HE IS A CHILD

[حَالِمة]

peace be upon you

I'm a new one here but I really wish you to take care of me
and thank you very mush

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child
makes you live the world
long and wide . .
walks on the street
catching you hand
eating a sweet
kicking the land
if you says a word
he will repeat
a child
makes you live the world
long and wild
with a cute smile
or even a scream
in a little while
you sink in his dream
he is just a child
but makes you live the world
long and wide


..

at the last

I hope you liked it
pray on the prophet

Ta Ta for now :icon100:

[mohbaboo]

Welcome here
we hope that you will enjoy the stay here and don't hesitate to share what you've got with us

nice words
keep it up

peace

[حَالِمة]

Thanks , I'll do in shaa'a Allah

pray on prophet

[The.B.king]

yo ^^ i cant say welcome since im new
but your words are great and true
but they are annoying sometimes
but a smile from one can make you feel great
..
nice words and keep writing
good luck to you

[Naro-chan]

peace be upon you too my sister smile =)
...
nice words ... and very cheerful
... as you u are looking at the goodness in the world
very pure
...
btw
i can stand children but not babies ... so am with you
...

salam,

[angel_4_ever]

peace be upon you too

verry nice words
achild can make you smile when you are sad
i belive in that

thank you very much ر=

[اخر شيء]

peace be upon you
I'm a new one here but I really wish you to take care of me
and thank you very mush
Awww peace be upon you too
Your introduction was so nice. You write such wonderful lines


child
makes you live the world
long and wide . .Very true. After all he is just a child =)

Nice words reflecting how innocent a child is
I like how you end your piece saying

he is just a child
but makes you live the world
long and wideThanks for sharing it with us
Keep on writing~

[V@mpire~Girl]

Peace Be Upon You

It is really very wonderful words to
describe how the child acts and behaves
^^
I hope you keep it up

Best Wishes
n__n

[K I D A]

Hey ^^
wow these words
too CUTE ^.^
and these words is real .. the children makes you love the whole world and they make you smile and be happy just when you look to their eyes to their cute faces..
even if they looks sometimes annoying .. they still just an awesome cute and lovely kids :)