♥ Open Your Heart ♥

[V@mpire~Girl]

Peace Upon You All

How are U all?

This is the second time that I write in this forum

♥ Open Your Heart ♥

Open your heart
And let me know
What is inside your heart
I hear your heart's sound
Is beating in my ears
I hear your heart's voice
Is whispering in my mind
I want to understand
What does it want from me
I want to help
I want to reach your heart
Make your heart follows my songs
And we will be together

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I want to hear your songs
I want to see you
But, there is a wall
That makes me away from you
I want to see how the world looks like
I want to fly and make my dreams true
I want to share with you my happiness and sadness

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C’mon my friend
Let’s go together
By my songs and my heart
I will break this wall
Give me your hand and let’s go
I want to discover the world with you
Let’s fly in your dreams and make it true
Open your heart for me
Keep me inside it
I want to be always with you


I hope that U like it and the door for criticism is open

Giving your criticism make me happy

[Naro-chan]

peace be upon you my lovely sister
..
what a nice topic
...
I really do enjoy your writing cool girl
D;

innocent words ... going smoothly to the heart directly ...

...

hmmm i'd like to ask ...


I hear your hearts’ sound

are you talking to one friend or more than one ? if yes it's ok to say so ...
if not ... ( i mean only one friend) you shouldn''t have put apostrophe ['] after the [s] in hearts ... it's to be [heart's ] or[ heart'] cuz we have another [s] in sound
^^""""

and some other things ...

good beginning ( i bet ) and am lookin forward to seeing more

[V@mpire~Girl]

peace be upon you my lovely sister
..
what a nice topic
...
I really do enjoy your writing cool girl
D;

innocent words ... going smoothly to the heart directly ...

...

hmmm i'd like to ask ...



are you talking to one friend or more than one ? if yes it's ok to say so ...
if not ... ( i mean only one friend) you shouldn''t have put apostrophe ['] after the [s] in hearts ... it's to be [heart's ] or[ heart'] cuz we have another [s] in sound
^^""""

and some other things ...

good beginning ( i bet ) and am lookin forward to seeing more


Peace upon you my wonderful sister

Your reply make me so happy and pleased ^^

About that I want to make a possession

Thank You that you note me about it and I will edit the mistake anijhg

Thank You Again, I am really glad and happy for your reply

Best Wishes

[Schwert]

w\salam
I really liked ur topic and if it is a kind of poems then allow me to say that u r really a good poem writer
I understand exactly the meaning of this poem and I can feel it as well
I hope you show us more like this in the next time and just keep going
peace

[lolowenw]

Nice words ... Friends are the best ..
I really enjoy Reading it ..
Goodluck

[سيباساكو]

peaace upon u sista

u reallly R talented

I really injoyed reading it

keep going >>>sebasaku

[sweety angel]

this words are so amazing
keep going and good luck

:)

[deth of winte]

woow
ILike it

[B I b a]

peace be upon you

great thing icon30

I really interested reading it 8wq4

the simple words make it wonderful Icon093

keep this good work :3hrt3:



have a nice day :SnipeR (69):

[وردة التنين]

so nice And
wonderful words
I like it ^^