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    الصورة الرمزية أسمـــاء

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin مشاهدة المشاركة
    HEY FOLKS


    its been an ages since i wrote
    somthing around here..
    and tbh, i'm on fire to share
    you this brand new poem
    ...
    so be ready
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    My topic is all about wondering
    ..
    i was having some kinda Qustions
    which run deep inside me!
    and i didn't got any answer to them
    so .. share me the pain


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    Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
    while dudes around calling u insane


    Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
    While dudes around say u're wrong
    ..

    Is it hard to go beyond your imagination?
    While u feel the pleasent of ur collaboration ..


    Is it hard to move up from the same place?
    While you have cried from the same face..


    Is it hard to feel that you will achieve something
    While you feel the power deep inside running..


    Is it hard to be some kinda hero,
    while you were having some kinda sorrow


    Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
    While every one around looks at u gladly


    Is it hard to ask, and wait for some answers
    While the waiting is killing u like a cancer


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    I'm waitin u
    so don't leave
    me alone
    i need those answers





    you know ... brother your words are full of honest feelings
    they really touche a suffering deppressed heart like mine now
    i know ... some times you feel like you are something great big...
    you feel like you're proud of yourself but, there must be pain
    it is the nature of mankind... tears...is there a humanbeing who doesn't cried ever??
    i think this what distiguishs us from other creaturs
    and it is a blessing that we may get rid of not all but some sorrow by seeping tears
    ....................................

    you are wondering and asking difficult questions that i do not know their answers either
    but ... i am not sure .. ..this is what i can say

    Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
    while dudes around calling u insane


    Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
    While dudes around say u're wrong
    ....................

    am sorry .. but .. yes it is somewhat hard
    No.. if you go deep and think of it you will find it so hard

    people used to unerstimate others whom they do not know
    people used to rpeat the same talk without even giving themselves a chance to think what they are babbling about

    i have something to say
    is it hard to keep telling yourself you are a good dude
    is it hard to wipe your tears and smile again when you remember something called Hope
    is it hard to try your best and show others who is the insane
    is it hard to cry sying i can do it
    ...........................

    i believe in something called challenging yourself
    it is embarissing to talk about myself
    but ,truly i have tried this thing
    you might hate yourself
    you might feel that you'r not gonna do any thing
    if you take other's disdain seriously
    am saying that it is hard at first, but gradually you will find it easy
    you would face difficulities to pass all that
    however you will pass it after all
    i am sure
    just
    give yourself a possitive view
    ................

    your poem is so brilliant
    and your feelings showed has been exactly understood and remind us of something called pain , but, after long time, when you remember that old pain , you would think of it as a pain mixed with the sweetness of your strength and ability to pass it away

    i have alot to say about pain that i may get out of the main theme
    ...................
    a pleasure to meet you with a new interesting poem
    and i warn you if you stopped writing them

    Thanks brother ^^
    Azuma
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة أسمـــاء ; 15-4-2009 الساعة 04:06 AM

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