patient : )
May Allah be with you
good luck
.
.
mohbaboo
16-2-2010, 03:00 AM
Firstly... the greeting of Islam ... peace be upon you
and may Allah forgive your friend
and all Muslims around the world...
peace be upon you, too
Amen
thank you very much
(idiots, tears - together ? hmmm) I think that they have secret meaning ... maybe
I don't understand them as it should be ... i guess you meant that your friend deserve more than these tears
OK>>> this is make them A M A Z I N G
IDIOTS
is when I cried at those people - the superficial with the smiley faces
I called them idiots and I went crying
they are the idiots and I am the one who is crying- I hope you get it now ^_^l
no no >>> say you always have , not you had >>> at least in yours
I had him physically and emotionally
but now all what's left
are the sweet memories
i do not know what should i say ... after all these affective words
it has been a long time since i have read such a powerful words Icon OK 0
but really you have a creative way of writing
you described a great amount of sorrow in some briefed phrases
i wish you success at another writings ... keep on writing
I feel your words >>> that's why i tried to comment on every phrase ... but i failedIcon03
and excuse me for my big mistakes ... i am not expert in English icon-??
that's an honor dear sister
I've been myself and I always be when it comes to writing
what's in my heart comes out to my papers
sure thing
as long as we have those who we love, hate or whatever comes in between
I'll keep writing
you didn't fail at all
my words reached you the way I wanted them to reach you
^_^ we all make mistakes
and we try to learn from them
I just had my long share of time with English
and I would recommend you to read a lot and write at the same time to improve
'cause good writers are good readers
THANKS A LOT
no all the thanks to you
for you beautiful comment
it meant a lot to me
and excuse my very long comment
but I like to write a lot
all the best sister
peace
mohbaboo
16-2-2010, 03:04 AM
Thank u very much
its amazing topic
you're welcome
and appreciate your comment here
peace
alslam 3licom wa rahmato allah wa brakatoh
friendship is very nice ..
sometimes its make you feel " soOo happy "
but what i saw behind your words
more than it
that's the life ,
but you should be strong like i saw now
may Allah have mercy on his soul
I welly happy of your patient : )
May Allah be with you
good luck
peace be upon you, too Anno chan
sure
without the friends who we love and share our memories with
life lacks it's flavor and the sweetness
Amen
thank you dear sister for your encouraging words
they worked perfectly :)l
and be with you as well
thank you very much
peace
M!ss_KeKo
23-2-2010, 10:46 AM
Difficult to judge you
You will not liters intimate friend Again
I had a friend Ahbbta a lot, but
Dimension Kaci deprived me of Kieha
Thank you to have prepared me memories
Schwert
23-2-2010, 08:33 PM
Hello man, how r u, I'm feeling that I'm late to write this comment but some reasons was the cause of that; u know, you admire me by new wonderful topic again, that's poem is really well-arrange and nice job, may Allah have mercy on ur friend, I'll try to have the beneficial from these are poems may be I'll write something oneday who knows^ ^, I thank u my bro Mohbaboo for this effort and...go on^ ^, see you
mohbaboo
24-2-2010, 07:02 PM
Difficult to judge you
You will not liters intimate friend Again
I had a friend Ahbbta a lot, but
Dimension Kaci deprived me of Kieha
Thank you to have prepared me memories
thank you
for your nice words and wisdom
funny language you have loool
peace
Hello man, how r u, I'm feeling that I'm late to write this comment but some reasons was the cause of that; u know, you admire me by new wonderful topic again, that's poem is really well-arrange and nice job, may Allah have mercy on ur friend, I'll try to have the beneficial from these are poems may be I'll write something oneday who knows^ ^, I thank u my bro Mohbaboo for this effort and...go on^ ^, see you
hey brother
no you're not
considering how the English forum is
you know you write something and days pass without any comments
Amen
thank you for your honest feelings
Allah bless you
I'll be waiting for your writings soon hehehe
I thank for supporting me
seeya
peace
Hajime-san
13-3-2010, 01:56 AM
hoooos
*
waaaaw it's soooo niiiiiiiice
u're a good writer
keep going bro
u have a special touch in your poems
***
gooooooooooooood luck
Best regards
pein-killer
13-3-2010, 05:12 AM
mohahahahha xD
i com from dreams mohahahhah <<< am i scary
so
It will read it later
mohbaboo
15-3-2010, 09:19 AM
hoooos
*
waaaaw it's soooo niiiiiiiice
u're a good writer
keep going bro
u have a special touch in your poems
***
gooooooooooooood luck
Best regards
hey
welcome brother
that an honor for me
thank you
I'm really flattered :)l
good luck to you, too
seeya around
mohahahahha xD
i com from dreams mohahahhah <<< am i scary
so
It will read it later
take your time but don't forget about me looool
lolowenw
7-3-2011, 07:03 PM
Mashalla
Its Really Great Words
Specailly
I hate those superficial people)
or shall I say heartless
but, I don't care
as long as I have that one
or had!)l
to those people we should say to them GET LOST from mt life this is what i say to them
I Hope to see more from your Topics
Keep it always up
see you
V@mpire~Girl
26-6-2011, 08:02 PM
Peace Be Upon You
This poem is really magnificent and have many meaningful words
Best Wishes
ÇáäÌã ÇáÓÇãí
3-7-2011, 02:40 AM
THANK YOU SO MUTH
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