Why Can't I be? a Poem ...

[Gentle Fist]

Hey All msomanians

Well this is my latest poem ... called
Why can't I be who I wanted to ...?

here we gooo >.<

Why can't I be who I always dreamed to
why can't I be the one I wanted for True
Why can't I find even one Clue
Why can't I know it's me and who
Why can't you see that I always dreamed about you

I Wish on every shooting star
That I be healed from my scar
Why is everything I wanted is going far
Why do I always miss the jar


Looking up to the sky
I don't even dare to try
seeing you makes me shy
I want reasons please tell me why
Why am I down while you are so High
I am not sure if I am the right guy

Singing you my sad song
I don't know if it is right or wrong
I don't feel so strong
Why can't you sing along
And we walk together among
The Clouds ...


And I think I am All Done now ... I hope you like it guys

[Sweet Dark]

I really like it so much

you are really very good in writing poems

and you are graet in english

well done gentlooo _ kun

and I will be always witing for your new

good bye

[Gentle Fist]

I really like it so much

you are really very good in writing poems

and you are graet in english

well done gentlooo _ kun

and I will be always witing for your new

good bye

Thanks Sweet-Sama ^0^

Oh I really am ?!

I am sooo Flerted *Plushes*
xD


There is something new for sure =D

Bye Bye

Gentlooh

[the Assassin]

well..well
my challenger..
gintel ..
wassap
i really like your poem
it fills with courge and brave
i like these kinda poems
which can restore our spirits
...
anyway, u were the best and still
my beloved challnger..
^ . ^
i just wanted to say hi,
rather than saying goobye
me and you will shake the world
and be friends that won't be sold

c ya

[Gentle Fist]

well..well
my challenger..
gintel ..
wassap
i really like your poem
it fills with courge and brave
i like these kinda poems
which can restore our spirits
...
anyway, u were the best and still
my beloved challnger..
^ . ^
i just wanted to say hi,
rather than saying goobye
me and you will shake the world
and be friends that won't be sold

c ya



You know what I like best about you ?

YOUR REPLIES !!

They are some kinda encouraging and seeing you makes me happy Dude !!

Regards ...

Yr Challenger ...

[black fox]

Its a beautiful poem......

thanks......Gentle Fist....^ ^

[Gentle Fist]

Its a beautiful poem......

thanks......Gentle Fist....^ ^


yr welcome ^-^

and thanks for replying :)

[Eyes]

Really good poem

this is my frist time i read a poem
but
it's really good

[GiN CoDe]

it is a masterpiece
it has a pretty tune
and when I read it it seems to be a good song ..

may be I've trails but not that so good as yours

this chapter is so Cool



Looking up to the sky
I don't even dare to try
seeing you makes me shy
I want reasons please tell me why
Why am I down while you are so High
I am not sure if I am the right guy



waiting for the next one

[Gentle Fist]

Really good poem

this is my frist time i read a poem
but
it's really good


Thanks ... appreciate it ^-^

[sun_rist24]

waw
its so nice
thanks alot

[arashi_girl]

OOOh my ....

its such a wonderfull poem

thank u

^_^

[Gentle Fist]

^-^ Thanks for passing ^-^

appreciated

[الضباب الصامت]

thanks for you
but I cannot understed what you say
Becouse the write the massege the brather and sester
Iam soooooryyy

[أسمـــاء]

Looking up to the sky
I don't even dare to try
seeing you makes me shy
I want reasons please tell me why
Why am I down while you are so High
I am not sure if I am the right guy


how admirable....
very beautiful stanza
i like the position of wondering included in here
another one has got a wonderful skill of writing it seems
thanks and sorry for being late
waiting for such a new one^^