مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Why Can't I be? a Poem ...
Gentle Fist
10-11-2008, 03:49 PM
Hey All msomanians
Well this is my latest poem ... called
Why can't I be who I wanted to ...?
here we gooo >.<
Why can't I be who I always dreamed to
why can't I be the one I wanted for True
Why can't I find even one Clue
Why can't I know it's me and who
Why can't you see that I always dreamed about you
I Wish on every shooting star
That I be healed from my scar
Why is everything I wanted is going far
Why do I always miss the jar
Looking up to the sky
I don't even dare to try
seeing you makes me shy
I want reasons please tell me why
Why am I down while you are so High
I am not sure if I am the right guy
Singing you my sad song
I don't know if it is right or wrong
I don't feel so strong
Why can't you sing along
And we walk together among
The Clouds ...
And I think I am All Done now ... I hope you like it guys
Sweet Dark
10-11-2008, 04:35 PM
I really like it so much
you are really very good in writing poems
and you are graet in english
well done gentlooo _ kun
and I will be always witing for your new
good bye
Gentle Fist
10-11-2008, 04:40 PM
I really like it so much
you are really very good in writing poems
and you are graet in english
well done gentlooo _ kun
and I will be always witing for your new
good bye
Thanks Sweet-Sama ^0^
Oh I really am ?!
I am sooo Flerted *Plushes*
xD
There is something new for sure =D
Bye Bye
Gentlooh
the Assassin
10-11-2008, 07:48 PM
well..well
my challenger..
gintel ..
wassap
i really like your poem
it fills with courge and brave
i like these kinda poems
which can restore our spirits
...
anyway, u were the best and still
my beloved challnger..
^ . ^
i just wanted to say hi,
rather than saying goobye
me and you will shake the world
and be friends that won't be sold
c ya
Gentle Fist
11-11-2008, 01:35 PM
well..well
my challenger..
gintel ..
wassap
i really like your poem
it fills with courge and brave
i like these kinda poems
which can restore our spirits
...
anyway, u were the best and still
my beloved challnger..
^ . ^
i just wanted to say hi,
rather than saying goobye
me and you will shake the world
and be friends that won't be sold
c ya
You know what I like best about you ?
YOUR REPLIES !!
They are some kinda encouraging and seeing you makes me happy Dude !!
Regards ...
Yr Challenger ...
black fox
11-11-2008, 04:33 PM
Its a beautiful poem......
thanks......Gentle Fist....^ ^
Gentle Fist
12-11-2008, 03:30 PM
Its a beautiful poem......
thanks......Gentle Fist....^ ^
yr welcome ^-^
and thanks for replying :)
Really good poem
this is my frist time i read a poem
but
it's really good
GiN CoDe
13-11-2008, 02:59 PM
it is a masterpiece
it has a pretty tune
and when I read it it seems to be a good song ..
may be I've trails but not that so good as yours
this chapter is so Cool
Looking up to the sky
I don't even dare to try
seeing you makes me shy
I want reasons please tell me why
Why am I down while you are so High
I am not sure if I am the right guy
waiting for the next one
Gentle Fist
17-11-2008, 04:12 PM
Really good poem
this is my frist time i read a poem
but
it's really good
Thanks ... appreciate it ^-^
sun_rist24
21-11-2008, 05:54 PM
waw
its so nice
thanks alot
arashi_girl
2-12-2008, 01:13 PM
OOOh my ....
its such a wonderfull poem
thank u
^_^
Gentle Fist
20-12-2008, 01:05 PM
^-^ Thanks for passing ^-^
appreciated
الضباب الصامت
21-12-2008, 01:36 PM
thanks for you
but I cannot understed what you say
Becouse the write the massege the brather and sester
Iam soooooryyy
أسمـــاء
1-1-2009, 11:26 PM
Looking up to the sky
I don't even dare to try
seeing you makes me shy
I want reasons please tell me why
Why am I down while you are so High
I am not sure if I am the right guy
how admirable....
very beautiful stanza
i like the position of wondering included in here
another one has got a wonderful skill of writing it seems
thanks and sorry for being late
waiting for such a new one^^
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