as i see ,,, you are living out of your home land

and this is the hardest thing for you ,,






oh really wonderful.....

this is so much beautiful thing

you know ... your poem is distinguished by that it has a lot of feelings



your feeling of having homesickness....



your feeling toward your niece by the time you become uncle

which reflects your joyful of having a new born niece

and how much you wish to meet her ..............



your feelings also of sadness that you did not attend her birth day party ......






i like your poem

it's awosem..

and this is the part that i liked the most



Cherishin' you
that's what I must do
to see your tiny little beautiful smile
sayin' unckle



very beautiful

and thank you so much

wish you good luck

and to be delighted by seeing your lovely niece's face







it was an honor to be the first one to comment

best wishes

Azuma