Hi,
Ohh, it really is a nice topic..
I liked it, but I've found some mistakes on it..
Such as :
First : And Whenever A Problems Faces You
Correct : And Whenever Problems Face You
Because : the " problems " are plural.. so we don't put " S" in the verb & "A" before the word
we can see that in here "And Face Everythings That Stands On Your Way" as well..
The correct sentence is And Face Everythings That Stand On Your Way )
but if you don't want removing the "S" you must to let the noun a single. for example, ( And Whenever A Problem Faces You
Second : And You Might Loose Everything
Correct: AndYou Might Lose Everything
Because : the both of them are different verbs and have a different meaning
Finally, BYE I HOPE U LOKE IT
Correct : bye I hope you will like it
Because : we talk about the future that I really hope you'll like my topic but we don't know if that will happen or not
and the past tense of " Like " isn't " LOKE ", it's " Liked
By the way, your English is good. I hope my reply will help you.
Have a good time.
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