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Here is as i promise my second Topic in the English Forume

but it will be different as it would be many short stories not only one

Every week i will put a new one and ofcourse all stroies will
be made up by me icon884

so lets begin and dont waste time
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First Story

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Darkness is a word that means to all of us lonely and black but in this story you will know a different meaning of darkness ,,so lets begin

Tom was playing “play staion”in one of his friends house..,,they finished playing at midnight ,it was the time that Robin one of tom’ s friends decided to tell them a scary story that people said that it really happened in a school lie on the way to robin house …

Robin said.”don’t you know that when my father and me passed by school with our car we see a demon wears black clothes and sleep in front of school gate and never let anybody pass and I swear that I saw his eyes and it was red like blood even my father cant pass and took one of sideways “

Lewis confirmed “it was the same exactly what happened to me and here you are you confirmed my words”

Tom said while he was laughing.”haha don’t be silly what the hell you are talking about ..i cant believe in the existence of demons “..

Lewis and Robin said at the same time..”we are not kidding how don’t you know the story I think you live in another planet “

Tom said finishing the conversation” could you change the subject please “..

After an hour from finishing this conversation Tom and lewis said good bye to Robin and left …

Tom and Lewis walk till they reach Lewis home then Tom continue alone to his house .Tom found himself that he approached from the school but Tom looked carefully and he saw black object in front of the school and the brightness was not clear so Tom couldn’t saw the features.Suddenly The black Object slept in front of the school and at that time Tom knew clearly that he couldn’t pass although he did not believe in Demons existence as he said but he felt somehow that this creature or thing from another world

Tom looked around and there was sideway so Tom decided to be brave and his adrenaline increased even Tom thought that the demon could feel his own fear so he took a few steps and ran away like a wind ..

On the next day Tom told his friend about what happened and his friends became more afraid and said to him “so you believed us now”

After few days of the accident the whole truth of the demon appeared that was Tom knew from Robin.

Robin:we know the truth of the demon

Tom:really so what is it?

Robin:the demon was only a secondary school student he used to sneak to the school at night and when he saw anyone coming he wore black clothes and threw fear in others hearts so he could had his drugs without disturbance and the Cop arrested him yesterday ..

Tom smiled”so I win”

Robin wondered”what do you mean”

Tom said ”my theory was true demons are not exist in our world”

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here we again dear folks so i decided to putthe story today insted of tomorrow coz i am not sure that i could enter msoms tomorrow coz a new exam begin icon04

2nd story

today story depend on different color of fear and it took me great effort so i hope you would like it

there is a little trick so enjoy and lets begin

2nd story

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At this time of the year the weather was very bad as it was rainy and cloudy but who was inside the Remond Hospital would not fell anything happened outside as the place was very warm except the anatomy room where they kept the corpse cold to maintain them for corruption and elimination
Dr mark sitting alone in his room and the light above him was dancing made a noisy feeling when he suddenly heard the announcer said in microphone “doctor mark must go to the observation room to observe the anatomical operation for the new corpse “
Mark said to himself “oh so boring I am sick of this job I do the same thing everyday “ but he went to the room as it was call for duty when he entered the room he saw another two doctors sitting in the room watching the operation ,,,he said hello to them and sat beside them but for his surprise they did not answer him and this made him so angry but he prefered watching the operation to making a fight with them ..
One of the doctor beside him said,”who could imagine that would happened to that man “

The other doctor agreed ,”yes you are right but I think it was his fate”..

Mark said to himself,,”what these nuts are talking about,,I think I will watch the operation and ignoring their says”
On the screen two doctors appeared one of them was young and the other was old ..

The old doctor said ,”Now we will start the anatomical operation on 14 th october 1995 “.
While Mark focused his eyes on the screen a train of old memories passed through his mind and he remembered some events of his life
Marks memory ” in Edmond Casino Mark sat beside a beautiful woman holding her hand and said,
“yes dear I promised you I will do my best and work 24 hours and achieving many of my dreams to be able to request your father the permission for my marriage from you.”
The woman and she called Margret said while she fired a cigarette “really so how long will I have to wait you I cannot stand waiting you anymore it seems like I will wait you for 100 years”
But Mark said..”don’t worry I will do my best “ ..

Mark woke on young doctor’s voice saying”now we will remove muscles one by one “
Mark looked to the young doctor who was happy with his job and he remembered himself when he was happy like him when he knew Margret ..
The old doctor on the screen said”mmmmm by the end of the examination of the heart it seems that it explode from a gun shot ..”
Mark give attention to the doctor when he saw this and he said to himself “so his heart broke like mine”
One of the doctor beside Mark said”what a bad luck his heart completely destroyed”
Mark returned back to his thought and memory
“he remembered his first talk with Philib in business ,,Mark said in great anger “no I cannot accept doing this crime I cannot accept it as a doctor”
But Philib smiled and said “but it is easy way to become rich in few months “..
Mark insist “no I cannot “..
Philib said “don’t be foolish tell be could Margret accept marrying you if you are not rich “
Mark who was became more quite said”so do you guarantee that job will be safe one “
Philib smiled and said”100%perecent man”

Mark woke again on the doctor voice saying “now lets check the brain and it completely normal but we will continue the anatomical process “..
Mark saw the two doctors extract organs and he felt pain and remembered his horrible deeds
When Mark met Philib again each one of them had a bag ..
Philib:did you bring what we need?
Mark in fear” yes please hurry I face difficulties in bringing it”

Philib said”ok here is the money I hope these kidneys are in a healthy condition?”
Mark answered”damn you I stole them from a healthy patient”
Philib said”ok good bye now “
And Mark repeated stealing organs again and again till he became rich but he was so greed that he continue his evil job till he felt that he could be caught and at this time he decided that he must stop
Mark woke again on doctor voice “now we will check the liver “

Then he returned to his painful thoughts ,,he remembered the time when he decided to tell Philib that he would stop and when he told Philib ,,,philib said”ok it is all right but lets meet each other in the same place we used to go that night”
Mark asked”why??”

Philib said”we want to reward you for your services”
Mark said”ok it is all right”

And at the place the 2 cars stopped and there was only moonlight that lighten the place ..
Philib :hey man here is your many a million dollar but I want you to try this new type of drugs and tell me what is your opinion ..
Mark:oh no thanks I do not want..

Philib:”Don’t worry man it is one try just one time”..
Mark said “ok “ and he injected himself with the drug ..

Philib smiled”so what do you think man ?”’
Mark said”oh man it is really cool “
Mark woke again on doctor voice said”what is this I think we face a suicide case from poison examination it showed that there is a great amount of drugs in the blood”
Mark heard one of the doctor beside him saying “who believed this I cannot imagine that doctor killed himself”

At this time Mark felt a cold shever “frightened” back on his neck and many memories passed quickly in front of him
He remembered how Philib said to him that he knew them and he must die for to avoid any betrayl and remembered how Philib directed the gun toward him and shot him and that was last what Mark saw ..

And when the old doctor put the light on the face of the corpse Mark saw a familiel face and when he heard the doctor beside him said”so Mark lets get out of here “he knew that the call was not for him but it was for another Mark at this time he became sure that the face was his face and he became a ghost

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3rd Story

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The oracle said to Peter “5 days before your death so try to enjoy your life before this time “

Peter said to the oracle “so if you are sure tell me how I will die “

The oracle smiled “so you don’t believe me don’t you ?any way it is not clear young man but all I knew that the danger you will face begin with a litter “T”

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Peter gave the oracle the money and said “thanks old lady for the fun “

But for his surprise the oracle refused his money and said “this prophecy is true so I don’t want your money keep it for yours before `you died “ and she laughed loudly ..

Peter left the old lady and he was very angry because of superstitious this old lady just said ..

4 days left and at night Peter called his friends to stay the night with him ..

Bellick and Edward came and watched scary movies with Peter.When the movie finished ,Peter asked his friend to tell him the most scary stories happened in the town …

Edward said “oh alright but the story may be true ,,the part of the town near the river you know that it is not hosted by people yet ,,,there are rumors that everyone went there at night never came back ,,and they said that some of them returned and said that they faced some kind of vampires others said Ghouls “

Peter said good bye to his friends …He said to himself “so I will prove tomorrow that the oracle was a liar I will go tomorrow to that part of the town and if there is really any monsters I would not die according to the prophecy as the danger I should face begin with “T” so in both ways the oracle will be wrong either I liver or not “

In the evening on the fifth day Peter drove his car to the part of the town and it seemed that no one lived here suddenly he saw a young lady screaming and ran towards him .Peter stopped the car and open the door for her “hurry “

The young lady enter the car and she was very scared “thanks so much sir I was looking for my sister because she entered that part of town when I saw a horrible creatures came for me and I ran till I found you “

Peter said to make the lady relax “don’t worry young lady you are safe now I will return with you to home”

And he smiled to himself “well I won the pet ,,I am still alive”..

Peter drove back and after about 2 minutes he looked in the mirrors and said the the features of the young lady changed as he saw a fang became to grow and her face became more scary ..

Peter screamed “no you cant be please don’t kill me if you killed me the prophecy will be false “

The young lady approached from his neck and whispered “I don’t know about the prophecy all I knew I will fill my cup with your delicious blood”

And when the lady put the fangs in peter s neck ,,he felt that he was given anaesthesia and he said to himself “any way although I am going to die I won the pet “

Suddenly the young lady stopped and said “any way why you stopped for me although you knew that this is a dangerous place “

Peter was breathing so quickly and said”because I knew if I died I would die from a danger with “T” in the first litter of word”

The young lady “but you are right young man ,, I am the danger you must face I am not a vampire or a ghoul did not you get it I can transform to any creatures I want ,,I am you danger The Transformer “

Peter shocked for hearing this and knew when the young lady continued sucking his blood that the oracle was right and knew that is the last moments of his life

when his eyes were shut and the world became black

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4th Story

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Marcos and George used to live by stealing anything to eat and drink in order to live without aim in . Both of them knew that there was a hill full of mystery people said that any one go to that hill never come back..

But they knew also that few miles away from this hill there was a rich man who has a great garden and may be they would find some fruits to eat ..under effect of hunger they crossed the hill and walked till they reach the garden ,,Marcos told George that he would enter the garden and ordered George to guard if there was any one might approach ….

Marcos climbed the wall and jumped inside the garden and really he surprised from all these kinds of fruits he found ,,he began to collect as much as he could then he found George whislting to him so he climbed quickly and jumped out then he found guards ran after them they both ran quickly as they could they looked behind but there was no one however they continue running on reaching the hill both felt tired and felt sleepy they fell on the ground but before losing their consciousness they saw the guards of the garden approached and smiled …….

Detective Robin was so mad to the extent that he screamed at his police chief “I am sure that the owner of the house near the hill had a relation to the recently disappearance “
Police chief said quietly ”we have no right to accuse him without evidence”…
Robin said ”ok then I will work on my own”
He decided to explore the place to find any evidence and he asked his friend Tom for help …
At midnight both were walking in moon light and they reached the hill Robin noticed the pipes that ran underground and he knew that was to provide water to the house and garden ,,he and Tom climbed the wall and jumped inside and there were not any one it seems that everybody slept ,,they flashed their torches and began to explore the garden ,,Robin with his detective sense found that there was a part of garden that empty from grasses ,,he asked Tom to focus the light on that part and then Robin lay down and began to dig till something like door appeared he pulled it with all his strength and finally it opened with him..
Robin smiled to Tom ”seems that we will solve the mystery my friend” they found stairs ..they both descend till reach a big room they heard noise ,Robin and Tom flashed the light ,,they found cages ,,Robin approached to one of these cages suddenly he fell down from fear and said” oh god look tom there were monsters inside this cage “
Tom ”we must get out of here”
Robin said quietly ”don’t worry Tom we are safe these monsters couldn’t reach to us,,so we know now the reason for people disappearance “
Tom”but how they could catch people and force them to go there I don’t think they catched them because one of these disappearance were about 30 people “
Robin smiled”it is pipes”
Tom wondered ”pipes? What do you mean?”
Robin said” Pipes using for transporting water have opening from where opioid substance came out of it and make every one passed on this hill sleep but I don’t know why we don’t sleep or policemen don’t sleep when they came to the hill for searching for victims “
“because it is according to monsters hunger “ a strange voice said
Robin flashed the light toward Tom who fell on the ground and found the owner of voice on the entrance ,,he was the owner of the house
Robin said”you are busted we knew the truth and I will call the police now your end become closed mr “
The owner of the house smiled and raise something like remote control “you cant call any one Robin there is no connection here for your call and the truth will be hidden forever we must serve those monster to protect people from their punishment ,,I think you and your friend will be a good dinner today ,,have a nice day Robin”and he press the button and shut the door quickly ..
Robin screamed”no no let us get out of here” the cages opened
But he was so late for his first time as once he flashed the light he found on of these monster in front of his face and he wished that his death would be fast without pain ….

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5th story

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Alone

Robert used to live alone and he always not good in making a good relationship ….when he was invited to any party ,he did not attend.

He sat in home enjoying being lonely ..although when he loved a girl he did not tell her about his love or talk to her because this love means marriage and there would be a woman that disturb his life

So when his father and mother died he lived in a far house from the city and away from the pollution to have rest that he loved ..

One day he returned to home driving his car in midnight ,,he was so tired to extent that he could not see the boy and the girl they passed in front of him ,,he tried to use the break but it was to late ,,the two bodies flew in the air and the blood covered the frontal glass of the car ..

Robert got out of the car and under the lambs of the car he saw the two bodies laying without any movement ,he approached and his heart was beating so fast,,once he looked to the bodies he knew that the children keft our world …

For his surprise Robert Did not feel any fear his mind was clear and he decided that he would not tell the police as he couldn’t stay in prison with other criminals it would be so much ..so he cleaned the glass removing the blood ,,and carried the bodies in his car and decided that he would put them in storage room in his big house ..as if he buried them in any other place he knew that police always reached to place..

Three days left before he began to heard strange voice from the storage room …..he knew that souls of his victims would annoy him and he felt so afraid from that but he could not ask for help in order not to be busted ..
So he decided to enter the room but of course at day as the voice came always at night …….

He entered the room and reach the place where the bodies lay ,,,he was ready with petrol he brought with him ,,,,,he spread it on he bodies and fire it ,,,he saw the fire growing and he smiled he began to leave the room when he saw the boy and the girl stood at the door blocking the way out ,,and their eyes were full of hatred ,,he knew that he could not pass as he didn’t have the gut to do that …..but he did a great mistake as he forgot about the fire he made the fire began to spread in the room and approached to him ….he looked at the door where the boy and the girl stood and looked behind him where the fire became more nearer to him and he knew in the two cases he would die but he chose to die in his way ,,he approached to the fire and her body began to feel pain but he knew that this pain would be less than the pain he would face if he passed through this door ,,He smiled and knew he gain what he deserve >>>>>>>>

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Note :The 5th Story Written By Me And closest friend Mohamed Ic-Graduate0

The brilliant writier of all time
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man i really don't know what to
say .. but ur topic is kinda boomb
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sticky for awhile
and i'll put mine ... ^^"

Hiz Kyto Kid , how do you do ? hope you are ok !!

you have a nice idea which you want to receive it to us
"Truth of Demons "
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" i think the ghosts only exist in the scary stories , mysterious novels , but about their existing in our world, it's foolish and childhood idea , just use it to scare the kids in order to be not naughty and make them sleeping !!

that's right we believe that Allah created the jinns and devils , because it's already existing in the Holy Quran , so we believe of their existing in their own world , but we can't see them , Why ??!! "

Nice story , i really like it
keep going bro !!

thanx
see you
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Mudia

Our creative member

kyto kid

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gentle man kyto icon30

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i realy like read stories8wq4
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i realy realy bad and write story Icon10

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Every week i will put a new one and ofcourse all stroies will
be made up by me icon884

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and we be so waitng for youthumbsup-Icon

and know i want to read
the dark story

so see you
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin

The brilliant writier of all time

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man i really don't know what to
say .. but ur topic is kinda boomb
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sticky for awhile

and i'll put mine ... ^^"

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hey man your words really delighted my heart as usual icon111and really it is all thanks to you man who actviate this forume and with out this i wouldnt take a step in writing english with out people like you and english members who really encouarge meicon-cab

so wait for renew next friday

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة موديا1992

Hiz Kyto Kid , how do you do ? hope you are ok !!

you have a nice idea which you want to receive it to us
"Truth of Demons "
^_^

" i think the ghosts only exist in the scary stories , mysterious novels , but about their existing in our world, it's foolish and childhood idea , just use it to scare the kids in order to be not naughty and make them sleeping !!

that's right we believe that Allah created the jinns and devils , because it's already existing in the Holy Quran , so we believe of their existing in their own world , but we can't see them , Why ??!! "

Nice story , i really like it
keep going bro !!

thanx
see you
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Mudia

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hey Mudia it is really nice to see you visiting my topic and i am fine thanks Icon98e

about you words it is really give me trust as i always not beleive that we could see jinns although they are really existence as holly quraan mentioned but it also mentioned as you say we cant see them as allah make a barrier from seeing them

and really it sometimes drives me crazy when somepeople beleive topics like this is pic of jinn
or beleiving other say we saw jinn in a cave and it has horns e.vil_l

thanks man for your replyicon30

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haha hey Eima how are you i hope you r fine and ofcorse we must respect ladies first Icon-yes0

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i realy like read stories8wq4

i realy realy bad and write story Icon10

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haha it is not difficult first you get a small idea and you could make your own one

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and we be so waitng for youthumbsup-Icon

and know i want to read
the dark story

so see you

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ok Eima wait and thanks for your beautiful reply as usually expected from you:)

hey eima waiting for your topic you promised us iconbaye4

wooooow
as Eima has just said
Gentle Man breack-fast
really
thanks for putting laddies at first ^^
that's very kind of you ^^

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i am sorry for being late
to tell the truth , i am impressed of your creativity
i have noticed that the way you write it is really awesome , your language tooicon102
as there is no mistakes
excellent ^^
the story is amazing
so i will have you to share us my idea in the poll thumbsup-Icon


Thanks Kyto
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Hi kyto kid how r u ?! hope you are fine actually the story was great I love it & sometimes I say a human can be a demon himself by his horrible act that he does with the other , of course only those who have seen and had times like this will agree with what I said while the other will convince me "there is no such thing is human demon " any way thanx bro for the story it is was wonderful really ……..

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woooo
as Eima has just said
Gentle Man breack-fast
really
thanks for putting laddies at first ^^
that's very kind of you ^^

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haha you r welcome AzumaIcon-Winner0

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i am sorry for being late
to tell the truth , i am impressed of your creativity
i have noticed that the way you write it is really awesome , your language tooicon102
as there is no mistakes
excellent ^^

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no never mind and i also be late so sorry for that Azuma and you words really great and i am happy that you like the story
the story is

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amazing
so i will have you to share us my idea in the poll thumbsup-Icon


Thanks Kyto

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ok azuma and about that i added a chapter in continouse to coaf chapter

see you Azuma Icon0e0

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Hi kyto kid how r u ?! hope you are fine actually the story was great I love it & sometimes I say a human can be a demon himself by his horrible act that he does with the other , of course only those who have seen and had times like this will agree with what I said while the other will convince me "there is no such thing is human demon " any way thanx bro for the story it is was wonderful really ……..

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hi Fatima new english team member icon77

thanks for your asking and i am fine thank youIcon OK 0

and about your words ofcourse you are right every one of us meet a demon has a shape of human and they are really many now a days as there is a great spread of evil like America and israle the real demons and greatst one of all demons

and thanks for you for enjoying the story and wait for the second it will be tomorrowicon77

the second story is added today coz i amn not sure that i could put it tomorrow so i put it today and i hope you will enjoy

Hi Kyto^^

good jobIcon-Winner0
and great effort
i am so excited to read it
i will now
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Good luck
and do your best in the exam ^^icon18

thanks Azuma for your reply and thanks for wishing me a good luck

and i hope you will enjoy the second storyicon102

hey everybody as i promised the 3rd story is added please enjoy it :)

hi .. you are the best clerk..
but ,do you know what the story was missed, some pictures to feeling keen and eager when you read it

beautiful story .... i like reading about vampires... and other supernatural things
monsters,ghols,ghosts,devels with black wings..
or fairies and white angels....it makes things become exciting really as in yours
but if i ask you where did the ide of vampiers come from in the first place ??
i mean who is the founder of it!! and what inspiers him of creating such awful creature called vampire???!!
some says that in our life there are somepeople act like vampiers..
. ...they are tottally vampiers who used others to fulfill their needs and wants....
they just have the scary fack smile of those vampiers we know
i mean ... it must be made from real people in our real life

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see you around
and good luck in your next spooky story ^_^
i will make them as "stories befor sleeping" but i will kill you if i have nightmaers in my dreams^_^

Hi kyto
how are you ?...long time
good job from you
i will read the 2nd and 3rd
and i wish you good luck
in next story
waiting
see you

welcome my friend how are you, my friend kyto kid I'm really very sorry for late to reply I was busy in somethings :^ ^ , ur topic it is really admired me and I surprise from ur able to write this long story it is good hobby good job man*_^ I will read part1 & 2 & 3 in shaa allah and thanx dude for put my surname in ur topic this is delighted me^_^ thank u and see you guy bye

nice thanks

good story

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hi .. you are the best clerk..
but ,do you know what the story was missed, some pictures to feeling keen and eager when you read it

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hey Azzoozz how are you man thanks man for your words and about your advice you are right pictures would be nice with words but i am so bad in choosing pic so i would be grateful if you helped me in choosing good pictures

and thanks again Icon-yes0

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Azuma

beautiful story .... i like reading about vampires... and other supernatural things
monsters,ghols,ghosts,devels with black wings..
or fairies and white angels....it makes things become exciting really as in yours
but if i ask you where did the ide of vampiers come from in the first place ??
i mean who is the founder of it!! and what inspiers him of creating such awful creature called vampire???!!
some says that in our life there are somepeople act like vampiers..
. ...they are tottally vampiers who used others to fulfill their needs and wants....
they just have the scary fack smile of those vampiers we know
i mean ... it must be made from real people in our real life

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see you around
and good luck in your next spooky story ^_^
i will make them as "stories befor sleeping" but i will kill you if i have nightmaers in my dreams^_^

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hey dear Azuma nice to see you again about your Q yes you are right Azuma that vampires stories came from real events and characters but the difference between vampires in the story and vampires in our real life that those in our real life dont feel satsified ever what ever they do to hurt people

and i read a book about how vampires idea came from

the first one tht came with this idea was Bram Stoker the creater of Dracula ,,he was sitting at night reading a book about kont dracula who lived and fight enemys who killed his wife ..

Bram heard scream in the street when he went down he found police arrest a man killed a little girl and drank her blood but this because he was suffering from a disease in blood that was never treated in old days but ofcourse it treated now by blood transfer ,,from this accident bram mixed the two ideaes together the Knot Dracula who live alone drinking blood and this was the beginning of vampires

and i am glad that you like the story
i will make them as "stories befor sleeping" but i will kill you if i have nightmaers in my dreams^_^


haha i will escape from now

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة mis eima

Hi kyto

how are you ?...long time
good job from you
i will read the 2nd and 3rd
and i wish you good luck
in next story
waiting

see you

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hi dear Eima yes long time Icon039
and thanks Eima and waiting for you icon30

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة coaf

welcome my friend how are you, my friend kyto kid I'm really very sorry for late to reply I was busy in somethings :^ ^ , ur topic it is really admired me and I surprise from ur able to write this long story it is good hobby good job man*_^ I will read part1 & 2 & 3 in shaa allah and thanx dude for put my surname in ur topic this is delighted me^_^ thank u and see you guy bye

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dont be sorry Coaf your vist make me happy

and not at all for putting you name you are one of the best members man and you deserve welcomeIcon0e0

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كايتو كيد22

nice thanks

good story

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thanksكايتو كيد FOR YOUR REPLY

forget as usual the 4th stroy is added i hope you will enjoy it

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kyto kid

hey dear Azuma nice to see you again about your Q yes you are right Azuma that vampires stories came from real events and characters but the difference between vampires in the story and vampires in our real life that those in our real life dont feel satsified ever what ever they do to hurt people

and i read a book about how vampires idea came from

the first one tht came with this idea was Bram Stoker the creater of Dracula ,,he was sitting at night reading a book about kont dracula who lived and fight enemys who killed his wife ..

Bram heard scream in the street when he went down he found police arrest a man killed a little girl and drank her blood but this because he was suffering from a disease in blood that was never treated in old days but ofcourse it treated now by blood transfer ,,from this accident bram mixed the two ideaes together the Knot Dracula who live alone drinking blood and this was the beginning of vampires

and i am glad that you like the story
i will make them as "stories befor sleeping" but i will kill you if i have nightmaers in my dreams^_^


haha i will escape from now

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Oh my God
so kont dracula was a real man was'nt he???... so it was real (the name of Dracula indicates that kont)....amazing

i have read that novel and it was really exciting... that man who went to the castle of Dracula for doing some jobs..then he noticed that his host does'nt sleep at night as he doesn't wake up in the morning....there were no mirrors at all ... how come !! a palace without a mirror..also there were no servants ; dishes were made by unknown person .. all doors and gates were locked... as well windows....so he faced alot of mysteriuos things that need to be clarified....
until he found the truth and killed him... it was really exciting
.......................................
.. the way you mintioned how the idea of vampires came is convincing..
ok i will tell you something about it ....
there were an article saying that don't you notice that vampires always belong to the high class..which means that they must be kings or princes..they always live in palaces...or castles...have you ever read or seen astory about a poor vampire lives in a small cottage..??!! of course Not
and that becouse the idea of vampires belongs to an evil Roman king...
..he was such a tyrent...injust ; his ultimate pleasure was getting its peek when he was performing torture on the low-class people , poors and servants...he loved to see and smell blood...
so one day , since poor people got sick of his bad treatment , he invited them to a very great feast... he invited all people classes especially poor people...then after they enjoyed eating ..after they had experienced the pleasure of life for their first time, he ordered to lock all the gates and windows of the castle and made a fire at that hall where people ate their dinner
so they all died of fire while he ws watching happily...how cruil..!!
so dear brother that writer made the idea of Vampires after that awful king
that what was wrritten

so stories are diffirent about how vampires exist....couse alot of real people look like them ,so that others refer to various real characters from which Vampires were made

Thanks brothericon111
and sooooooooooooory for the long comment , cause i really am interested in these stories
see you

Hi my crony kyto kid, how r u, I read 1 & 2 story it's really different color of fear, the one story about demon that his eyes is red was fear but secound story about dr mark it's really nice and fear I didn't know that my wack is writer^_^ well done dear go on good hobby I will read 3 and 4 in shaa allah and tell u my opinion see u man and peace be upon you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Azuma

Oh my God
so kont dracula was a real man was'nt he???... so it was real (the name of Dracula indicates that kont)....amazing

i have read that novel and it was really exciting... that man who went to the castle of Dracula for doing some jobs..then he noticed that his host does'nt sleep at night as he doesn't wake up in the morning....there were no mirrors at all ... how come !! a palace without a mirror..also there were no servants ; dishes were made by unknown person .. all doors and gates were locked... as well windows....so he faced alot of mysteriuos things that need to be clarified....
until he found the truth and killed him... it was really exciting
.......................................
.. the way you mintioned how the idea of vampires came is convincing..
ok i will tell you something about it ....
there were an article saying that don't you notice that vampires always belong to the high class..which means that they must be kings or princes..they always live in palaces...or castles...have you ever read or seen astory about a poor vampire lives in a small cottage..??!! of course Not
and that becouse the idea of vampires belongs to an evil Roman king...
..he was such a tyrent...injust ; his ultimate pleasure was getting its peek when he was performing torture on the low-class people , poors and servants...he loved to see and smell blood...
so one day , since poor people got sick of his bad treatment , he invited them to a very great feast... he invited all people classes especially poor people...then after they enjoyed eating ..after they had experienced the pleasure of life for their first time, he ordered to lock all the gates and windows of the castle and made a fire at that hall where people ate their dinner
so they all died of fire while he ws watching happily...how cruil..!!
so dear brother that writer made the idea of Vampires after that awful king
that what was wrritten

so stories are diffirent about how vampires exist....couse alot of real people look like them ,so that others refer to various real characters from which Vampires were made

Thanks brothericon111
and sooooooooooooory for the long comment , cause i really am interested in these stories
see you

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:dsorry Azuma late as usual forgive me it seems you are a good reader yes you remember me with that amazing story about dracula but you know i think bram stoker made a bad repetition to dracula

about your story of the origin of the vampires i noticed some thing ,,that the king was Roman and also Kont dracula was Roman Prince ..so all stories about vampires always related to Romania and roman kings

the reason is that roman and hungarian people was famouse about their violence and passion to kill and spread blood every where ..even when Kont Dracula had a war with Turkish "osman empire formerly" he used to kill them slowly and enjoy listening to their pain ..

so your story also are right and the common thing mmthey are usually about Roman kings

and it is known in most of vampires story that Translifania "Roman city" famouse of being city of vampires

and your comment Azuma is really awesom and i am delighted that i knew a good reader like you icon30

about the next story i think i will be a little late may be next thursady :(

see you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة coaf

Hi my crony kyto kid, how r u, I read 1 & 2 story it's really different color of fear, the one story about demon that his eyes is red was fear but secound story about dr mark it's really nice and fear I didn't know that my wack is writer^_^ well done dear go on good hobby I will read 3 and 4 in shaa allah and tell u my opinion see u man and peace be upon you

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Dear Brother Coaf How are you man mmyou always encourage me and thank you is not enough for your beautiful words about me Icon33and i am glad that the you like the story and wait for the next i will be late in writitng it so wait dear brother Icon0e0

Icon98e:d:dLong Time I know but finally the 5th story is added Enjoy it