المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin
HEY FOLKS
its been an ages since i wrote
somthing around here..
and tbh, i'm on fire to share
you this brand new poem
...
so be ready
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My topic is all about wondering
..
i was having some kinda Qustions
which run deep inside me!
and i didn't got any answer to them
so .. share me the pain
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● ||●||● ●° I Wonder °● ●||●||●
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Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
while dudes around calling u insane
Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
While dudes around say u're wrong
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Is it hard to go beyond your imagination?
While u feel the pleasent of ur collaboration ..
Is it hard to move up from the same place?
While you have cried from the same face..
Is it hard to feel that you will achieve something
While you feel the power deep inside running..
Is it hard to be some kinda hero,
while you were having some kinda sorrow
Is it hard to sit down and cry loudly
While every one around looks at u gladly
Is it hard to ask, and wait for some answers
While the waiting is killing u like a cancer
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I'm waitin u
so don't leave
me alone
i need those answers
you know ... brother your words are full of honest feelings
they really touche a suffering deppressed heart like mine now
i know ... some times you feel like you are something great big...
you feel like you're proud of yourself but, there must be pain
it is the nature of mankind... tears...is there a humanbeing who doesn't cried ever??
i think this what distiguishs us from other creaturs
and it is a blessing that we may get rid of not all but some sorrow by seeping tears
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you are wondering and asking difficult questions that i do not know their answers either
but ... i am not sure .. ..this is what i can say
Is it hard to draw a shiny smile again
while dudes around calling u insane
Is it hard to say that i'm still strong?
While dudes around say u're wrong
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am sorry .. but .. yes it is somewhat hard
No.. if you go deep and think of it you will find it so hard
people used to unerstimate others whom they do not know
people used to rpeat the same talk without even giving themselves a chance to think what they are babbling about
i have something to say
is it hard to keep telling yourself you are a good dude
is it hard to wipe your tears and smile again when you remember something called Hope
is it hard to try your best and show others who is the insane
is it hard to cry sying i can do it
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i believe in something called challenging yourself
it is embarissing to talk about myself
but ,truly i have tried this thing
you might hate yourself
you might feel that you'r not gonna do any thing
if you take other's disdain seriously
am saying that it is hard at first, but gradually you will find it easy
you would face difficulities to pass all that
however you will pass it after all
i am sure
just
give yourself a possitive view
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your poem is so brilliant
and your feelings showed has been exactly understood and remind us of something called pain , but, after long time, when you remember that old pain , you would think of it as a pain mixed with the sweetness of your strength and ability to pass it away
i have alot to say about pain that i may get out of the main theme
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a pleasure to meet you with a new interesting poem
and i warn you if you stopped writing them
Thanks brother ^^
Azuma
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