Akaz Takashi (قصة من تأليفي)

[Keiru]

Hi its the first time I try to write a story and i would be glad to hear your comments
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ONE DAY in Japan at 11 pm 5th of september 1992 a new girl was born in the takashi family her name was akaz takashi her mom and dad knew that one day she would make a difference in the world. When she turned four she didnt like to play with dolls she spent more time practicing with her father practicing ninja skills he got the black belt and all she also called himthe ninja master and by the way she took the yellow belt and thats a realy good start!Akaz's father was from the FBI but he had different battle styles what i mean by different battle styles is that hes not a real FBI and he didnt work for anyone but he did work for people's sake he was known as the red dragon. No one knew who he realy was but they knew that when things get to be bad the red dragon is always their to help them.Policemen didn't realy
like him they felt that they were ignored by people & thats why they tried to capture him and put him to jail,but they couldn't because his motor cycle was way too fast, also because of his mask and uniform so they didnt know who he realy was.Akaz's brother was the ice tiger, but the only one that knew that he is the ice tiger was her father. akaz didn't even know that she had a brother she thought that she was an only child. Her father was dure that one day she would turn to be like him and her brother, but the question was when. She should pass some kind of test, she should be qualified to do this thing,& to pass the test she should take the black belt in ninja, or defeat her father in a ninja battle, or know about her brother, or father. When she turned six she was so mysterious, she also didn't have friends not because nobody liked her its because that she liked lonelyness, and she felt that their babies talking about silly. One day, at night when her mom, and dad were sleeping she heard some noise downstairs she wasn't afraid at all she just went downstairs, and took a look she found ten men putting motion alarms in her house she was horrifried, but she said "no fear" in her heart, and took a little screwdriver wich she calls a weapon, and stabbed one of them in the neckthe man wich she stabbed screamed calling for help whenher father heard the noise, and came down running seeing blood on his daughter he came, and hugged Akaz saying "dont worry daddy is here everything is going to be alright". then a man from the nine men left came, and said "there you are red dragon" Akaz looked at her father quickly in a look that says why didn't you tell me, when the guy saw the look on akaz's face he said "oops sorry I guess now you have nothing to hide"






now what do you think Akaz would do would she run away or would she appreciate that her father kept this secret from her to make her safe?


......TO BE CONTINUED