THE SECRET NUMBER

[smart1412]

i have found several mistakes in my writing
and i think the story is a little bit complicated
so i am gonna have to rewrite it again
with new style very soon

[Naro-chan]

peace be upon you my brother

Oh My God
...

okay , to strat from the end ... ... it's very difficult to me to guess what'll happen !
yet

I love your way of introducing the story ...
I could live the events with that much of suspense you creat
...

just think of an awsome end ... and put it here
^^"""

may Allah bless you
peace

[اخر شيء]

Is it read as "hell"?
"77" is read as "LL" and "3" as "E"
But I can't read "4" as "h"
But it was interesting and amusing to find the answer behind the suspicious numbers

A nice story indeed with a little of typos
As for the end, I prefer to read the story and be shocked by the end
Best of luck


" a scattered dream that 's like a far off memory , a far off memory that's like a scattered dream"
I think I've heard this sentence somewhere...

[smart1412]

hey
thx for ur comments
i think the next part will be even interesting for anyone and have more tricks
i have just planned to write it as soon as possibe


7734 is written by a digital formula
this means
if you type it in a calculator and see it upside down u will see how it is exactly the word "hell
is written on it

a scattered dream that s like a far off memory
a far off memory that s like a scattered drea
is from kingdom hearts video game
i used it to introduce the second part and
give a hint about what is going to be on it
hope u realy like it
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[يوجينا]

good morning smart
i read your story
its nice and the language is simple
so i finished it
it reminds me of eng movie in some parts of it
and never thing the number is for hell word
I'm interested in reading the second chapter
isa you make a good end
wait the final keep going ^^