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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : How to write an EnglisH Article



Dragonier
19-6-2007, 03:15 PM
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته


.We all sometimes need to write an English article
.It may be for school, college, work or any other purposes
However, the are some rules or what I prefer to call steps that we can
follow in order to write an article without any mistake or with
.the least mistakes possiple. And I will try my best to explain them


First of all, We all know that any English article
consists of three main parts which are
Introduction - 1
2- Subject
3- Conclusion


.In order to write a good article, you must write all of them
.Forgetting any of them could badly affect the article
.So try as hard as you can not to forget any of them
.I will talk about of each of them in details



First: The Introduction


.I consider the introduction the most important part in any article
.By reading the introduction you may know the level of the article
.If the introduction was good that will probarly lead to a good article
.And if the introduction was bad that may lead to a bad article
In order to write the best introduction. You have to know the main
.IDEA of the article you are going to write. Because it's the key to your article
. In the introduction you tell the reader about the article and its main IDEA


:Try ro use strong words at the beginning such as
No one can deny that, There is no doupt that As we all know


.Of course you can write the introduction by your own words
.But try to choose strong words as much as you can
.Increasing your vocabulary can be a great help in this
.The main IDEA of your article must be writen in the introduction
.Forgetting to write it may affect the article in a negative way



Second: The Subject


.After you finish writing the proper introduction
.you will move to the next part which is the subject
.The subject represents your thoughts about the main IDEA


Write everything you know and everything you like to add about the article
.But it must be related to the article. Try to arrange your IDEAs
(Write them on another paper or keep them in your mind (That's what I prefer


Use some of the conjunction words such as
That, But, Because, So, Altough, However, And


.There so many words that you could use. But that's all I remember right now


These helps alot in making links between your IDEAs
.and makes your article more organised


:You can also use the relative pronouns which includes
Who, Which, Where, When, Whom, Whose


Each one of them has a different use
.and I'll try to explain them in in another topic


These helps alot in the subject and make it easier for the
.reader to understand your IDEAs
And can make him more convinced about your point of view
Writing the subject strongly depends on the writer himself and on
his points of view. And that can be gained by reading



Third: The Conclusion


.The conclusion is the last part of the article. It summerizes the whole article
.You may write your own point of view about the main IDEA
.Or you can write the benefits of the main IDEA



However, There are two other things that has a great impact in the article


First: The spelling Mistakes


The spelling mistakes may ruin all of your hard work. If you had great IDEAs
,in the article. But in the other hand if it contained MANY spelling mistakes
.The reader may hate the article or stop reading it
:p .It's the same watching an subtitled anime with bad subtitles
You may stop watching the anime even if lt was an great anime and vice versa
.So, try as hard as you can to avoid or reduce the spelling mistakes


Second: Grammer


.The grammer is as important as the avoiding the spelling mistakes
.They do the same thing to your article



:From all of the above, we can summerize writing an article on these steps


1- :Consider writing the three major parts of the article which are
a- Introduction b-Subject c- Conclusion


2- :When writng the introduction you must consider
1- Write the main IDEA of the article
2- Try to use strong words


3- When writing the subject gather all of your IDEAs and your point of view
.concerning all the parts of the main subject


4- When writing the conclusion try summerizing all of the article
.as briefly as you can


5- Try to avoid spelling and grammer mistakes because they have a great
influence at the article



The End
. Hope you liked the subject. It take me two hours or so to write this subject :smug2:
It may contain some mistakes because I wrote by my own
.words and experiences


:) .Finally Thank for reading the subject.
:rolleyes5cz: . I am sure it took you alot of your time
.I tried to make the explaination as simple as I could
. So, If you have any questions don't hesitate. Just ask


See ya in another topic.
:bye1:

тнэ ѕиіρэя
19-6-2007, 08:15 PM
وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته
.. woooow
It's a very nice topic
thank you very very much
Your explanation was honestly amazing
I think that there is something that you didn't mention, Thesis Statement
but I think also that's (Thesis..) for the student who specialization in English


thanks again


keep up your creating topics

Dragonier
19-6-2007, 08:31 PM
وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته




.. woooow
It's a very nice topic
thank you very very much
Your explanation was honestly amazing
I think that there is something that you didn't mentioned, Thesis Statement
but I think also that's (Thesis..) for the student who specialization in English


thanks again



keep up your creating topics


:) .Thank fo you for reading the topic. I'm glad you liked it.





I think that there is something that you didn't mentioned, Thesis Statement

but I think also that's (Thesis..) for the student who specialization in English



As I know the Thesis is research you write in order to get a certain degree.
:oo7dt: Correct me if I was wrong
:) Finally thank you for your passing by

mysterious eyes
19-6-2007, 08:39 PM
Thanks sister for this great topic !!

فاطمة الزهراء
19-6-2007, 08:56 PM
وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

woooow the topic is wonderful and amazing

the explaining is obvious ^^

الموضوع ازدادت جماليته بالألوان أحسنتِ

what you write it is very important

but unfortunately I'm still unskilled in English , so I need more vocabulary for improve my level, in addition to learn more rules grammatical

actually I take advantage of your topic too much

thank you my sister for your great effort to write this topic

لا تحرمينا من جديدكِ

في أمان الله

13390detective
19-6-2007, 09:35 PM
thank you my dear sister for this marvelous topic
the explanation is simple and useful
( وفعلا خير الكلام ما قل ودل )
and this steps can be used in all languages
except the grammar of course

TH@NK YOU


ــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ
ملاحظة :
لست جيدا في التحدث بالانجليزية افهمها نعم لكن من ناحية الاملاء والتعبير
حدث ولا حرج
ولكن سأكتب بالانجليزية عسى الواحد فينا يتعلم شوي
:nosweat:

Dragonier
19-6-2007, 09:35 PM
Thanks sister for this great topic !!
:) I'm glad you liked it dear





وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته




woooow the topic is wonderful and amazing


the explaining is obvious ^^


الموضوع ازدادت جماليته بالألوان أحسنتِ


what you write it is very important


but unfortunately I'm still unskilled in English , so I need more vocabulary for improve my level, in addition to learn more rules grammatical


actually I take advantage of your topic too much


thank you my sister for your great effort to write this topic


لا تحرمينا من جديدكِ


في أمان الله



:nosweat: .I didn't think that it will be that good
:strongsad: .In fact. I enjoyed colouring it
.Keep on reading to increase your vocabulary
.I play playstation to increase my vocabulary
:cool21: and it helped me alot specially RPG games
In my opinion it's the most interesting way to increase
:D .the vocabulary


:) Thank for your encouraging

فاطمة الزهراء
19-6-2007, 10:12 PM
yes reading is a solution but I do other thing which it develop my level in English

it's watching Anime translating in English

but the problem I know some lessons of grammar

because I study English only 3 years

ولكن مع ذلك ولله الحمد أبذل كل جهدي لكي يتحسن مستواي في الإنجليزي إلى الأفضل

thanks for your golden advice^^

وفي أمان الله

K.Shinichi
19-6-2007, 11:09 PM
This thread is incredible

of course that's not my whole reply

.... Brb

shooog
19-6-2007, 11:14 PM
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته


Hello. Dragonier
Thank you for this topic
Ammm. I think you wrote in general.
If I can add something, there is an outline that mentions the steps of article or essay.


Introduction *
( Topic sentence (main ideA
Thesis statement includes supporting ideAs.
It just gives a reader what a body of essay is talking a bout


Supporting ideAs*
Body, which includes supporting ideAs, may be takes more than one paragraph
Each paragraph has main ideA


Conclusion*
In conclusion, what Dragonier wrote, is what I know


This is calling Academic Essay


Thank you Dragonier
I hope to read your subjects
what is happening with word :crazy: ideA
Amm. can you tell me How do we write (.) in the right side?:) thank you


.

тнэ ѕиіρэя
19-6-2007, 11:20 PM
As I know the Thesis is research you write in order to get a certain degree.
:oo7dt: Correct me if I was wrong

:) Finally thank you for your passing by


.Well, I confused a little bit
:nosweat: Thesis statment is for an essay
.So, it doesn't matter for your topic
:hmmm3: soory

thanks again

Dragonier
19-6-2007, 11:56 PM
thank you my dear sister for this marvelous topic




the explanation is simple and useful
( وفعلا خير الكلام ما قل ودل )
and this steps can be used in all languages
except the grammar of course


TH@NK YOU



ــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ
ملاحظة :
لست جيدا في التحدث بالانجليزية افهمها نعم لكن من ناحية الاملاء والتعبير
حدث ولا حرج
ولكن سأكتب بالانجليزية عسى الواحد فينا يتعلم شوي
:nosweat:



Sorry, I just saw your replay.
I didn't expect all those replies
Thank you for posting :)






This thread is incredible





of course that's not my whole reply



.... Brb

.And I'm waiting for your next reply and looking forward to it :strongsad:






السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته




Hello. Dragonier
Thank you for this topic
Ammm. I think you wrote in general.
If I can add something, there is an outline that mentions the steps of article or essay.


Introduction *
( Topic sentence (main ideA
Thesis statement includes supporting ideAs.
It just gives a reader what a body of essay is talking a bout


Supporting ideAs*
Body, which includes supporting ideAs, may be takes more than one paragraph
Each paragraph has main ideA


Conclusion*
In conclusion, what Dragonier wrote, is what I know


This is calling Academic Essay


Thank you Dragonier
I hope to read your subjects
what is happening with word :crazy: ideA
Amm. can you tell me How do we write (.) in the right side?:) thank you



.


.Thanks for this valuable reply shoog
.It really summerised everything I wrote
.By the way, It is a great addition and it helped me alot
You can either avoid writing "IDEA" with the small letters or disable the smileys in the reply. As for the periods, try writing the in the beginning of the line. And it will work
:)





.Well, I confused a little bit




:nosweat: Thesis statment is for an essay
.So, it doesn't matter for your topic
:hmmm3: soory



thanks again

.There is nothing to be sorry about
:strongsad:

Ai-Kun
20-6-2007, 12:41 AM
:

a very very very very good topic

it is a very useful and important subject

by the way i knew a lot of english words but i suck in spelling and writing

and i always play RPG games like final fantasy ( i like part 9 the most )

lol

i will read the rest of the topic now

See U SiS

:

Dragonier
20-6-2007, 12:48 AM
:





a very very very very good topic


it is a very useful and important subject


by the way i knew a lot of english words but i suck in spelling and writing


and i always play RPG games like final fantasy ( i like part 9 the most )


lol


i will read the rest of the topic now


See U SiS



:


Thank fo this reply haibara :)
:strongsad: It reminded me with many dear memories.
As for the bad spelling, you have to get over this problem.
Because just by using the right grammer, avoiding spelling
mistakes and having four or five IDEAs about the main Idea
helped me in getting high marks in many articles
:)
Btw, I don't like FF9 much. I prefer 7 more.
It is the best :harhar1:

Rinku
20-6-2007, 02:51 AM
...Interesting subject

Thanks A lot Dragonier

I am looking forward to see other subjects from you

See you

Rinku

CrEaTiVe
20-6-2007, 05:35 AM
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... Dear Ms. Dragonier


... immm ... actually, I don't know what to say after reading this valued information


Well, let's get down to the point … immm … I've read your thread & some of the replies of some members & found some unclear points, which made me reply & discuss this topic with you


... So, please don't misunderstand me or hate for that … looooooooooool


... Immm … I'll translate some important points in my reply also to the members to be clear


مرحبا بكم أعضاءنا الكرام المبدعين المحششين أعضاء MSOMS ...


الكلام اللي فوق كله مع العضوة المبدعة وما فيها حاجة تقريبا مهمة تحتاج لترجمة للشباب اللي يبغوني أترجمها ...


ولكن من بعد هذا الكلام حبدأ أشرح بالإنجليزي وبعض النقاط المهمة حشرحها لكم بالعربي ... أعتقد كذا أفضل للي ما يعرف إنجليزي بالمرة ...


عاد اللي يبغى يستفيد يعرف طريقه ... واللي ما يبغى بكيفه ... أهم شي المعلومة توصل ...


... Immm … actually, writing shows how skillful is the writer, especially when it comes to essays & articles
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إمممم ... بيني وبينكم مهارة الكتابة في اللغة الإنجليزية بتظهر إبداع الكاتب وخاصة لمن نجي للمقالات الصغيرة منها والطويلة ...


Also, there are some variety of types in the essay, which are; Cause and Effect Essay, Narrative Essay, Argumentative Essay … for the mean time we have to concentrate on these three types ...l


أيضا في عندنا أنواع كثيرة من المقالات ... منها المقالات اللي بتعتمد على الأسباب والتأثيرات ... والمقالات القصصية ... والمقالات الجدلية ... حاليا خلونا نكثف مجهودنا على هذي الأنواع ...


Generally, as you said the essay has three parts; The Introduction, The Body and The Conclusion … and you have already explained each part on its own … and thanks … you saved my time doing that … loooooooooooooool ...l


بشكل عام زي ما ذكرتي في موضوعك المقالات تعتمد على 3 أجزاء لا رابع لها ... المقدمة ... جسم المقالة ... النهاية ... والحمد لله اختصرتي علي الطريق وشرحتي كل واحد على حده ومشكووورة ... ههههههههههههههههههههه ...


Immm … ok, let's start with The Introduction which is the 1st part in our essay & the most important one in the whole essay … why? Some of us don't know the reason why this part is the most important part in the essay … actually, it's because it has the Thesis Statement. The Thesis Statement, or as an abbreviation TS, is one sentence & normally located in the last sentence of the paragraph. This sentence can be enough to understand the whole essay ...l


whaaaaaaaaaat ??? are you insane ???l


ya, I'm ... have you noticed now … looooooooool … ok ok … to be clear with you, when the lecturers in the universities or the schools mark the writing part; they have in general 30 mark … 15 of 30 is for the Thesis Statement … Can you guys imagine that ???l
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إممم أوكي ... خلونا نبدأ مع الأول والأهم في المقالة كللللها ... واللي هي المقدمة ... ليش ؟؟؟ للأسف بعضنا ما بيعرف ليش المقدمة في المقالة هي أهم جزئية في المقالة كلها ... في الحقيقة السببب يكمن في امتلاكه الـ Thesis Statement [ ما أعرف كيف أقولها بالعربي ] ... طبعا الـ Thesis Statement أو كاختصار مشهور له TS عبارة عن جملة واحدة وتقع في العادة في آخر جملة من القطعة أو الجزئية الأولى من المقالة ... وللمعلومية فهذي الجملة كافية في إنك تفهم المقالة كلللها من أولها لآخرها ...
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كييييييييييييييييييف ؟؟؟ إنت مخبول وللا مجنون ؟؟؟


هههههههههههههههههه ... بدري ... توك عرفت ... أوكي أوكي ... عشان أكون صريح معاكم خلوني أشرح حاجة مهمة ... المدرسين في الجامعات الأجنبية أو المدارس لمن بيجوا يصححوا جزئية الكتابة واللي هي المقالة يكون في يدهم 30 درجة مثلا للكتابة ... 15 درجة من الـ 30 هذي كلها تروح للـ Thesis Statement ... يالله تخيلوها معاي وبتعرفوا ليش هي أهم حاجة في القطعة كلها ...


Bear in mind that The Introduction deals with writing in general & then narrowing down to the topic until we reach to the Thesis Statement which we write what we'll talk about in the next part of the essay which is The Body ...l


إممممم ... حط في بالك إنت وهو إنه المقدمة بتعتمد على الكتابة بشكل عام عن الموضوع وبعدها تبدأ تدخل في العميق مع الموضوع المحدد كتابته إلى ما نوصل للـ Thesis Statement واللي نكتب فيها ويش اللي حنهرج عنه في الجزئية اللي بعد المقدمة واللي هي جسم المقالة ...


Some of you might ask; [ Does the Thesis Statement has to be in the last sentence of The Introduction or not? ]l
... well, nice question
-

immm … actually, the Thesis Statement can be any where in The Introduction as long as it shows the point of it … which means I can position the Thesis Statement in the 1st sentence of The Introduction or also in the 3rd or the 5th sentence in The Introduction … but this comes in advanced level & also I don't recommend it … but also doing this part shows how powerful is your writing ...l


بعضكم بيسأل وبيقول [ لازم الـ Thesis Statement يكون آخر جملة في المقدمة ؟؟؟ ] ...


أوكي ... سؤال حلو ...
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إممم ... في الحقيقة الـ Thesis Statement ممكن يكون في أي موقع من المقدمة طالما كانت واضحة إنها Thesis Statement ... يعني ممكن أقوم أحطه في أول جملة في المقدمة أو في ثالث أو خامس جملة في المقدمة فما تأثر ... ولكن هذي الطريقة شوي خطيرة وماهي لحالتنا وبرضوا أنا ما أفضلها لأنها تقعد المصصح شوي وبيضطر يدقق على ورقتك إذا بيصحح هههههههههههههههه ... بس على فكرة ... إذا تمكنت منها وعرفت كيف بتكون الـ Thesis Statement بيعرف اللي أمامك أو القارئ مدى قوتك في الكتابة باللغة الإنجليزية ...


Immm … I think I'll stop here & keep on writing after I come from the supplementary exam … hope you got my point & hope I cleared some points in your 1st part … but put in your consideration that I didn't finish talking about something in The Introduction part from your thread … immmm, consider it as a high priority … loooooooooooool ...l


إمممم ... الظاهر إني لازم أوقف هني وبكمل بعد ما أرجع من اختبار الدور الثاني ... أتمنى إنك فهمتي النقطة هذي وأتمنى إني وفقت في شرحها بالشكل المطلوب ... مع إنه شرحك أحلى من شرحي المعفووووس هههههههههههههههههههههههههه ... ولكن حطي في بالك إني لسة ما خلصت ههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه ... لسة ورايا شغلات أبي أتكلم عنها ... بس خليني أرجع وأكمل ... واعتبريها من الأولويات أو المواضيع المهمة هع ...
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Yours From the universe of creativity
CrEaTiVe
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أخوكم من فضاء الإبداع
CrEaTiVe
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Kudo_Lover
20-6-2007, 06:13 AM
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
وعليكم السلام و رحمة الله و بركاته




First of all, We all know that any English article
consists of three main parts which are
Introduction - 1
2- Subject
3- Conclusion


U rememberd me my teacher .. She always said like this



:p .It's the same watching an subtitled anime with bad subtitles
looooooool .. U R right


Hope you liked the subject. It take me two hour or so to write this subject :smug2:





Realy I like it


..Poor Girl
two hour ..



It may contain some mistakes because I wrote by my own
U R amazing Dragonier



See ya in another topic.
C.U

Dragonier
20-6-2007, 12:28 PM
Rinku
Hello Rinku.
Nice to see you here.
I'm glad that you liked that topic
Thanks for the reply


CrEaTiVe
Thank you for your valuable reply
I didn't expect that anyone will look at this topic the way you did


... immm ... actually, I don't know what to say after reading this valued information [/QUOTE
]
Actually. I didn't know what to say after I read this great reply





Well, let's get down to the point … immm … I've read your thread & some of the replies of some members & found some unclear points, which made me reply & discuss this topic with you


... So, please don't misunderstand me or hate for that … looooooooooool

[/quote]

.I welcome any discussion about anything in any part
And No, I won't hate you for your disscussion
We can't learn untill we make mistakes. and we will stay at the same level
.without any develpoment in our skills and abilities
So, In my opinion it's better to be critised and thanked than to be thanked only.

[quote]

... Immm … actually, writing shows how skillful is the writer, especially when it comes to essays & articles

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True.. So True






Also, there are some variety of types in the essay, which are; Cause and Effect Essay, Narrative Essay, Argumentative Essay … for the mean time we have to concentrate on these three types ...l



As a matter of fact. I didn't know these information
Maybe because I stoped learning English
In the school I used to concentrate alot in learning everything I can. But after I entered the college I didn't have the time to improve my writing skills
It's been along time since I wrote an article and no one can imagine what my :nosweat: last article was about


[quote]Generally, as you said the essay has three parts; The Introduction, The Body and The Conclusion … and you have already explained each part on its own … and thanks … you saved my time doing that … loooooooooooooool ...

My explaination wasn't that detailed. I neglected alot of things that I wanted to talk about





Immm … ok, let's start with The Introduction which is the 1st part in our essay & the most important one in the whole essay … why? Some of us don't know the reason why this part is the most important part in the essay … actually, it's because it has the Thesis Statement. The Thesis Statement, or as an abbreviation TS, is one sentence & normally located in the last sentence of the paragraph. This sentence can be enough to understand the whole essay ...l


I just discovered that I used the These statment in all of my previous essays
but didn't know it's name
?:oo7dt: Strange. Isn't it
I can't add anything to what you said





Bear in mind that The Introduction deals with writing in general & then narrowing down to the topic until we reach to the Thesis Statement which we write what we'll talk about in the next part of the essay which is The Body ...l



Thanks for these information. It helped in arranging many of my IDEAs




Some of you might ask; [ Does the Thesis Statement has to be in the last sentence of The Introduction or not? ]l
... well, nice question

-


immm … actually, the Thesis Statement can be any where in The Introduction as long as it shows the point of it … which means I can position the Thesis Statement in the 1st sentence of The Introduction or also in the 3rd or the 5th sentence in The Introduction … but this comes in advanced level & also I don't recommend it … but also doing this part shows how powerful is your writing ...l



I noticed that in many essays I read. The writer usualy mentions the TS
anywhere in the introduction.





Immm … I think I'll stop here & keep on writing after I come from the supplementary exam … hope you got my point & hope I cleared some points in your 1st part … but put in your consideration that I didn't finish talking about something in The Introduction part from your thread … immmm, consider it as a high priority … loooooooooooool ...l



I hope you you get what you want :)
And your information and Ideas helped me alot
It improved alot of my thoughts
I am looking forward to your next reply. But I hope it will be longer than this one
:cool21: Do your best

Dragonier
20-6-2007, 01:55 PM
وعليكم السلام و رحمة الله و بركاته



U rememberd me my teacher .. She always said like this



looooooool .. U R right





Realy I like it



..Poor Girl ..



U R amazing Dragonier



C.U





Thank you for your nice reply
:) I Liked it. It was simple
:nosweat: ?What's that stupid spelling mistake
I will edit it now
See you soon

K.Shinichi
20-6-2007, 04:05 PM
Now after reading the artical

you've done such a great job

and I want to add some things in the introduction and th Conclusion

In the introduction you must say why did you choose this topic, what makes yu want to write about it

and make related to the beging of your subject

that way the reader won't find any diffeculties in reading the artical

and the main idea could be more clear to him

And in the Conclusion you have to say what ios the summery of all what've you said

and it could be your point of view like you said

anf of course the subject you need to explian and summrize all your ideas so it don't get borring 4 the reader

Than Dragonier 4 this fabules thread

it seems that you've done a lot of hard work in it

...Jane

Dragonier
20-6-2007, 05:26 PM
:smile2: Thanks for the reply Kudo


,As for what you said about the introduction
If the introduction was good, it will attract the reader
and as a result he will be eager and excited to continue
reading the whole article


,Also the conclusion
The reader must feel that he gained benefits from
the article. So, you summerise the topic to him
If he didn't get any information from, the article
because it was hard for him or he wasn't paying attention
.At the conclusion he will observe and discover something
And here appears the ability of the writer to clearify it for the reader


Thank you again for the reply and I hope you liked it

Dark G!rl
20-6-2007, 10:32 PM
I agree with you sister
and in the first I alaways had
mistake in grammar and I learn from it
but, how many time I will do it so
I thank you for this subject which I think
it important for us

CrEaTiVe
21-6-2007, 01:27 AM
… Hi again ms. Dragonier and also the members of MSOMS


Immm … let's get down to the topic immediately … I think it's a good indea to catch the time …l


إمممم ... خلونا ندخل في الموضوع مباشرة ... لأنه أفضل عشان نكسب الوقت معانا ...


In my last reply I stopped with The Introduction & the Thesis Statement and I've also mentioned how important the Thesis Statement is …l


في ردي السابق وقفت عن المقدمة والـ Thesis Statement وذكرنا أهمية الـ Thesis Statement فيها ...


... Now, I wanna talk about something in The Introduction as a part lecture … loooooooooool


الآن أبغى أتكلم عن حاجة في المقدمة أو أيضا في المقالة كلها ... وطبعا حطوها كدرس من الدروس ... هههههههههههههههههههههه >>> يعني غصبا عنك تاخذها إنت وهو وهي هههههههههههههه ...


:Immmm … Dragonier said


في الموضوع ... أختنا المبدعة Dragonier قالت:



:Try ro use strong words at the beginning such as
No one can deny that, There is no doupt that As we all know


… Is it right? Do we call it as a strong word? Think if & tell me


هل هذا صحيح ؟؟؟ هل نقدر نقولها على إنها كلمات قوية أو إنها مفيدة في كتابة المقالة ؟؟؟ فكري في هالشي وخبريني ...


As we are focusing in The Introduction; here is another point we have to be clear with … which is WHAT WE WRITE IN THE INTRUDUCTION?l


بما إننا لسة في المقدمة بتكلم هالمرة على نقطة أخرى لازم ننتبه لها كلنا ... واللي هي إيش اللي نكتبه في المقدمة؟ طبعا غير الـ Thesis Statement ... الآن نشوف سوى ...


Immm … to be clear with you guys, The Introduction has to be designed to attract the reader's attention to your essay and give him|her the indea of your essay in an attractive way of writing …l


إمممم ... عشان نكون واضحين سوى، المقدمة لازم تكون مصوغة عشان تجذب القارئ للمقالة اللي بتكتبها وبتعطيهـ|ـا فكرة المقالة بتتكلم عن إيش بالضبط ...


To make it easier for you, I'll try to point some ways or indeas on how to write a very creative introduction …l


وعشان أسهلها عليكم، بحاول أحط لكم بعض الخطوات والأفكار في عملية كتابة مقالة إبداعية خالية من الأخطاء وبتكون في نقاط ...


A- BEGIN WITH AN ATTENTION GRABBER
1- البدء في خطف الانتباه لدى الآخرين


Immm … actually, there is no rules on how to grab the other's attention, which means it's up to you & your creativity on how you'll grab the reader's attention … but here are some indeas that will be useful for you …l


إمممم ... بيني وبينكم ما في هناك أي قاعدة معينة نجذب فيها انتباه الآخرين في عملية كتابة المقدمة ... وهذا يعني إنه بيعتمد عليك وعلى إبداعاتك في كيفية جذب أنظار القارئ لمقالتك ... ولكن هنا بعض الأفكار اللي ممكن تفيدكم في عملية جذب انتباه القارئ لمقالتك ...


¤ معلومات جذابة | Startling Information ¤


Immm … an interesting way to grab the reader's attention … but bear in mind that the information you write must be true and verifiable and it doesn’t need to be totally new to your reader … it could simply be a pertinent fact that explicitly illustrates the point you wish to make … as for this technique, it would be better if you elaborate this piece of facts with two or three sentences of examples …l


إمممم ... طريقة ممتعة في جذب القارئ لمقالتك ... ولكن حط في بالك إنه المعلومات هذي لازم تكون صحيحة وموثوق فيها وفي نفس الوقت موش لازم تكون صحيحة 100% عند كل اللي بيقرؤوا مقالتك ... ممكن وبكل سهولة تكون موضحة بمثال بعيد عن الموضوع ولكن له صلة في نفس الوقت بالموضوع بحيث إنك في النهاية توصل للنقطة اللي تبغى تتكلم عنها ... وبالنسبة لهذا التكنيك فأفضل إنك تلحق هذي المعلومات الموثوقة بجملتين أو ثلاث تكون أمثلة للمعلومة هذي ...


يعني بالعربي الفصيح ... تبدأ المقدمة حقتك بمعلومات عااااامة وبعدين تبدأ تدخل شوي شوي في العميق إلى أن تصل للنقطة اللي تبغى تتكلم عنها في مقالتك ... وهذا كله باستخدام هذا التكنيك ... ولكن برضوا التكنيكات اللي بعدها أيضا تعتمد على هذا الكلام ... فلا تنسوها ...


¤ حكاية | Anecdote ¤


Immm … an anecdote is like starting with a story that illustrate your topic's point … you have to make sure that the anecdote must be short, to the point, and relevant to your topic … this would be a very effective opener for your essay but use it carefully … some of you might start with it & end with it looooooooooooool … so please be careful …l


إممممم ... التكنيك هذا هو إنك تبدأ مقالتك بقصة قصيرة من 3 أو 4 جمل لا أكثر إلى أن تصل لنقطة الموضوع للي بتتكلم فيها ... لازم تتأكد إنه الحكاية تكون قصيرة وتؤدي للنقطة اللي بتتكلم فيها وتكون أيضا متعلقة بالموضوع حقك ... الفكرة هذي ممكن تكون فعالة بشكل ما تتصور كبداية لمقالتك ولكن حاول إنك تكون حذر جدا فيها ... بعضكم ممكن يبدأ بيها وينتهي مقالته بيها ويكون نسي مقالته عن بكرة أبيها كاملة ... ههههههههههههههههههههههههههه ... فعشان كذا خلك حذر إنت وهو في التكنيك هذا ...


¤ محادثة لتبادل الآراء والأفكار | Dialogue ¤


Immm … well, this technique is quite complicated but interesting one which deal with starting your essay with a dialogue between two speakers … an appropriate dialogue doesn't have to identify these speakers, but at the same time the reader must understand the point you are trying to convey … also, you have to use at most two to three exchanges between these speakers to make your point which means you'll have to write 5 to 6 sentences at most and also followed by 1 or 2 sentenced of elaborations … I think it's somehow hard to understand, so, please refer to the translation …l


إممممم ... أوكي ... التكنيك هذا شوي معقد ولكن أعتبره مرررة تكنيك حلو واللي بيعتمد فيها على بدء كتابتك لمقالتك في محادثة بين شخصين ... المحادثة هذي موش شرط إنها تحدد شخصية المتحدث ... يعني ممكن يكون وهمي ... ولكن في نفس الوقت لازم يكون القارئ فاهم النقطة اللي إنت بتحاول توصلها من المحادثة هذي ... وكمان لازم على أكثر تحديد تستخدم نقلتين إلى 3 نقلات بين الشخصين في مقالتك عشان توصل للنقطة اللي بتكلم فيها في مقالتك ... وهذا يعني إنك حتضتطر تكتب 5 إلى 6 جمل بالكثير ... وبرضوا تكون متبوعة بجملة أو جملتين كمثال ... أرجوا إنكم فهمتوا المقصد ...


¤ معلومات مستخلصة أو موجزة | Summary Information ¤


Immm … a very strait forwarded technique to the Thesis Statement which deals with a few sentences explaining your topic in general terms and it can lead the reader gently to your thesis. Each sentence should become gradually more specific; until you reach your thesis … it's the easiest & the most popular technique used among the writers …l


إممممم ... على بلاطة ... أسهل طريقة وأوضح طريق للـ Thesis Statement واللي بيتعامل فيها مع عدة جمل تشرح فيها موضوعك بشكل عااااام وإمكانية فهم القارئ للـ Thesis Statement حقك بشكل أوضح ... كل جملة لازم تكون متناسق مع اللي قبلها إلى أن تصل لنقطة موضوعك ... يعني تبدأ مقالتك بجملة عااااامة عن الموضوع والجملة اللي بعدها تكون شوي محددة واللي بعدها أكثر اقتراب من الموضوع وهكذا إلى أن تصل إلى الـ Thesis Statement واللي تكون آخر جملة في مقدمتك ... طبعا لازم ما تتعدى الـ 5 جمل على أكثر تقدير ... يعني ممكن تخليه 4 جمل والخامس يكون هو الـ Thesis Statement أو تخليه 5 جمل والسادس يكون هو الـ Thesis Statement ... وهكذا ...


B- ADDING SENTENCES IF NEEDED
2- إضافة جمل إذا احتاج الأمر لذلك


Well … I meant with that if the attention grabber was only a sentence or two, add one or two more sentences that will lead the reader from your opening to your Thesis Statement … which summarize another important point; each paragraph must be 5 to 6 sentences … that depends on the article or the essay you write … some exams or situations need to be 8 to 9 sentences in each paragraph …l


أوكي ... أعني بهذي النقطة إنه إذا كانت جمل جذب انتباه القارئ تحتوي على جملة أو جملتين فإنك من الأفضل إنك تضيف أيضا جملتين أو 3 جمل أخرى واللي بتقود القارئ من مقدمتك للـ Thesis Statement الخاص فيك ... وهذي النقطة بتقودنا إلى نقطة أخرى مهمة واللي هي إنه كل فقرة في المقالة لازم تحتوي على أقل تقدير 5 إلى 6 جمل ... طبعا هذا على حسب الاختبار اللي أمامك أو على حسب الموقف اللي إنت بتمر عليه .. بعض أحيان بتكون مطالب إنك تكتب من 8 إلى 9 جمل في الفقرة الواحدة ...


C- FINISHING WITH THE THESIS STATEMENT
3- إنهاء المقدمة بالـ Thesis Statement


Immm … I've already explained this point in my last reply … so no need to repeat … but here I need to explain something we didn't mention yet … WHAT TO WRITE IN THE THESIS STATEMENT? Have you think of this question before? So, here we come to this …l


إمممم ... أعتقد إني شرحت النقطة هذي من قبل ... وعشان كذا ما يحتاج نعيد ونكرر .. ولكن هنا أبغى أشرح حاجة مهمة ما تطرقنا لها من قبل ... إيش نكتب في الـ Thesis Statement ؟؟؟ هل فكرت في هالسؤال من قبل ؟؟؟ إذن هنا حنشرح النقطة هذي ...


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... I'll stop here & continue the rest after I get some rest … loooooooooooooool


Thanks Dragonier for allowing me keep on posting in your thread … and really sorry for interrupting you …l


... See you later



Yours from the universe of creativity
CrEaTiVe
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Dragonier
21-6-2007, 02:58 AM
:clap: That was great information
:oo7dt: I began thinking of changing my major
Too bad we don't learn these thing in school


I read this reply twice in order to understand every small detail in it



… Is it right? Do we call it as a strong word? Think if & tell me





I usually don't use these words, but someone told me once

:nosweat: about thim and I thought it can be useful. So, I posted them






A- BEGIN WITH AN ATTENTION GRABBER
1- البدء في خطف الانتباه لدى الآخرين


Immm … actually, there is no rules on how to grab the other's attention, which means it's up to you & your creativity on how you'll grab the reader's attention … but here are some indeas that will be useful for you …l



It really depends on the writer himself and his abilities
But if the introduction was attractive it will help alot
in the rest of the essay




¤ معلومات جذابة | Startling Information ¤

Immm … an interesting way to grab the reader's attention … but bear in mind that the information you write must be true and verifiable and it doesn’t need to be totally new to your reader … it could simply be a pertinent fact that explicitly illustrates the point you wish to make … as for this technique, it would be better if you elaborate this piece of facts with two or three
sentences of examples




It's an interesting way. But, it's not that easy to master

The writer should have a good knowledge of what he is going to write
You can't add something that you are not certain of
And you can add to or three examples about it to make it more clear
That's what I understood




Immm … an anecdote is like starting with a story that illustrate your topic's point … you have to make sure that the anecdote must be short, to the point, and relevant to your topic … this would be a very effective opener for your essay but use it carefully … some of you might start with it & end with it looooooooooooool … so please be careful …l




It's kinda hard to write an anecode in the introduction
And more than that, you must keep on your mind that it should
have a relation with the Thesis Statement
Imagination and reasonable thinking help alot in writing the anecode





¤ محادثة لتبادل الآراء والأفكار | Dialogue ¤



Immm … well, this technique is quite complicated but interesting one which deal with starting your essay with a dialogue between two speakers … an appropriate dialogue doesn't have to identify these speakers, but at the same time the reader must understand the point you are trying to convey … also, you have to use at most two to three exchanges between these speakers to make your point which means you'll have to write 5 to 6 sentences at most and also followed by 1 or 2 sentenced of elaborations … I think it's somehow hard to understand, so, please refer to the translation …l



This technique is complicated
In general, I don't like writing dialogues. But sometimes they are
the best way to clearify certain IDEAs
You need to arrange your IDEAs and think of the best way
to write the dialogue




¤ معلومات مستخلصة أو موجزة | Summary Information ¤



Immm … a very strait forwarded technique to the Thesis Statement which deals with a few sentences explaining your topic in general terms and it can lead the reader gently to your thesis. Each sentence should become gradually more specific; until you reach your thesis … it's the easiest & the most popular technique used among the writers …l



This is the most common way of writing the introduction
It is easy and doesn't need alot of experience
And most of the time I use this technique




B- ADDING SENTENCES IF NEEDED
2- إضافة جمل إذا احتاج الأمر لذلك



Well … I meant with that if the attention grabber was only a sentence or two, add one or two more sentences that will lead the reader from your opening to your Thesis Statement … which summarize another important point; each paragraph must be 5 to 6 sentences … that depends on the article or the essay you write … some exams or situations need to be 8 to 9 sentences in each paragraph …l



I don't have any addition to that





C- FINISHING WITH THE THESIS STATEMENT
3- إنهاء المقدمة بالـ Thesis Statement



Immm … I've already explained this point in my last reply … so no need to repeat … but here I need to explain something we didn't mention yet … WHAT TO WRITE IN THE THESIS STATEMENT? Have you think of this question before? So, here we come to this …l



:strongsad: Why did you stop? I was looking forward to this point
Very well. Looks like we have to wait until CrEaTiVe gets his rest
:)

I nearly wrote a comment about everything you said
I hope that I understood the techniques in the right way

I am going to sleep now


Bye

yoko chan
1-9-2007, 09:26 PM
thnx 4 th info
gr8 infos i swear