Ghost Island Story Of Mine

i really love it thumbsup-Icon
...what is wrong with the unreal Azuma...????
but really the story is amazing.Icon-yes0
good job....^^brother ^^

the beginning of serious events has appeared

wooow
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kyto is facing a ghost and must help his sister cloudy
Assassin is surrounded by a group of spooky dogs
and must save his group

how would the two deal with these terrifying situations
thats what i am waiting for

kyto do your best for the 4th chapter smii20

good luck ^^

he meant that
in chapter 2 .. i have met u
and u r just an illustion
now.. i said lets put some codes to know each other
once we see another illustion
no deep meaning don't u worry ^^

Assasin thanks bro for ur sweet words and i will try to improve the story and learn from my mistakes

Azuma thanks so much and abouy ur Q i think Assasin Explain

and for everyone may be i will put off the 4th chapter as i have Anatomy oral examIcon55Icon55

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kyto kid

thanks nour el islam for ur reply and assasin welcome bro i added the third chapter sorry for late i hope u will enjoy

sorry every one there is amistake in putting " "" in its right position i dont know the reason but may be coz i wrote the story on microsoft word and make copy directly

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icon26I Liked Story
>thanks>

when will you complete???

man where is chapter 4 ,,,

thanks nour on your sweet reply

Azuma and Assasin sorry for late i added the 4th chapter i hope you to enjoy it

i hope the problem of she said and he said not affect ur readingIcon-flowers0

Hi
The story become more exciting
I like it
oh kyto you can use Eima like in the last
chapters
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man, why dose the chapter lil bit shorty
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is that made of purpuse of something else...

^ ^.....Yo.....kyto

^ ^......My mouth is speechless
^ ^....very awesome story man......I like it a lot.....I enjoyed reading it

^ ^....Thanks a million pal

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة mis eima

Hi

The story become more exciting
I like it
oh kyto you can use Eima like in the last
chapters

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hehe late reply on your comment Eima thanks so much for reply and ok i will use it next chapter

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin

man, why dose the chapter lil bit shorty

.....
is that made of purpuse of something else...

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hey Assasin sorry man for the last short chapter

and this is also shortIcon108

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة black fox

^ ^.....Yo.....kyto

^ ^......My mouth is speechless
^ ^....very awesome story man......I like it a lot.....I enjoyed reading it

^ ^....Thanks a million pal

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Hey black fox i really wanna add u in the story but coz i wrote it along time so cant change characters Icon108

Thanks for reply man and i would like to ask english team can i change Canariood with Black fox or it may affect the story

For every one the 5th chapter has been just added

hope u would like iticon31

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kyto kid

Hey black fox i really wanna add u in the story but coz i wrote it along time so cant change characters Icon108

Thanks for reply man and i would like to ask english team can i change Canariood with Black fox or it may affect the story

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^ ^....No....its ok
^ ^....Dont change or add no one.....the story is perfect

....Just keep going...ok

^ ^....But thanks any way.....pal

I like the parts that I got really

I didn't read it all but as I see you need some
Grammatical Support man
I was gonna help but i think it's too much for me
to handle besides I'd be provoking your Privacy
well thanks Partner =] for this rather fun
story I might return later so I can give
you some more Devastating comments XD
I'll read it all later =]

i'm back
kyto you realy have big imagination
i like the chapter

but there is a strange icon-?? thing
i have a story with a ghost in the past

when i was in primary school
i was absent one day
and when i went in the next day
all my frind were angryIcon-War thay asked me (why did't you ansawer us yesterday ) i told them that i was absent
thay said that thay
saw me in the last day in the morning and thay call me but i did't
answer then i disappeared . then thay saw me in end of school and thay call my again but i laugh in strang way and i disappeared again
i was shockedIcon02Icon45 i keep telling them that i was absent and thay don''t Believe me .then thay aske my mother about it she taold them
that i was absent after that some of theme beigan to cray
(Icon039 i am the one who shoud cray coz i was Scared)
coz thay think that thay saw my ghost
then it become a story in my school and i still don't know
what happenedicon101

you Remember my with all that
i waiting for the 6th chapter




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تسلم اناملك على المجهود الرائع

وبصراحة ماني اعبر لك عن شكري بالانجيلزي

لاني ماعرف.....

تقبل تحياتي

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة black fox

^ ^....No....its ok
^ ^....Dont change or add no one.....the story is perfect

....Just keep going...ok

^ ^....But thanks any way.....pal

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thanks black you r welcome any way icon30

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Gentle Fist

I like the parts that I got really

I didn't read it all but as I see you need some
Grammatical Support man
I was gonna help but i think it's too much for me
to handle besides I'd be provoking your Privacy
well thanks Partner =] for this rather fun
story I might return later so I can give
you some more Devastating comments XD
I'll read it all later =]

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hey Gentle fist you r right there r many mistakes in grammer but coz i wrote it for fun so i didnot focus in grammer and thanks man for sweet replyicon30