Reading stories is the most interesting thing for most of us .. ever since we were children , we used to have mom telling us stories befor sleeping ...and sometimes we brought her an exciting book full of short stories and ask her to read for us to fly away with our imagination by listening to them . but, what if we , ourselves make these exciting stories .. creat characters .. control the events
and give our creativity the freedome to build something unexpected...something brilliant on our own
The way we apply this idea : i will begin the introduction of the story by my own words then each one comes after me will complete from the point in which i stopped by his won way and own words so, he completes the events as he wants so that you have the right to creat your story ... the one comes after will complete as shown on the same way untill the end of the story
The clock struck twelve… every thing seemed silent , dark and scary…
The moonlight penetrated Mai's window .. … spreading its splendid light as if it were trying to do so . When someone can not sleep , he tries anything to take his insomnia away ... ... to distract himself . ..
This exactly what happened with Mai As soon as the moonlight brightened her room , she was observant enough to notice such incredible scene... not to mention how sensitive she was toward nature…
She suddenly got up and hurried at the window opened it as if she were chasing Something she wanted to catch long time ago ……
When she opened the window nice wind blow on her moving her long hair Activating each part of her body she really at that time wished that this moment to be immortal as decribing this scene to her was more than incredible . While enjoying this beautiful scene Mai saw something that disturb her enjoy like a falling fly disturb a glass of milk ,she saw…
when the owl flew back .. Mai was a bit sad, cos she felt Some kind of loneliness, and grief she got back to her tiny room, where she saw the sparkle moon staring at her, Mai seeped tears, sorrow in everywhere, no one can hear Her tears. Pain reflected upon her face, and even if there Is happiness, she would force to get a little or a moment Of it. The clock is still ticking .. and the sound of breeze can be Sensed from every where, scary, but lovely..
- Take it easy little princess.. Strange voice came out of the closet
- ….. Mai remained constant
- Who are you – Frightened Mai asked
- I’m A little fairy, who sent to draw a smile upon your face .. said the voice
After mai heard the strange voice coming out of the closet ......She got up.....scared and frightened .....Walked slowly to the closet............And....opened it .....Then, out of the dark......a small glow was coming out .....She looked carefuly at it....and she saw .....A beautiful fairy flying out of the closet .....With her sparkling.....star like coming out of her back ....Don't be scared my princess....said the fairy ....Mai staring at her....with nothing to say .....The fairy took out her magic wand .....And said the magic words .....Suddenly the two vanished into Thin Air
The clock struck twelve… every thing seemed silent , dark and scary…
The moonlight penetrated Mai's window .. … spreading its splendid light as if it were trying to do so . When someone can not sleep , he tries anything to take his insomnia away ... ... to distract himself . ..
This exactly what happened with Mai As soon as the moonlight brightened her room , she was observant enough to notice such incredible scene... not to mention how sensitive she was toward nature…
She suddenly got up and hurried at the window opened it as if she were chasing Something she wanted to catch long time ago ……
I donno whats the matter but i couldn't move kyto's comment anyways.. this topic will encourage others to write and i really admire the idea cos its kinda creative ^^: sticky until we finish the story btw how many chapters should we write ><
09-03-2009, 11:16 PM
أسمـــاء
رد: Make your own story
it depends ..... and about kyto .. then he must put it himself if he did not mind8wq4 cause i like the part he added thereIcon06
10-03-2009, 12:18 AM
Schwert
رد: Make your own story
Oh my sis ur topic is very nice very useful, I really like it and I think I will participate in it many, it is good idea to help us in many thing in english, Now I will go to think what I will write to continue the story and back
In peace of allah
10-03-2009, 12:25 AM
mis eima
رد: Make your own story
Icon-flowers0HelloAzuma icon152i realy like your idea and i realy like story but i so bad in write themIcon55 icon77but will try to write somthing here soon see you
Hi my dear friends, I reverted again with secound part of story of my sis Azuma, If there are any mistake please tell me to correct it, see you... .................................................. .................................................. ...................... when Mai opened the window she heared a voice, it is like voice of owl, and when she looking to the sky she saw big bird flying, it is seems far from she, Mai see the owl is wise of animals, Mai's father was a farmer, he has a farm and there are some mice bother her father, Mai thinked and saw that this owl can help her father without he feel, this owl eat this mice and it is its food but the problem is how can Mai make owl come or make it live near from his father's farm for help him to kill these mice..............continue
10-03-2009, 02:00 AM
kyto kid
رد: Make your own story
icon28hey Azuma sorry i was late coaf was faster than me so i cant add my one now but i will try to think about a new one to complete coaf writing
but here is my old one any way
When she opened the window nice wind blow on her moving her long hair Activating each part of her body she really at that time wished that this moment to be immortal as decribing this scene to her was more than incredible . While enjoying this beautiful scene Mai saw something that disturb her enjoy like a falling fly disturb a glass of milk ,she saw… hey Azuma why dont you put this nice topic in separate one Icon55 and i hope you like my share Icon59
hey Assasin there is aTopic like Azuma topic and it belongs to me haha so could you delete mine please coz ithink there is mistake
10-03-2009, 05:01 AM
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رد: Make your own story
Hi there everyoneeh_s7 Yes Yes that's what i want icon088 be active like that Eima - coaf - kyto thanks for sharing me coaf - kyto i love what you added you tooicon102 a pleasure to have some parts written by youicon159
............................................. The supervisor: what do you think ?? is it more sutible to put kyto's part first and then coaf coz as i see , the problem began when she wanted a way to call the owl in coaf part??
10-03-2009, 10:16 AM
the Assassin
رد: Make your own story
SO, the story is on now but tbh, i prefer kyto's part to be number two so .. we will do some kinda changes I'll write my own so BEHOLD
10-03-2009, 10:21 AM
the Assassin
رد: Make your own story
i got an idea but first i need to ask u azuma - chan how many chapters should be made .... another thing, is it ok to orginize everything after we finlize the story ^^" like we gather our parts and put them on the first page ~ ^^"
10-03-2009, 01:03 PM
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رد: Make your own story
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin
i got an idea
but first i need to ask u azuma - chan how many chapters should be made .... another thing, is it ok to orginize everything after we finlize the story ^^" like we gather our parts and put them on the first page ~
^^"
i do not know what is the chapter?? i mean ; is each part we put called chapter???
about the organization , i wanted to ask you so Yes like kyto's story ... but i do not know how???
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12-03-2009, 01:53 PM
kyto kid
رد: Make your own story
hey Azuma back again i put a part of the sory match with coaf part if you want to add coaf part
Mai tried to feed the owl however it was a mean way but she decided to do any thing for her father sake so she bought some hamesters that used in experiment and put each night one of them at the edge of her window putting it in a cage and everynight the owl land and eat the hamester and the owl used every day to come at the same time to eat its own food
One night Mai opened the window during night but there was no hamester to owl to be fed however the owl when it saw Mai it flied to her and entered her room ,Mai become delighted for becoming a friend of the owl so she could help her father but always “the quiet -the calm-come before the storm” as ……………to be continued from you dear members
i hope you like it and really hope everybody to shre us in make continuation
for the story
mmmmmm i want to ask is this will be one story or we could make another when we finished this one thumbsup-Icon
13-03-2009, 07:14 PM
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رد: Make your own story
Kyto how are you?? the part you added is pretty goodIcon-clab0 so you stopped at the point where the owl and Mai becoms friends ...^^
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mmmmmm i want to ask is this will be one story or we could make another when we finished this one
you are really active member and you deserv a big star ^^Ic-Graduate0
actually when we finish this one we can vote for someone els to start another one and the story goes on ..................... and if you ask me about the chapters , i do not know how long this story will continue , because as i see , it depends on the number of the parts added by different members as they are the story makers .............
Thank you soo much ^^ kyto and i am waiting for the assassin to arrange these parts
see you
14-03-2009, 03:10 AM
kyto kid
رد: Make your own story
hi Azuma again thanks i am fine and ok i agree to make many stories by your way ,,it is really good:)
and thanks for your words of course all thanks to you by your brilliant idea and wait for Assasin to organize it
see you
15-03-2009, 09:52 PM
Schwert
رد: Make your own story
welcome my mates and my friends, how are u, I come with new part for story and wish it is good, nice add-on my friend Kyto Kid now I eke your part, my sis Azuma why I donot see ur add-on to the story mmmmmm this is point upon you^_^ I certain that u will put new part soon, now read this part from story>> .................................................. .....
[frame="5 60"]when the owl saw that it is always find food there it became come there for eat this hamister & became donn't worry from mai because it is always see her and mai can come to it without flying & can touch it too, mai felt happly because the owl became her friend and she felt that the problem of mice will finish because the owl became come to here always and it is see the farm always and certainly it is will find the mice there and come to eat it, the farm was near from mai's house until she can see it from her window, after week when mai and her family eat the food of dinner mai said"My father how are the farm how are ur work does the mice bother u until now" hers father smile and said" Oh my daughter I will say that now I saw that the mice is less than 2 week ago, I am not see its spoors on the implant and this is really delighted me but I don't know what is the cause behind that, anyway this is good" mai felt happly when she heard that and saw that this good point in her life she will to be happy always when she remember it...............continue[/frame]
[frame="5 60"]when the owl saw that it is always find food there it became come there for eat this hamister & became donn't worry from mai because it is always see her and mai can come to it without flying & can touch it too, mai felt happly because the owl became her friend and she felt that the problem of mice will finish because the owl became come to here always and it is see the farm always and certainly it is will find the mice there and come to eat it, the farm was near from mai's house until she can see it from her window, after week when mai and her family eat the food of dinner mai said"My father how are the farm how are ur work does the mice bother u until now" hers father smile and said" Oh my daughter I will say that now I saw that the mice is less than 2 week ago, I am not see its spoors on the implant and this is really delighted me but I don't know what is the cause behind that, anyway this is good" mai felt happly when she heard that and saw that this good point in her life she will to be happy always when she remember it...............continue[/frame]
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when the owl flew back .. Mai was a bit sad, cos she felt
Some kind of loneliness, and grief
she got back to her tiny room, where she saw the sparkle moon
staring at her,
Mai seeped tears, sorrow in everywhere, no one can hear
Her tears. Pain reflected upon her face, and even if there
Is happiness, she would force to get a little or a moment
Of it.
The clock is still ticking .. and the sound of breeze can be
Sensed from every where, scary, but lovely..
[justify]
- Take it easy little princess.. Strange voice came out of the closet
- ….. Mai remained constant
- Who are you – Frightened Mai asked
- I’m A little fairy, who sent to draw a smile upon your face .. said the voice
^ ^......I didn't had time to congratulate you Azuma.....for opening this topic....sorry .................................................. .................................................. ......................................
.....Ok
......After mai heard the strange voice coming out of the closet ......She got up.....scared and frightened .....Walked slowly to the closet............And....opened it .....Then, out of the dark......a small glow was coming out .....She looked carefuly at it....and she saw .....A beautiful fairy flying out of the closet .....With her sparkling.....star like coming out of her back ....Don't be scared my princess....said the fairy ....Mai staring at her....with nothing to say .....The fairy took out her magic wand .....And said the magic words .....Suddenly the two vanished into Thin Air ..............................
.....And thats my part ^ ^.....I hope you like it
20-03-2009, 06:07 PM
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رد: Make your own story
Hi black fox very beautiful ... the part you added but you did not even give us a chance to judge you your language is perfect Mashallah ^^ i hope you participate always and i will come with my part ^^
Suddenly , Mia opened her eyes where am I ? she said , trying to remember what happened , with great effort she remember that fairy and the connversation between them ,
as everyone should do she , she stated to check the place around her , what surprised her is that the whole place is completely empty except a dark angle there
she looked around to find the fairy staring at her , with a face which is totally ready to explain , What's that ? said Mia " It's your heart "said the fairy with a cold expression " how come! " said Mai with widly open eyes.... looking amazed ...moving her sight everywhere... could'nt believe what is hepening so far ...
"Yes dear it is " said the fairy moving her face to the area where Mai was focusing on
"Dark angle, what's all that about , how could it be!! and why ... i have never hate or done something that bad to turne my heart into that dark colore.... i always care for others and love them...." Mai dicared loudly
the fairy was listening with nothing to say while Mai was impatiently waiting for the answer...
" dear... you always like that ... help others .,still no one around could know about what you really intend to by what you do for others ... your heart is wondering too , it was beating lively ..it was colorful ..and there was no dark parts of it .. but , when it found the answer ...it became that heart with no life at all .."
the fairy was talking seriously with Mai looking down as if she realize what the fairy wanted to say ....
" it's your selfishness.... you were doing all that for yourself and nothing else.... you have never done somthing for others ... it was for yourself .. your intentions were'nt honest enough to revive your dead heart again... others never thought about your ways of thinking when you give a hand "
...... Mai sarted to think ..to remember ..each time she did a help.. for what and whom.. .when she helped her father lasttime
"prencess...your heart has sent me asking you to get that delighted beating heart back to bring colors to that black spot again"
...said the fairy cutting Mai's thoughts...
with no awareness Mai raised her hand slowly toward that bright fairy and........
