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2-6-2010, 01:09 AM
:: Hello every one ::
?How are you doing these days
icon77hopefully after a long journey I've returned to MSOMS
my subject today is about a story written by my younger sister who is 9 years old
well there have been some mistakes and I corrected for her but I asked her
first what she meant when she wrote it so that I won't change her opinion
Now read the story and enjoy 8wq4
Noof and Teddy Bear
Once upon a time there was a girl called "Noof" who had a teddy bear called "Meme".
Everyday Noof goes to school by bus and one day she sat on the chair of the bus,
opened her bag and she saw a red paper written on it
"I love you so much Noof!
Don't go to school today because it will be dangerous for you."
From: your teddy bear Meme
After finishing reading the letter, Noof felt scared and told her friend as soon as
she arrived at school saying to her: "Can you help me?" , her friend replied: "okay!
But, about what?" She then said: "My teddy bear wrote in a paper that there will be
danger for me". Her friend said: "Okay! Okay! I will help you Noof but where is the place?"
Noof said: "I don't know! I don't know!" her friend said: "okay then we will go around
the school". Then they go to see what the problem is, they went to their teacher's
office and found her dead. They saw her foot and legs were cut and covered with
blood. Then they continue across the long hallway until they saw a man his face
covered with blood
holding a scissors on his hand. As soon as the man saw Noof he said:" I will kill her
now!" then Noof took a big wood, throw it on the man that make him die and she went
with her friend to home. She slept with her teddy bear Meme next to her.
hope you like it thumbsup-Icon
?How are you doing these days
icon77hopefully after a long journey I've returned to MSOMS
my subject today is about a story written by my younger sister who is 9 years old
well there have been some mistakes and I corrected for her but I asked her
first what she meant when she wrote it so that I won't change her opinion
Now read the story and enjoy 8wq4
Noof and Teddy Bear
Once upon a time there was a girl called "Noof" who had a teddy bear called "Meme".
Everyday Noof goes to school by bus and one day she sat on the chair of the bus,
opened her bag and she saw a red paper written on it
"I love you so much Noof!
Don't go to school today because it will be dangerous for you."
From: your teddy bear Meme
After finishing reading the letter, Noof felt scared and told her friend as soon as
she arrived at school saying to her: "Can you help me?" , her friend replied: "okay!
But, about what?" She then said: "My teddy bear wrote in a paper that there will be
danger for me". Her friend said: "Okay! Okay! I will help you Noof but where is the place?"
Noof said: "I don't know! I don't know!" her friend said: "okay then we will go around
the school". Then they go to see what the problem is, they went to their teacher's
office and found her dead. They saw her foot and legs were cut and covered with
blood. Then they continue across the long hallway until they saw a man his face
covered with blood
holding a scissors on his hand. As soon as the man saw Noof he said:" I will kill her
now!" then Noof took a big wood, throw it on the man that make him die and she went
with her friend to home. She slept with her teddy bear Meme next to her.
hope you like it thumbsup-Icon