A GAME: Discover, correct, and write another mistake

[Nino chan]

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السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته


How are you? It’s cold here and am freezing to death
~_~
I hope you are doing well and enjoying your life





So this is a new game, about MISTAKES
You know, it’s normal to err.. but the abnormal is to ignore your mistake without correction
..



In this game, you are going to discover a mistake within a sentence, then correct it.. after that write another sentence which must include a mistake (only and only one mistake)l
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Example : )



Me: I go to school yesterday, but it was closed!l

The mistake is (go)i

Correction

I went to school yesterday, but it was closed!




Then you should write another mistake that needs a correction,


They has broke the window




So yeah. Let’s begin




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[Nino chan]

so here we begin

with



They has broke the window

[Miaka Yuki]

nino is a beautiful girl ^^>out:icon100:


thanks so much




They has broke the window
the mistake is ( has broke).

Correction:
They have broken the window


my sentence:
She need to save some money

[Nino chan]

am beautiful... oh i already know that :P
thnx hny

she need to save some money

(it's easier to color the mistake rather than re-writing )

correction
she needs to save some money


my new sentence

she cans sing loudly

[أَصِيلُ الحَكَايَا]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته ،،


Nino god save your activity my darling , thanks for your effort,your coordination is so beautiful

we don’t have to mention the reason , do we ?h



she cans sing loudly



she can sing loudly

- I were very scared> easy,huh? : )h

[Nino chan]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته :)

{♥} Ameen hny all i need is to make you exchange your knowledge

I were very scared

correction

I was very scared

ok if you have that time to explain why, so why not ? go on hny


my sentence

if she was you, she would find a solution

[أَصِيلُ الحَكَايَا]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته ،،




if she was you, she would find a solution




if she were you, she would find a solution

because it’s impossible to be her, it’s one of if’s cases > I think..but I can’t remember which one

- why did you went early yesterday ? h

[Nino chan]

you are very close : ) it's the subjunctive mood of verb when it comes to the unreal conditions
we deal with singular as the plural
just only in this case

for example, in the case of (IF II ) and ( wish mood ) hmmm

good examples are here
http://www.ceafinney.com/subjunctive/examples.html
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why did you went early yesterday ?

Why did you go early yesterday ?


the new sentence

I think guitar is very expensive

[Schwert]

Hallo There
It's such a wonderful topic
How creativity prof.Nino
I liked it, this topic and the previous one are come in a suitable time for me
Thanks a bundle : )
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I think guitar is very expensive
I think the guitar is very expensive
or
I think that guitar is very expensive
I actually don't know what's the right
~_~
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My Sentence: I had left the letter for you when I had left the house

[Miaka Yuki]

I had left the letter for you when I had left the house
I left the letter for you when I was leaving the house


my sentence:
I'm not like you

[Schwert]

in fact, I expected to see this correction
I had left the letter for you when I left the house(past perfect tense+past simple tense)1
and your correction, I don't know if it's suitable : )
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I'm not like you>>>I don't like you
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I am going to school everyday

[Miaka Yuki]

ummm I think
the correction
I was leaving the letter for you when I left the house

icon159look here

http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/verb-tenses_past-continuous_u.htm

I am going to school everyday
I go to school everyday
is't right?
......
Did you talked with me?

[Nino chan]

can't say that you are wrong
both can be right
..

but the context is the judge whether leaving the letter was a complete action ( past perfect) or in progress (past continuous )i
..

go on guys

[زَهـرة خَضراء]

السّـلام عليكم ورحمَةُ اللهِ وبركاتُـه

How are you everyone?, This topic is very beautiful, I ask Allah to make your heart happy,Nino chan ^__^

Did you talked with me?
the mistake is "talked"

correction

Did you talk with me?

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After read the lesson, he answered the questions

[Nino chan]

After read the lesson, he answered the questions

after reading the lesson, he answered the questions
or

after he had read the lesson, he answered the questions

my new sentence
I am sure, it is going to rain soon

[Garoo]

After read the lesson, he answered the questions

after reading the lesson, he answered the questions
or

after he had read the lesson, he answered the questions

my new sentence
I am sure, it is going to rain soon




Correction ::

Hmmm.. Let's see
I am sure it's going to rain soon

Let someone take my turn if I'm correct ::.

[Nino chan]

it's human to err


it's
it'll rain soon :D
you know, when you're sure about sth, use will not going to


my new one
pollution are destructive

[Miaka Yuki]

ummm
pollution are destructive
A pollution is destructive
is't true?

my sentence:
Don't tryed to make it a better

[كـــيــKIDــــــد]

Hello
Nice topic
I like it , thank you ^_^

Don't tryed to make it a better
Don't try to make it better

?is it true


:my sentence

My teacher like the good students :P

[Nino chan]

A pollution is destructive






you know hny, pollution is an uncountable noun, so you deal with it as a singular noun.. but you mustn't use a\an articles
so the correction would be

pollution is destructive





My teacher like the good students :P

my teacher likes the good students

my new sentence

she is more happy than me

[Miaka Yuki]

thankx nino^^

she is more happy than me
She is happier than me
is't right?

my sentence:
She is understaning the lessons very well

[Nino chan]

you're welcome hny


She is understaning the lessons very well






she understands the lessons very well


I am looking forward to see you soon

[Miaka Yuki]

I am looking forward to see you soon
I'll look forward to see you soon

She died today

[Nino chan]

:D
no ^^"


I am looking forward to seeing you soon

look forward to is a phrase followed by "gerund" :P

[Miaka Yuki]

aha
I thought "after to ,to be infintive

thanks ^^

[Nino chan]

yeah :D
to is part of the phrase :")

she died today
she has died today
or
she died yesterday

^^" am nt sure about the correction

my new sentence
they have been living here in 1999

[Miaka Yuki]

she died yesterday
:)

...
they have been living here in 1999

they have been living here since 1999

or

they lived here in 1999


is't correct?

She don't wrote anything

[كـــيــKIDــــــد]

She don't wrote anything

She didn't write anything


:my sentence

You can to play Basketball

[Miaka Yuki]

She didn't write anything
or
She don't write anything


.....
You can to play Basketball

You can play Basketball

......
my sentence:
She always is boring