A Poem of my own words

hey there

normaly i start my questions

but now after what happpend

i just wanna write and go

it's been now 3 Years since my last Post i think

so i'll just write the poem and let you comment

this poem in talkin' about a young man called Mo7trf

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There's something in your eyes
That Makes me wanna hold you tight Thousand years

There's Somthing in my heart
That Shake's it too fast like I'm sceared

Every time i get free
I only thinking about my messed up life

Do i have A promise to do
Promises are there for me my hole life

I always ask these questions
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Why the stop sign is Red
Why the move sign is Green
What is love
what is hate
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i couldn't answer any of it
But ....... I've An answer for one question
And the question is
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What is Sadness
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I know the answer for that
I know what sadness is
I know how does the Person feel the sadness
I know what is like in real life

But there's A question I keep saying it all the time
And It's
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Am I Sad
Is my heart sad
Is my face sad
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I Guess I rather not answer that
Because i don't wanna get sad
If I got sad I would shoot myself
And that's my life goes
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that's all of it

enjoy it if you can

i'll be back to see your comment

Catch ya up all Later

GPY

yeah well , all I wanted to say was
that was good
and it was one of the best
English" poems i have ever read in here"
so, keep up the good work

Wahy Al-Qalam

Regards

موضوعك جميل جدا >>>>>>>> يعني فاهم ok
تحياتي

Your more than wonderful

But

I think that looking for something in your life

Ibajk and Ikrjk of Hznk

You love him something originally

The first of Ikrjk of the problem

Closer to God in worship

And the commitment of the Koran Aqrap

And then look for a friend of Ikrjk

Permanent Hznk

But let me Aasaleck I question

Why Gosaidtk written in English


Thank you

Sister
dodo soso

وحي القلم
well
it's very nice from you to say that
i'm not that good
but i'm tellin' my feelin' that's all

السندباد2
it's ok
maybe some day you'll understand well

dodo soso
as for you
all I can say is
the poetry has to say what goes in his life
or know others lifes
it's hard to tell you
sad is one of a million things the poetry can write about
and for you question
that why am I writin' in English
well I lived in the US (united State) for a couple of months
so it's hard not to talk and write English
and I Teach American Languege

As The Sky Is the softness Of your words
What Can I Say For That
It Something We Not see As It Everyday
We'll Wait your Wonderful word

Live By peace .

Wonderful words Brother Mo7trf
It's easy to understand, and I enjoyed it
So, Keep On
Regards

أظن أني دخلت خطئاً ، آسفه لكن حقاً لم أفهم شيئاً ><" !

wazzz
well that's the only thing a can do hear
my specialty is not allowed here
it's too much for you all
it's only for my agents in MSN
you'll see another poem

Blue_Sky
thatnks alot
i wanna be an english poetry
sure i'll keep on

Qute .. }
معليش
يوم من الايام بتفهمي ايش اكتب

WooooooooW
It Is Cooooool poem
Thanks Alot
فى رعاية الله

اخى العزيز قرءت قصيدتك مرتين
انها رائعه جدا
و لا اعتقد انى ابالغ ان قلت انها اجمل قصيده قراتها بالانجليزيه فى المنتدى
انها مليئه بالتساؤل الحائر عن معنى التفاصيل الصغيره فى حياتنا
مليئه بالاحساس الصادق
الذى يصل الى قلوبنا مباشره
استمتعت كثيرا بقراءتها
و اصل الابداع فانا انتظر مذيدك

و دمت بكل خير
اختك جاكو

OoH gaaash !!

its the second time i read your wonderful poams

it could take anyone there .. to the sky

i realy like your poams , keep it up..

hmm, i realy dont know .. but the first part in yr poam remind me

a english song .. no promises i think the song name

we will be always waiting for your poams here

good luck for you

هلا وغلا
بصراحه قصيده ولا اروع
مشكور خويه ع القصيده

think you vary mach

jasmena
thanks to you

جاكو
thanks alot
you know i always write what is true
everytime i read it
i just know somethin' new

Sweet Dark
you're welcome
HaHaHa
you mean Shayne Ward - No Promises
no it's not cuz it begins with this words
hey baby when we are together , doin' things , that we love
the real poetry won't copy a thing here ^^


alrem111
you're welcome too
but i'm not a girl >_<

الرحمه
HaHa you must be havin' a hard english
you're welcome anyway