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21-6-2012, 11:00 AM
in the name of god
sure Im not an expert but i enjoy writing in my free time . and i wanted to thank specifiac person ( the one who encouraged me to do my best ) by writing this short story . so here it is
under that hat of yours
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As the sun rises in the morning to declare and announce the start of a new day , and spread it's light as never before , I ( Patrick Defoe ) un like the others woke up in a certain date . Specifically at the time of twilight knowing that this is going to be the last day of my life .
I'm now standing behind the jail doors waiting for my well-known destiny .Sure you are now wandering why . What's the capital crime that I made ? Lots of questions in your mind with no answers . But before you judge me , let me mention to you my story in abbreviation .
" I was an orphan . A rich family adopted me when I was a babe . The Defoes raised me well and treated me like if I were their own child . After many years , in the age of 18 , I fall in love with a damsel ( Ann parks ) while I was studying in the university . I wanted to marry her but father refused as she is coming from a poor family unlike us . After my insistence , they gave up on me . However they were not in to these arrangements . So I had a choice of two . Whether staying here or going out with her and never return back . I chose the second one as my love towards her was above every thing. I espoused her . We had then a wonderful , fair girl that I named her sandra. Two moths later the war has begun ..."
>> ( Daniel " Patrick's friend talking after 2 years ):
" and here were we suffered . At the first international war in 1914 , I with plenty of guilt running in my blood , was spying in order to give Britain the latest news about Germany by mailing the government . When patrick :: my dear friend :: knew , he didn't allow me to send the letter without adding his name instead of mine . As if he knew I will be arrested for this . In the third year Ann died leaving him suffer by his own . This shocked him as he was deeply affected by the sad news . And that was clearly obvious in his expressions . .."
he ( daniel )Completed : " Misery often comes after wars. It's all over . That's why I've been asked to move out to Rome temporary as I were a reporter back then . Patrick expectations were right . He was arrested because of seeping top secret reports between countries while I was the one who did the whole time . He didn't tell me a thing but wrote me a letter to take care of his only daughter ".
>> Back to Patrick : " here am I standing with complete silence in front of the abattoir of my death . I can barely pullout my attire . My feet are so heavy to move . As I am standing next to death , the man who is contributing in this event asked me : ( any words ??) " .
>> Daniel : " (death before dishonor . That's my behest for you all ) . That what he said after it . And as the sun dipped below the horizon , he dropped down dead ."
Poor Patrick . He was in the bloom of youth . He , with his work , raised the banner of friendship up so high . I'm afraid he won't behold his child growing up in front of him . God bless his dear heart
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sure Im not an expert but i enjoy writing in my free time . and i wanted to thank specifiac person ( the one who encouraged me to do my best ) by writing this short story . so here it is
under that hat of yours
http://www.almlf.com/get-8-2012-almlf_com_4fp11hlpz9.jpg
As the sun rises in the morning to declare and announce the start of a new day , and spread it's light as never before , I ( Patrick Defoe ) un like the others woke up in a certain date . Specifically at the time of twilight knowing that this is going to be the last day of my life .
I'm now standing behind the jail doors waiting for my well-known destiny .Sure you are now wandering why . What's the capital crime that I made ? Lots of questions in your mind with no answers . But before you judge me , let me mention to you my story in abbreviation .
" I was an orphan . A rich family adopted me when I was a babe . The Defoes raised me well and treated me like if I were their own child . After many years , in the age of 18 , I fall in love with a damsel ( Ann parks ) while I was studying in the university . I wanted to marry her but father refused as she is coming from a poor family unlike us . After my insistence , they gave up on me . However they were not in to these arrangements . So I had a choice of two . Whether staying here or going out with her and never return back . I chose the second one as my love towards her was above every thing. I espoused her . We had then a wonderful , fair girl that I named her sandra. Two moths later the war has begun ..."
>> ( Daniel " Patrick's friend talking after 2 years ):
" and here were we suffered . At the first international war in 1914 , I with plenty of guilt running in my blood , was spying in order to give Britain the latest news about Germany by mailing the government . When patrick :: my dear friend :: knew , he didn't allow me to send the letter without adding his name instead of mine . As if he knew I will be arrested for this . In the third year Ann died leaving him suffer by his own . This shocked him as he was deeply affected by the sad news . And that was clearly obvious in his expressions . .."
he ( daniel )Completed : " Misery often comes after wars. It's all over . That's why I've been asked to move out to Rome temporary as I were a reporter back then . Patrick expectations were right . He was arrested because of seeping top secret reports between countries while I was the one who did the whole time . He didn't tell me a thing but wrote me a letter to take care of his only daughter ".
>> Back to Patrick : " here am I standing with complete silence in front of the abattoir of my death . I can barely pullout my attire . My feet are so heavy to move . As I am standing next to death , the man who is contributing in this event asked me : ( any words ??) " .
>> Daniel : " (death before dishonor . That's my behest for you all ) . That what he said after it . And as the sun dipped below the horizon , he dropped down dead ."
Poor Patrick . He was in the bloom of youth . He , with his work , raised the banner of friendship up so high . I'm afraid he won't behold his child growing up in front of him . God bless his dear heart
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