hello everyone

this is another story from the same old file

haha
it's short becuz it was suposed to be a composition
okay
it's not as good as he first one though
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so here we go

The Empty House

Once there was a man who bought a new house in the country and wanted to live there with his dog. The house next to his was a big empty house that looked very old.

One day he didn't find his dog, so he went out looking for him. While he was looking he suddenly heard it's barking. It was coming out of the empty house. He walked to the house. When he got there, he started looking for the dog. at last he found him in the library. His dog looked different. He tried to take it back with him but the dog wouldn't. the man suddenly heard a voice, but there wasn't anyone besides him in the house. He was frightened. He ran out and everyday he tried to take the dog home.

One day the dog was again in the library. the man looked at the books. they were all covered in dust except for ONE at that moment the dog jumped and threw the book down. the man took the book and opened it. He read a story of a man who lived alone in this house, but the man was killed and nobody knew he died. his body was found long after he died. the book says his spirit stayed at the house looking fo it's killer. the man closed the book because his dog barked. he looked at it. He saw a face of a man on the dog's face. he threw the book at it, screamed and ran away. He was frightened. He left his house at the same time and never came back.
since that day nobody visited the house and people say the dog lived there FOREVER!.





so what do you think? is it good




I'm waiting for your comments




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