The Assassin
no.. no no no ... i can't believe my eyes
i sware of god .. it's the best comment'v caught my eyes ever
u know wht ? u just have the talent to make others happy
ur special words and brilliant replays
donno what to say, but thanks


that what awsem
i really can't find the word which give u my real feeling rightnow
i'm not wonder how did u do it ..
cuz i know u r the master
but
how was the idea created in ur mind
i ain't no master, but i was only trying to make something anyway, the idea was created by making the "past version" of
your topic, cuz' u wrote your topic in present tense and i tried to make the past, i was struggling with the rhyme though,
but i hope it was good enough

as if u'd lived the experiance with me !!.. and know every tiny detales
u just made it in another shiny show
i used your rhyme, and used your details to create the past version, i added some but the full pictuer was taken from you
so yours was the brilliant one as i said, and consedring that this is your first try "rhyming" i really raise my hat to your talent


although .. it's not fair to put mine beside yours
cuz it's a known result challenge

but i know .. u didn't mean it
i didn't mean to make a comparison, but saying its not fair is not acceptable. you have a talent and everyone praised your topic
and the way you made your lines was stupendous, i did mine to make a full picture of past and present, you can say its one way trip, so comparing mine with yours isn't the object, what matters most is how the full picture can be recognized through the audience


sure
i'm
^_*
it's a big proud for me .. to have such a nice comment like that
u just ... made me fall in love with poems
i thank u over millions ... sir
Parise be to Allah, i hope i was helpful to you, and all i have to say is just believe in yourself, you have the talent, and you have the knowledge, just keep writing poems and other stuff, but try not to force yourself, just write, and the words will seep as a waterfall, then re-read again and see the full picture, once its been created - publish it and see the feedback. fyi, don't wait people to praise your work, once your are fully satisfied then people will recognize you, but if you excpect all people to agree that your topic is like no other then i guarantee that you'll stop at one point and you'll fail to make any progress - anyway its easy to manipulate words while ryhming, so try always to use new way of writing and read poems and memorize them, then you'll see a brilliant progress showed up


Anyway, brilliat first try sis, hope that won't stop, just keep writing ^_^d