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HEY FOLKS
its been an ages since i wrote
somthing around here..
and tbh, i'm on fire to share
you this brand new poem
...
so be ready
breack-fast
My topic is all about wondering
..
i was having some kinda Qustions
which run deep inside me!
and i didn't got any answer to them
so .. share me the pain
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Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
while dudes around calling u insane
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Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
While dudes around say u're wrong
..
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Is it hard to go beyond your imagination?
While u feel the pleasent of ur collaboration ..
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Is it hard to move up from the same place?
While you have cried from the same face..
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Is it hard to feel that you will achieve something
While you feel the power deep inside running..
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Is it hard to be some kinda hero,
while you were having some kinda sorrow
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Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
While every one around looks at u gladly
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Is it hard to ask, and wait for some answers
While the waiting is killing u like a cancer
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I'm waitin u
so don't leave
me alone
i need those answers
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Hello ... How are you brother today
??
the words that you wrote are full of sad facts in the really life
but there is sth that drag me
Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
While every one around looks at u gladly
that's hapened when you feel that your work is the worst
and can't trust your self that you r the best
coz the picture in the mind ... I can't do it , I'm such a FAILURE
what u r thinking of one like me ??
and that's a
see u and perhaps I'll comeback
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BrB
just kiddingicon199
what all this deep sadness Mr. Assassinicon768
i like the way you write the poem
i want to answer you with apoem
but i'm so bad with that soIcon-hp
so i will let Azuma answer youicon111
Azuma brings up his activityicon944
see you
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة دوريميفاسولاسي
Hello ... How are you brother today
??
the words that you wrote are full of sad facts in the really life
but there is sth that drag me
Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
While every one around looks at u gladly
that's hapened when you feel that your work is the worst
and can't trust your self that you r the best
coz the picture in the mind ... I can't do it , I'm such a FAILURE
what u r thinking of one like me ??
and that's a
see u and perhaps I'll comeback
hey brilliant
its been a long time
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thanks anyway
ok
...
:they say
faliuer is the father of sucess
remember that
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its okay if you shed tears
but its not okay to sit down
for long time
you don't have to give up
the hope
life is kinda simple
but its not understandable
so get ur self up
and rememeber
no one is better than u
just re-charger urself with hope
and do whatever it takes to be
brilliant
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thanks sis for the shiny words
you really flattered my heart
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c u around cheery
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hahahahahahahahahaha
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so brilliant
اقتباس:
just kiddingicon199
what all this deep sadness Mr. Assassinicon768
i like the way you write the poem
i want to answer you with apoem
but i'm so bad with that soIcon-hp
so i will let Azuma answer youicon111
Azuma brings up his activityicon944
see you
i wished you could write something to flatter me
thanks anyway
iCon944
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin
HEY FOLKS
its been an ages since i wrote
somthing around here..
and tbh, i'm on fire to share
you this brand new poem
...
so be ready
breack-fast
My topic is all about wondering
..
i was having some kinda Qustions
which run deep inside me!
and i didn't got any answer to them
so .. share me the pain
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Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
while dudes around calling u insane
icon001
Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
While dudes around say u're wrong
..
icon001
Is it hard to go beyond your imagination?
While u feel the pleasent of ur collaboration ..
icon001
Is it hard to move up from the same place?
While you have cried from the same face..
icon001
Is it hard to feel that you will achieve something
While you feel the power deep inside running..
icon001
Is it hard to be some kinda hero,
while you were having some kinda sorrow
icon001
Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
While every one around looks at u gladly
icon001
Is it hard to ask, and wait for some answers
While the waiting is killing u like a cancer
icon001
|~||~|||~||~|
I'm waitin u
so don't leave
me alone
i need those answers
icon001
you know ... brother your words are full of honest feelings
they really touche a suffering deppressed heart like mine now
i know ... some times you feel like you are something great big...
you feel like you're proud of yourself but, there must be pain
it is the nature of mankind... tears...is there a humanbeing who doesn't cried ever??
i think this what distiguishs us from other creaturs
and it is a blessing that we may get rid of not all but some sorrow by seeping tears
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you are wondering and asking difficult questions that i do not know their answers either
but ... i am not sure .. ..this is what i can say
Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
while dudes around calling u insane
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Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
While dudes around say u're wrong
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am sorry .. but .. yes it is somewhat hard
No.. if you go deep and think of it you will find it so hard
people used to unerstimate others whom they do not know
people used to rpeat the same talk without even giving themselves a chance to think what they are babbling about
i have something to say
is it hard to keep telling yourself you are a good dude
is it hard to wipe your tears and smile again when you remember something called Hope
is it hard to try your best and show others who is the insane
is it hard to cry sying i can do it
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i believe in something called challenging yourself
it is embarissing to talk about myself
but ,truly i have tried this thing
you might hate yourself
you might feel that you'r not gonna do any thing
if you take other's disdain seriously
am saying that it is hard at first, but gradually you will find it easy
you would face difficulities to pass all that
however you will pass it after all
i am sure
just
give yourself a possitive view
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your poem is so brilliant
and your feelings showed has been exactly understood and remind us of something called pain , but, after long time, when you remember that old pain , you would think of it as a pain mixed with the sweetness of your strength and ability to pass it away
i have alot to say about pain that i may get out of the main theme
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a pleasure to meet you with a new interesting poemeh_s7
and i warn you if you stopped writing them icon04
Thanks brother ^^
Azuma
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Eima ^^
nice to see you hereIcon-0
see
i did what you recommended
and i really wanted to write
this one BRB
though , ido not use it that much ,but there must be exceptions for those like me who has not used it befor
to use it for once
hahahaahahaicon0icon5501
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WB, how are u my friend, about this poem I saw my friend that there is not thing come to us easily and this happened with me in fact, frankly I see that the life is hard not easy, many ppl want to be something and have a goals but when they begin sees many difficulties stand in front of them and may be give up in end only the strong stay and win in end, is it hard yes some ppl see it hard but I like the person who has hopful and confidence to destroy any thing stand in front of he, the life beautiful but it is hard, thanks my mate for ur topic & see you
Coaf
