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Hello everybody… (^_^)
Because this is my first partaking in English forum, I'm writing the first poem I wrote it.
The title is "the spring"
The sun is shining,
after snow.
The flowers wake up,
to say hello.
The birds flying,
in all the way.
To see a wind,
in good day.
"It's spring"
What your opinion about this poem. (*.*)
hi hi '
welcomoooo sis here
: )
it's a good starting
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I loved your words even the poem is verrrry short
keep going on
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you have to see my new poem soon
thanks for your start
It is nice despite being short
see more from you soon
Goodbye
Peace be upon you dear detective Ai~
Wow, what a nice piece of wonderful words
Good rhythm you made there
"Snow/Hello, Day and Way"
Its Spring!
Life greets you after the severe cold of snow in Winter
You've described how lovely the world is when its Spring with these
little wonderful words
Thanks for sharing this with us
Hope to see more from you
Wishing for you all the best!
woooow
very nice words honey
u remind me of the college days , Poetry`s teacher ordered to write a poem
my friends take it serious and wrote a very beautiful poems
in fact , they surprised me ..
as for me , hahahaaaaa , I never think of it .. but I like reading for the others
keep on , you`ll be an excellent poet .. believe me
have a good times
Peace be upon you
wooow
very cool but too short
keep up the great work and you will be a great poet
see you soon