My sentence will be::
evryne can gte the chance to gte their truobles sloved
Good luck
My sentence will be::
evryne can gte the chance to gte their truobles sloved
Good luck
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Hi.. =)
"evryne can gte the chance to gte their truobles sloved"
The Correction:
Everyone can get the chance to get their troubles solved.
The Sentence:
"The good life is enspired buy love and giuded buy nowlegde."
Goodluck! =D
The good life is enspired buy love and giuded buy nowlegde."
correction: the good life is inspired by love and guided by knowledge
Sentence: befor righting an esay u shold deside wat topic u will right abot
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Sentence: befor righting an esay u shold deside wat topic u will right abot
The Correction: Before writing an easy, you should decide what topic you will write about.
The Sentence: plying gems at exums days wont be usful
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة ~| yostina |~ ; 22-7-2009 الساعة 01:42 PM
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plying gems at exums days wont be usful
the correctoin:playing games at exams days wont be useful
mine
profet mohamd piece by apon him is the massanger of eslam
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just small comment in this sentence
befor righting an esay u shold deside wat topic u will right abot
I believe that the correction is:
Befor writting an essay you should decide what topic you will write about.
I'm new I dont know the rules
^^"
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GiN CoDe
u r supposed 2 write a new sentence once u've corrected the previous 1
okay?
i will write the new sentence :
x
so as the dragon was approaching the night had no option but 2 yield his sword in order to save
princess veronoliska
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so as the dragon was approaching the night had no option but 2 yield his sword in order to save
princess veronoliska
the correction is
so as the dragon was approaching the knight had no option but to yield his sword in order to save
princess veronoliska
now here is another one
remember to take permition before leaving the table
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HI
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remember to take permition before leaving the table
Remember to take the permission before leaving the table
:now mine
-I'm very bored I think somone took the excitment away-
stupid I know>>
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There are two
I'm very bored I think somone took the excitment away
someone
excitement
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where every one?
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where is your sentence??
ok
brison breek is a perfect movy
The study of rhythm, strees and pitch in speech is called prosody << good one !m
how about this
Modetion is good, don't you think ?!b
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السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته
Correction : Mediation is good .. don't you think ?!Modetion is good, don't you think ?!b
Yes I DO Think .. mmm dear brother is it strees or stress ?? I 've got confused ^^"
My Phrase :
Being gossipy is a bad habbit .. Get red of it
Best Wishes
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strees
it’s stress
Being gossipy is a bad habit .. Get red of it
my phrase
A heart atack occurs when blood flow to a sektion of heart muscle becomes blockd
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السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته
I thought that "^^
In fact it is : Being gossipy is a bad habbit .. Get rid of itBeing gossipy is a bad habit .. Get red of it
A heart attack occurs when blood flow to a section of heart muscle become blockedA heart atack occurs when blood flow to a sektion of heart muscle becomes blockd
& this process is called Ischemia by the way XD
Mine :
Tamiflu is a drug of purely commersial purposes
the name Tamiflu is correct
Best Wishes
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In fact it is : Being gossipy is a bad habbit .. Get rid of itMistakes
but
habit without Duplication bb
& this process is called Ischemia by the way XDand
ischemia
a restriction in blood supply, generally due to factors in the blood vessels, with resultant
damage or dysfunction of tissue
is a process similar to a heart attack. In general
Heart attack is the ischemia of the heart caused by similar process. Another major process for ischemic stroke may be due to an embolism
Tamiflu is a drug of purely commersial purposes
Tamiflu is a drug of purely commercial purposes
min
The major limtation for using these medcations is time
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السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته
Sorry kind Sister "^^ it it a mistake of me .. ( I even didn't colour it )habit without Duplication bb
And THANKS A LOT for the explanation
The major limitation for using these medication is timeThe major limtation for using these medcations is time
My Turn :
Try to warm yourself in winter as much as you can , cold could be reserved in your bones , you will regrit it later
I have 2 little inquiries :
1 - could I put more than 1 mistake ?? & up to .. ??
2 - could I mistake in grammer also ??
Best Wishes
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