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...A smooth breeze floating on your body
...A full moon shining the dark sky
...An ocean calm as if there is no wind
...A wooing owl searching for someone's end

...A lady walking at the edge of a cliff
...With her long flown black hair
...Eyes lighten by a rose stare
...A grace voice saying something there

...Bright diamonds in the sky
...? How much Patience can there be
...All alone far away from each other
...Like a million light years from one another

...Ohh mere humen on the ground
...? why that sad look on your face
...A lightsome smile can warm us
...A finger shaping even like an octopus

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...As they talk like an understanding couple
...My eyes fell at something simple
...A little girl sitting with her knees cuddle
...Looking at a paper like she is solving a puzzle

...I slowly walked towards her
...Hoping that I could help her
...? What's troubling you young beauty
...And she said something extraordinary

...A smooth breeze floating on your body
...A full moon shining the dark sky
...An ocean calm as if there is no wind
...A wooing owl searching for someones end

OYE OYE Captain
nicely put

to think you wrote this makes me rethink things loool

thanks bro and keep it up

peace be upon you

i like wandering here and there
but how romantic to wander by the shore under the moon shining
~__^
...
thanx brother for these smooth words
: )

best of best

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...Bright diamonds in the sky
...? How much Patience can there be
...All alone far away from each other
...Like a million light years from one another

...Ohh mere humen on the ground
...? why that sad look on your face
...A lightsome smile can warm us

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I like your words very much here
these lines imply alot
there will be alot of patience , endless patience , that kind that will take us forever ,
those sparking stars will soon come beside one another even if the distance blocks them and the night looks longer .g

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You got a beautiful talent
go fo it
:)

Hello
those words are very nice I enjoyed reading it despite my shallow knowledge at English But they are extraordinanry to force me to read it XD
I Hope to read another topic of yours
good-bye

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة mohbaboo

OYE OYE Captain
nicely put

to think you wrote this makes me rethink things loool

thanks bro and keep it up

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^ ^...Thanks Tichou
^ ^...And we're all waiting for priceless writings

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Naro-chan

peace be upon you

i like wandering here and there
but how romantic to wander by the shore under the moon shining
~__^
...
thanx brother for these smooth words
: )

best of best

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^ ^...Yeah your right
...It's something that can't be replaced
^ ^...Thanks for passing by

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Azuma

I like your words very much here
these lines imply alot
there will be alot of patience , endless patience , that kind that will take us forever ,
those sparking stars will soon come beside one another even if the distance blocks them and the night looks longer .g

..............
You got a beautiful talent
go fo it
:)

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...I can't say anything
^ ^...Only...I'm happy that you liked it
^ ^...And...it's a pleasure that you stopped by
...Thank you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة تومويو

Hello
those words are very nice I enjoyed reading it despite my shallow knowledge at English But they are extraordinanry to force me to read it XD
I Hope to read another topic of yours
good-bye

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^ ^...Thank you very much

...And based on your comment
^ ^...I don't think that your english is "shallow" at all...Ma Sha'a Allah

^ ^Hi
how r u bro
it's really really beautiful, brilliant and romantic words
really I liked it and want to see something kindred like it subsequently^ ^1
the art of description is lovable to me and you have done this in a beautiful way
I appreciate ur effort my chum and I'm glad to be here
keep going