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Good morning dear members Icon08

First.. I would like to express my happy feelings ...seeing our forum activity
I left it for a while and now I am back .....
Glad to see you again with your new awesome topics .....icon152

As a gift Icon-flowers0, and as I promised
I brought you my first hand writing topic ^^
I left this forum for 2 hard weeks
And now
I did my best to present good writing for you ^^

As a beginner one ,correct me and comment ……

Let us start .....

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goodbye my note book

Today I am going to say goodbye

To the note of my diaries

......My beautiful year ,,my dear note …for the most precious thing I ever have

being with you ,,,

I have lived so many happy days and wonderful moments

That I could not gather them ,,,

Do you remember those long nights we were spending together

I was Watching you Sitting awake all night

And out of awareness, falling a sleep holding you ,

I used to sleep beside you ,, and ,waking up facing you……

do you rememer when i came running from school to see you

For most of my times … you were my honest friend whom I missed

Sometimes ..when we got separated ,,…I just looking for you ...

To greet you and tell what happened today ,,,where I went before awhile ...

What made me sad to cheer me ,,,what made happy to share it with me

You were all ears to what I usually say

And get me your attention ,,listen to my empty talk and talkative mouth

With respectful and enjoyable

When I have no one to sit with , when I got hurt by others ,when feel sad
,you were doing your job as my best friend ,,, telling me to take it easy and life is beautiful

I was so free to tell you what came to mind ,,, what I feel and need

What I exactly want to ,,, without being afraid or hesitating

I like you

I really do

I will ,,just like I used to and

It would be painful and hard for me

Even for my thin pen who liked your pure white pages

I assure that , for my pen , it is as hard as for me

To leave you

Because we were all have been loyal for on another

Good friends ,,like always

What can I say is that you were good to hold what I say inward you for a long and complete year …..

with its bitter and sweet days

And now …..i have written what I could

…while there are so many inside my heart

And you will be kept there …..

In that place,,, where I used to keep what I love in it

As this year is spending its last moments with its days ,,,,

I am spending this golden one with you

My lovely note book

Who has kept my lovely diaries

I will not forget you

icon108

AZUMA

Written with tears and pain during the last day of that year in the last page of my best diary note

this is mine
^ . ^

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin

this is mine


^ . ^

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nani nani???

i can't spark my mind like that
im gonna blow this ef
just wait for my comment

YARI YARI

8wq4

Deep words, Shaper than any blade, they simulate our narrow minds,
Painfully written, tearful words were echoing, repeating, but in
another sorrowful signal.
There is no too much ink left to write up some more words, but the only thing
We have is to draw our bloods, and get off our skins and paint the incredible
spectacle.
I liked your words sis, they were written mysteriously
simple words which even got my eyes seeping. As they said, A simple page rather than million words,
Anyways, what I comprehend from your masterpiece is that you are talking about your
'mom, which is the main thing in your diary. What makes me concluded
this is that you've mentioned something about being alone after
leaving her, and you are reminiscing your naughty deeds, which can be foolish in the first place,
Another thing to prove the case is that you have revealed something fishy,

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And out of awareness, falling a sleep holding you
Iused to sleep beside you ,, and ,waking up facing you…
do you rememer when i came running from school to see you
For most of my times … you were my honest friend whom I missed
Sometimes ..when we got separated ,,…I just looking for you .
To greet you and tell what happened today ,,,where I went before awhile

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See, you have chosen some magnificent moments in
Our lives, which only happened with our moms,
Anyways, I don’t know why these words cut me deep.
You know sis, as you said before I don’t care about any personal life
I rather nattered something that you may get shocked.
I love my mom more than my dad “R.I.P “
-You know what the terminology of mothers is:
It’s a term of immortality, spiritual, and credibility thing in this
World. It is the sweetness itself, it can’t deceive,
Gentile meaning in one word, nothing can be similar to
This term except someone who has the same name
and the same meaning.

I remember when we get in fight, and the only one who will suffer
Form this is my mom, she can say let them fight, I don’t care, but
How possibly come to see her own beloved souls fighting together.
You know something; I really don’t care about someone in this
world except of my Queen’s tears.
Cos when I see her crying, I cry too.
Believe that, who say that tears is a reflection of weakness,
You know, there are some spiritual tears which may
Clean the sorrow of this damnable world,
Anyways, some words cannot be written, because I didn’t find the
suitable words to write them. There is one thing I just know, how can I live if I live without my Queen
I just have had some dedications to my mom, which I cannot afford to anyone around,
I dedicate to her, my soul, my body, myself, and all I got. And keep that in min
“mom is the world Boom”

Here I can stop,
I can’t add up anything
Cos when it comes to this

I can’t afford more than this
Cos loyalty and love
Is something that can’t be
Written in few liens,
It needs a too bunch billions of books
To gather them,
I just have these lines which I loved too much
....
Ain't a woman alive that could take my mama's place
....
Cause when I was low you was there for me
And never left mealone because you cared for me
…..
And when it seems that I'm hopeless
You say the words that can get me back in focus
When I was sick as a little kid
To keep me happy there's no limit to the things you did
And all my childhood memories
Are full of all the sweet things you did for me
And even though I act craaazy
I gotta thank the Lord that you made me
There are no words that can express how I feel
You never kept a secret, always stayed real
And I appreciate, how you raised me
And all the extra love that you gave me
I wish I could take the pain away
If you can make it through the night there's a brighter day
Everything will be alright if ya hold on
It's a struggle everyday, gotta roll on
And there's no way I can pay you back
But my plan is to show you that I understand
You are appreciated

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sorry for that, i know i went too far
but this what i feel
this is
the assassin
Over & Out

oh brother what to say .....
i really do not know what to say
you really put me in hard situation .....

siAnyways, what I comprehend from your masterpiece is that you are talking about your
'mom, which is the main thing in your diary. What makes me concluded
this is that you've mentioned something about being alone after
leaving her, and you are reminiscing your naughty deeds, which can be foolish in the first place,
Another thing to prove the case is that you have revealed something fishy,

no no no ...my mother is still alive icon987icon108icon04
she is my life ,,,oh God
and she is in front of me right now




my mom loves me and i can not express my great love to my great and best mother in this world....and sometimes when she told me about her life ...as young girl ,,as awife ,,and as a mother , i really feel that iam about to cray ,,and i am the best lucky girl because i have this brave and strong mom
they suffer alot in the seek of oure happiness
my mother ,,,,i love her and i want to be like her..
as you said we can not express our love fo them

but what i really wanted to say is that you may not get what i meant
i really mean my note
by what i have written up there
and i expressed my feeling and true feeling
allwhat i have written is true,,,my note ,,my memories and the day i was forced to leave my prciose note,,,,everything is clear

well.. you may think that i am silly enough to have such a feeling toward just a note,however i really did .. and it means alot to me ,although it is a simple thing ,but i have it in the most safe place
and in my heart ,,it is associated with memories that i cannot descripe

do not think i do not love my mom because i did not ment her
i write another writings descriping my momy
and to tell the truth i always sing songs about my beautiful mom
to her

i hope you get it

thanks to you
for these ,,,,


And when it seems that I'm hopeless
You say the words that can get me back in focus
When I was sick as a little kid
To keep me happy there's no limit to the things you did
And all my childhood memories
Are full of all the sweet things you did for me
And even though I act craaazy
I gotta thank the Lord that you made me
There are no words that can express how I feel
You never kept a secret, always stayed real
And I appreciate, how you raised me
And all the extra love that you gave me
I wish I could take the pain away
If you can make it through the night there's a brighter day
Everything will be alright if ya hold on
It's a struggle everyday, gotta roll on
And there's no way I can pay you back
But my plan is to show you that I understand
You are appreciated



yes yes yes foreve and true as it descrips my mom
so toutching words
so mouch thank you
but , you know ..i like the way you understand my words
it reflects your great love to your mom
you went too far and understand it like that because of your sens as a writer and lover for your mother , but sorry i am not writer but i looooove momy ^^
and i do love her more than these words
it is nothing in front of our deep feelings toward her


it;s an honoure to have this comment
and still did not undertand all the words ^^,,,
God save your mom to you forever^^
see ya

^
^
breack-fast
comin with a lot
hold up
hehe
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i have more to say
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sorry i have noteced that ther are large number of speling mistakes,,,
no one corrected me????

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brother what to say .....
i really do not know what to say
you really put me in hard situation .....

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Never mind sis, I really said what I have

to say.

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siAnyways, what I comprehend from your masterpiece is that you are talking about your
'mom, which is the main thing in your diary. What makes me concluded
this is that you've mentioned something about being alone after
leaving her, and you are reminiscing your naughty deeds, which can be foolish in the first place,
Another thing to prove the case is that you have revealed something fishy,

no no no ...my mother is still alive
she is my life ,,,oh God
and she is in front of me right now

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You got me wrong sis,

I was just explaining

What I have seen from

Your words

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my mom loves me and i can not express my great love to my great and best mother in this world....and sometimes when she told me about her life ...as young girl ,,as awife ,,and as a mother , i really feel that iam about to cray ,,and i am the best lucky girl because i have this brave and strong mom
they suffer alot in the seek of oure happiness
my mother ,,,,i love her and i want to be like her..
as you said we can not express our love fo them

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I know that you love your mom, and may Allah keep her

With grace of his, and may Allah gather you in heaven

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You know sis, this age when our parents told us about

Their past, and how they pass the issues

To raise no fools, this age is hard for them,

Cos they feel like they are all alone,

No is around for them , and if you see closely, I mean when

You see your mom sitting, and drinking her coffee,

Then you will see how sad it is to be alone,

Just imagine that after these bunches of years

You sit alone.

No one is around, even if when the sun is walking

By, and see his mom sitting alone, he just

Saying hello mom and some may not,

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but what i really wanted to say is that you may not get what i meant
i really mean my note
by what i have written up there
and i expressed my feeling and true feeling
allwhat i have written is true,,,my note ,,my memories and the day i was forced to leave my prciose note,,,,everything is clear

well.. you may think that i am silly enough to have such a feeling toward just a note,however i really did .. and it means alot to me ,although it is a simple thing ,but i have it in the most safe place
and in my heart ,,it is associated with memories that i cannot descripe

do not think i do not love my mom because i did not ment her
i write another writings descriping my momy
and to tell the truth i always sing songs about my beautiful mom
to her

i hope you get it

thanks to you

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I thought that you were talking about your mom, cos I comprehend

This wrong in the first place,

I know some feelings to the note my have some reflection

To visualize it as someone close to and you are talking

To him every single day, and say what ever you like

But I think that what I understand is suitable for mothers

Cos u have mentioned something about being alone

And run as fast as you could when you see her,

And when you feel sad, she is your remedy,

Anyways, I really respect your way

Of thinking, and so do I, I have something

To write, and I love to share it, even if

I feel dreary, I just hold up my pen, and start

Playing with my pen, writing, drawing, and initialing,

Cos I feel that my pen is my only friend I ever had

…

Whatever, some memories cannot be described to public

Even if you feel all alone, just have a little faith

And write up your things, and then say what a relief,

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for these ,,,,


And when it seems that I'm hopeless
You say the words that can get me back in focus
When I was sick as a little kid
To keep me happy there's no limit to the things you did
And all my childhood memories
Are full of all the sweet things you did for me
And even though I act craaazy
I gotta thank the Lord that you made me
There are no words that can express how I feel
You never kept a secret, always stayed real
And I appreciate, how you raised me
And all the extra love that you gave me
I wish I could take the pain away
If you can make it through the night there's a brighter day
Everything will be alright if ya hold on
It's a struggle everyday, gotta roll on
And there's no way I can pay you back
But my plan is to show you that I understand
You are appreciated



yes yes yes foreve and true as it descrips my mom
so toutchy words
so mouch thank you
but , you know ..i like the way you understand my words
it reflects your great love to your mom
you went to far and understand it like that because of your sens as a writer and lover for your mother , but sorry iam not writer but i looooove momy ^^
and i do love her more than these words
it is nothing in front of our deep feelings toward her


it;s an honore to have this comment
and still did not undertand all the words ^^,,,
God save your mom to you forever^^
see ya

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Thanks sis, I really appreciate your words. More than anything

cos I have understand that I’m outta words to say anything further

… just a word of appreciation,

Thanks

And many thanks

Good morning dear members

What good morning,

C’mon sis, you have

Added this topic in the

Midnight,

Im gonna assassin you

>__<

First.. I would like to express my happy feelings ...seeing our forum activity
I left it for a while and now I am back .....
Glad to see you again with your new awesome topics .....

As a gift, and as I promised
I brought you my first hand writing topic ^^
I left this forum for 2 hard weeks
And now
I did my best to present good writing for you ^^

I did my best to present a good writing for you

As a beginner one ,correct me and comment ……

Let us start .....

goodbye my note book

Today I am going to say goodbye

To the note of my diaries

......My beautiful year ,,my dear note …for the most precious thing I ever have

being with you ,,

I don’t understand this, but what I understand is,

That you wanna say for the most precious thing that I ever

Had by being with you,

I have lived so many happy days and wonderful moments

That I could not gather them ,,,

Do you remember those long nights we were spending together

I was watching you Sitting awake all night

And out of awareness, falling a sleep holding you ,

I used to sleep beside you ,, and ,waking up facing you……

do you remember when i came running from school to see you

For most of my times … you were my honest friend whom I missed

Sometimes ..when we got separated ,,…I just looking for you ...

To greet you and tell what happened today ,,,where I went before awhile ...

What made me sad to cheer me

This one has to be said like this,

To great you and tell what happened today, and

Where I went before a while, and what made me sad

To cheer me,

,,,what made happy to share it with m

You were all ears to what I usually say

And get me your attention ,,listen to my empty talk and talkative mouth

With respectful and enjoyable

When I have no one to sit with , when I got hurt by others ,when feel sad
,you were doing your job as my best friend ,,, telling me to take it easy and life is beautiful

I was so free to tell you what came to mind ,,, what I feel and need

What I exactly want to ,,, without being afraid or hesitating

I like you

I really do

I will ,,just like I used to and

It would be painful and hard for me

Even for my thin pen who liked your pure white pages

I assure that , for my pen , it is as hard as for me

To leave you

Because we were all have been loyal for on another

Because we were all have been loyal for one another

Good friends ,,like always

What can I say is that you were good to hold what I say inward you for a long and complete year …..

with its bitter and sweet days

And now …..i have written what I could

…while there are so many inside my heart

And you will be kept there …..

In that place,,, where I used to keep what I love in it

As this year is spending its last moments with its days ,,

I am spending this golden one with you

My lovely note book

Who has kept my lovely diaries?

I will not forget you

AZUMA

Written with tears and pain during the last day of that year in the last page of my best diary note

I have done what I could, and even I’m wrong, but I followed my conscious

It’s been a priceless moment reading your masterpiece

......My beautiful year ,,my dear note …for the most precious thing I ever have
being with you ,,

brother
here this
i mean,,, it should be like that

being with you ...i have lived so many ....etc

is this sentence right like tha t??? that is what i meant

i know but i didn't understnd it that way
>____<
my bad

:: Alsalm 3alaykom wa rahmat Allah wa barakatoh ::

it's great topic, indeed

you have terrific style, keep going

i have small note, if that's okay with you

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And you will be kept there

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why kept? you can't say that

you should say keep

that's all

Best wishes

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin

Good morning dear members

What good morning,


C’mon sis, you have


Added this topic in the


Midnight,


Im gonna assassin you


>__<

First.. I would like to express my happy feelings ...seeing our forum activity

I left it for a while and now I am back .....
Glad to see you again with your new awesome topics .....

As a gift, and as I promised

I brought you my first hand writing topic ^^
I left this forum for 2 hard weeks
And now
I did my best to present good writing for you ^^

I did my best to present a good writing for you

As a beginner one ,correct me and comment ……


Let us start .....


goodbye my note book


Today I am going to say goodbye


To the note of my diaries


......My beautiful year ,,my dear note …for the most precious thing I ever have


being with you ,,

I don’t understand this, but what I understand is,


That you wanna say for the most precious thing that I ever


Had by being with you,

I have lived so many happy days and wonderful moments


That I could not gather them ,,,


Do you remember those long nights we were spending together


I was watching you Sitting awake all night


And out of awareness, falling a sleep holding you ,


I used to sleep beside you ,, and ,waking up facing you……


do you remember when i came running from school to see you


For most of my times … you were my honest friend whom I missed


Sometimes ..when we got separated ,,…I just looking for you ...


To greet you and tell what happened today ,,,where I went before awhile ...


What made me sad to cheer me

This one has to be said like this,


To great you and tell what happened today, and


Where I went before a while, and what made me sad


To cheer me,

,,,what made happy to share it with m


You were all ears to what I usually say


And get me your attention ,,listen to my empty talk and talkative mouth


With respectful and enjoyable


When I have no one to sit with , when I got hurt by others ,when feel sad

,you were doing your job as my best friend ,,, telling me to take it easy and life is beautiful

I was so free to tell you what came to mind ,,, what I feel and need


What I exactly want to ,,, without being afraid or hesitating


I like you


I really do


I will ,,just like I used to and


It would be painful and hard for me


Even for my thin pen who liked your pure white pages


I assure that , for my pen , it is as hard as for me


To leave you


Because we were all have been loyal for on another

Because we were all have been loyal for one another

Good friends ,,like always


What can I say is that you were good to hold what I say inward you for a long and complete year …..


with its bitter and sweet days


And now …..i have written what I could


…while there are so many inside my heart


And you will be kept there …..


In that place,,, where I used to keep what I love in it


As this year is spending its last moments with its days ,,


I am spending this golden one with you


My lovely note book


Who has kept my lovely diaries?


I will not forget you


AZUMA


Written with tears and pain during the last day of that year in the last page of my best diary note

I have done what I could, and even I’m wrong, but I followed my conscious

It’s been a priceless moment reading your masterpiece

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THANK YOU SO MOUCH

and i have a Q
is it ok to say note or note book when i want to talk about my diaries???

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أسـدُ الإسـلام

:: Alsalm 3alaykom wa rahmat Allah wa barakatoh ::

it's great topic, indeed

you have terrific style, keep going

i have small note, if that's okay with you

why kept? you can't say that

you should say keep

that's all

Best wishes

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وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاتة

you are welcom brother
i am glad that you like it
it is ok to tell you opinion and correct me also
becouse i asked everyone who reads it to comment
about kept i think it is right
it was preceded by Be , so it should not be stem
thats how i learnt
if you have the rule
tell why it is wrong
i appreciate it
thanks

Back

well, right now i don't have the rule but

will" using for Future"

so how you gather it with a past verb :)

anyway, i hope i'm wrong

best wishes

i do not use will alone
i say
will be kept
i am talking about passive
my note book will be kept by me
i am the one who will keep my note book

got it ^^???

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THANK YOU SO MOUCH

and i have a Q
is it ok to say note or note book when i want to talk about my diaries???

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they all ok
keep goin
i love these
kinda Q

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why kept? you can't say that

you should say keep

that's all

Best wishes

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dude , she is right,
i'm afried you r wrong
cos she used the exact word
like if you are sayig
this will be delayed
its gramatical things
^ _ ^

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i do not use will alone
i say
will be kept
i am talking about passive
my note book will be kept by me
i am the one who will keep my note book

got it ^^???

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u r right darling
just keep going

I apologize, Azuma

you 're right

i did n't understand the sentences

you 're a creative writer, keep going

[the assassin]

thanks, dude

"we learn from you"

الترجمه العربيه: ومنكم نستفيد ^_^

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أسـدُ الإسـلام

I apologize, Azuma

you 're right

i did n't understand the sentences

you 're a creative writer, keep going

[the assassin]

thanks, dude

"we learn from you"

الترجمه العربيه: ومنكم نستفيد ^_^

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ye ye brother,,
it is ok
as we always say
it is a learning process

i appreciate your words
thanks

see ya