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the Assassin
10-5-2009, 04:24 PM
Wassap mina

^^”

Its been so long since I wrote something,

Well, I’m back, and ready to whatever,



Hmmm, what I really wanna write, is something

That got mixed between our world and theirs ^^”



Well, shall we roll ~





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Lonely road, that looks shadowy,


Roses are all around and unlovely


Weird, but everything got wrong,


Nothing went back to where they belong





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I’m asking myself, what I am doing here,

I really can’t get myself and get things clear,

I’m really scared, where should I go,

Everything looks ugly, I don’t know



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What, who is calling, I can hear you,


Yeah, it’s me, but I barley see through,


Don’t tell me to calm, I can’t do it,


Things got mixed, I really can’t forget,




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No, wait, I’ll be there soon,


I can hear your lovely tone


Wait, I can see your lovely sight,


You look so clean and bright,




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You’ll be with me, and change my world,

Oh, God I feel like this isn’t a fraud,

I feel that I really can’t explain and mention,

But, it’s a thing that has a deep affection,

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I love you…


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^^


c-ya

the miri dude
10-5-2009, 08:49 PM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
that was very nise and sweet
I wonder y u stoped wrting
u r very very talented
and I hope that u r good at school too


the miri dude
pec out

lolleta
11-5-2009, 12:29 AM
Five times i read it because it is really wonder
no.... it is little to say wonderful, amazing,masterpiece
*****************
but i will say to every one
if u find under the title of a poem *
by the Assassin
be sure .. that u will read one of the creative
poems..which u did't read the same before
***********
thanks alot.. u stimulate me to start writing poems
that i didn't try before
althoug I'm clever poet in Arabic
but i promise u that u will see mine
after exams


i forgot to tell u that i love challenge ..so
i will do my best to do it with u
r u ready ??!!o

Schwert
11-5-2009, 12:49 AM
wonderful dear friend Assassin ur words, it's expressive and brillient indeed
::You’ll be with me, and change my world::
yes man I with you to chang the world but in first I must start with my self and my town and my nation and my world^ ^ , it's hard and long road but we know that there's nothing its name difficult step by step to the success and the journey of 1000mile start by one step, go on my crony don't stop ur themes is beautiful and thank you for this topic , see you

the Assassin
11-5-2009, 05:45 PM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW

that was very nise and sweet
I wonder y u stoped wrting
u r very very talented
and I hope that u r good at school too

the miri dude

pec out



yokata .. i'm safe now
^^"
hey dude, wassap
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well.. i'm not that good, but i'm doing my best
e.vil_l
anyways, thank u so much man, ur words
are highly appricated
:D

Over & Out

ÓãóÇÆíÉ
11-5-2009, 10:07 PM
Five times i read




so I'm lolleta....Icon498
really it's very beautiful
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I can't say any more
but .... really
"You can shine"


Thank you a lot
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Rehaam

ÃÓãÜÜÜÇÁ
14-5-2009, 08:17 PM
Lonely road, that looks shadowy,
Roses are all around and unlovely
Weird, but everything got wrong,
Nothing went back to where they belong




I’m asking myself, what I am doing here,
I really can’t get myself and get things clear,
I’m really scared, where should I go,
Everything looks ugly, I don’t know




these two must be the real piece of Art
and remember....
Practice Makes Perfect


Arigato guzaimashta....senseh!!

korabeka
15-5-2009, 12:41 PM
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wow, that's really nice..

you have a cool style up there..

keep them comin please..

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Winter Rain
20-5-2009, 07:34 PM
WELCOME~

amazing dude that was one of the coolest things
that i have ever red
you're very talented and your words are so expressive
they might as well be real
but for real this topic was so wonderful
hope we see much more coming from you

~SEE YA